Oblitus

Sorry I held you guys up, last weeks were busy, including the goldendoodle I have to take care of. I'll try to give out my ideas as much as I can, but right now, my schedule's being a little tight. But I will check in, so don't worry.

The problem I have with the Mohjar, is that they seem an awful lot like the Makuta mixed with Zyglak and Skakdi.

 

Makuta aspects:

-Wear a suit of armor to protect vulnerable bodies

 

Zyglak aspects:

-Elemental resistance

-Hate all Matoran organizations (also; why?)

 

Skakdi aspects:

-Experimented on by Spiriah

 

See what I mean? Besides that, the name...it kind of bothers me. It doesn't seem very akin to names we have in the Bionicle universe.

 

To get my approval, it would need some serious editing.

Hmm, I didn't think about the Zyglak part. Well, I'll get to editing.

I like that idea, Belthnor, pretty cool.

Well thanks for the support. Now, just need the likes of twelve other people.

I have an idea about the custom species yesterday, so I made some notes abootu them to see if anyone likes the idea.

The Mehjor

-Originated from the Southern Islands, uniting the scare populations on the barren lands

-Advanced for being from the South(considering its a bunch of rahi)

-Found by Spiriah when he fled from Zakaz; experimented on them, similar to the Skakdi

-Purely organic; closely related to Tren Krom

-Wears bulky metal suits to contain their soft bodies

-Hates most, if not all Makuta and Mata Nui organizations

-It cannot be elementally harmed when in out of its suit

There. Just some things. I was hoping to expand on something else, but time is catching up to me.

NPCs: Spiriah, Dalu, Sentrakh, and Mazeka. Now, I'm gone until tomorrow. Just a note about next week, my particpation may be limited unless some of you are on at 12-3:00 AM Pacific Standard Time.

Hehe, the Biologist. I likey.

If you would like some help, Belthnor, I do have an old custom robot species called Cordakis, the "bringers of desolation" They could be worked into the storyline somehow, but their power levels need to be defined.

I could try to do that. But maybe change things up a bit. Wait for me in a little bit- I've got some work to do.

Gotcha. I'll get thinking right away.

Ha, yes, Now that is something I like. But where to start? I mean, there are endless possibilites.

Question: what good would I do to help you guys out? After all, it seems everyone else on staff has a purpose.

Aw, thanks! I'll accept that. This is amazing, as I have stated before, just because I have never seen anything like it.

If you are okay, Staff. Or not.

Wow. This is amazing. Too bad I won't be able to join. :/ But this looks very promising. But I wonder, could you assign each 'henchmen' to a specific island for the players? It's like being the Makuta of an island, but you aren't actually there. Rather you moderate it instead.