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  1. Just watched Pacific Rim and it was epicc... Meanwhile I also watched Kamen Rider W movie. Gotta love Kamen Rider Joker.
  2. Just rewatch The Amazing Spider-Man. Not bad for making a new origin story and creating the classic artificial web shooter. Although in my opinion, it's not as good as the Sam Raimi's version but better than Spider-Man 3.
  3. Dang, haven't watch the show for ages!!! I love the Mythbusters. Bring on the Big Boom...and Buster!!!
  4. In cinema: Iron Man 3 I mostly watch anime at home but the last movie I watched was Jackie Chan's The Myth. PS. Can't wait for Pacific Rim.
  5. Well, the novels are still ongoing though. To be honest, I prefer Asuna's character in the first arc.
  6. Review Topic here: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=9842 BIONICLE: The New Frontier Chapter 1: Freedom's Uprising (Part 1) 100,000 years ago... "All journey's must come to an end, but this time, there is a new beginning as well. There will be challenges to face and enemies to fight, but I know you will overcome. All that has gone before, my friends, has only served to give birth to this new day. Let unity, duty and destiny be your guides. Be well, be strong, care for this world and for each other. Farewell." These were the last words of the Great Spirit Mata Nui as his spirit retreated into the Kanohi Ignika or known by all as the legendary Mask of Life. 70,000 years ago... "Hurry up, Bernas. We need to hunt down all Toa as ordered by the Turaga," said a Glatorian general. "And the Toa used to be our allies," replied the Glatorian known as Bernas. "Well, the Turaga said they are our enemies now and they stole the Ignika. So hurry up, you Sloth Rat." "Yes, sir." As the two Glatorians were too busy talking, they failed to notice a figure snuck up to them and clanked their heads together, knocking them out. As he dust his hands and adjusted his Kanohi Hau, the figure checked on the cloak covering his Golden Armour. "isn't that a bit harsh, Tahu?" asked a blue armoured Toa as she emerged from her hiding spot. "At least it's better than killing them. Guess Ackar's lessons paid off," replied a grinning Tahu. "Yeah, that was his last lesson too before his..." then the Toa of Water went silent. "I know that Ackar's death must be hard for you but until now we may be the only Toa left. With the remaining Glatorians either dead or also hunting us down, I guess we are the only ones left in hope to furfil Mata Nui's wish and reteaching the Matorans about the three virtues." "How will we teach them with all these carnage? Even our cheerful brother Lewa is gone with the wind. I...just wish that the Ignika or Mata Nui himself could give us an answer." "Maybe...Maybe it's no longer our duty to teach the Matoran. Perhaps it's time for a new generation of Toa to arise in the midst of chaos. With his power, he'll unite allies to defeat this threat in order to perform his duty as a Toa and at last, fulfilling his destiny to rekindle the three virtues to the Matoran." Gali could not help but smile. "I'm surprise that my hot-headed brother could be as wise as Onua." "He may be dead, but as long as we remember him, he'll be still alive in our heart-light." "I can't believe I'm saying this, but I..." Before Gali could finish, a Thornax launcher was fired as the projectile hit the Toa of Water. As the Thornax fruit was genetically engineered, as it penetrated the armour, it released a virus capable to disintegrate its target from within. As she fell, Tahu wanted to catch her but she stopped him, fearing that the virus may infect him of he does so. Resisting the pain, she smiled at him one last time. With the final flash from her heart-light, the Toa of Water closed her eyes as her body was disintegrated, leaving her Kanohi behind. Kneeling, the Toa of Fire shed a tear. As the droplet hit the Kanohi once wore by a great Toa, Tahu clanked his fist at it. "Rest in peace, sister." As he stood up, Tahu found himself surrounded by dozens of Glatorians, lead by Wlehu. "Give up the Mask of Life, Toa, and I may make your death as painless as possible and..." Tahu interrupted the Glatorian, "and what? Get promoted for killing the last remaining Toa and retrieved the Ignika? Let me tell you something, tubby, that's not going to happen. I already handed the Ignika to an old friend and I'll make sure I'll make this party interesting," said Tahu as he revealed the Golden Armour. With his last thoughts, Tahu rushed towards the squadron of Glatorians as he was charged up with the powers of the Golden Armour. Present time... The Matoran opened his eyes and found himself floating in a dark space. Then, in a blinding flash of light, he found himself in the battlefield. Two factions were fighting against each other. The Matoran found himself in the crossfire but both factions just phased through him as if he was a ghost. Is this a war? Who are these beings? I know one of them is a Glatorian but who are they fighting against? Then, in another flash of light, the Matoran found himself facing a symbol. Two crescent shapes surrounding a circle Between them were two smaller circles. However, as the Matoran held out his hands to touch it, the symbol shattered into pieces, followed by the Noble Kiril that Turaga Krasto were wearing. Then, he found himself falling into an endless abyss. With a sharp pain on the head, the Matoran woke up from another nightmare and the fact that he had fell down from his bed...again. With a sigh, he stood up and put on his Kanohi. After checking that his equipments were properly packed up and his heart-light was flashing properly, the Matoran was ready to depart. Opening the door, the Matoran was greeted by a Ta-Matoran in an unidentified Kanohi. "Good morning, Philleus," greeted the Ta-Matoran. "Oh, good morning to you too, Rexum," replied Philleus. As the two Matoran talked to each other, they got into a chute leading to the Glatorian Arena. As the chute went on, the two witnessed the news in the telescreen. In the screen, a Kiril-wearing Turaga was holding his cane, smiling towards the citizens of Matoro. "Greetings, citizens of Matoro. It is me, your favourite Turaga Krasto. It's been long since our saviour, Toa Matoro, had saved our world from destruction and the Great Spirit Mata Nui recreated Spherus Magna. However, the 'heroes' we once worshipped, the Toa, turned out to be traitors by first breaking their Toa Code, killing Karzahni along with Tren Krom. Then, they engaged a war with us, hoping to rule us all. But luckily, your smart and handsome Turaga here assembled the Glatorian Forces and stopped the thousand-years war, ending the existence of the Toa. Still, despite being a Toa, Matoro saved us and thus, we must honour him by making this world a better place. So, why not join in the Glatorian Forces today and avoid another Nui Wars?" "Seriously, brother. That broadcast is getting way old," said an annoyed Rexum. "If so, why are we signing up for the Glatorian Forces?" asked Philleus. "Well, the last thing I remembered, you begged me to join in..." "As I LAST REMEMBERED, you are hitting on that Ga-Matoran, Lympha, so you think joining the Glatorian Forces will impress her. Then, not wanting to be alone, you begged me to join in for around...6 months." "Well, that's preposterous, Mr.Silver. And WHEN I REALLY LAST REMEMBERED, I do hit on Lympha and wanted to join in the Glatorian Forces to impress her but I did not beg you to join in. Instead, you were visited by Colonel Gresh himself, although you're a Fe-Matoran, you do not show any sign of Iron Element so he intended you to join in the Glatorian Forces so he could study more about you." "AS I REALLY REALLY LAST REMEMBERED...you're right." With the conversation over, the duo reached the Glatorian Arena, unaware that someone was watching him. "That fire-spitter is right. That Fe-Matoran could be the one," said the figure as he vanished into the air. Inside the Glatorian Arena, the two Matorans found themselves standing among many other Matorans. Then, with a salute, they were greeted by Colonel Gresh himself. The Glatorian General's eyes were blank as if his soul was no longer with him. "Welcome to the Arena, cadets. For the next few years, you'll be tested beyond your limits to see of you're qualified to be part of the Glatorian Forces. Do well, and you'll be able to serve us in honour of Matoro and Mata Nui. You fail, and it's back to civil duty you go. Now, any questions?" said the colonel. "Yes, sir. How come, there are only Matorans here. Isn't there any Agori?" asked Rexum. "Well, cadet. Since the Nui Wars, the Agori had been weakened so badly that they were no longer able to combat even a Sand Bat. So, with your stronger build, you Matorans are more capable of offence as the Agoris are now working in civil duties with an exception of a few who managed to be promoted recently. Now, shall we begin?" The Matorans' training was beyond brutal. Sessions after sessions, they were pushed beyond their limits. Soon, Philleus and Rexum were the only Matoran standing as the others were sent back into the city. "Well, I'm impressed, Matorans. Even I could not hold out this long," said Gresh with a weak smile. Suddenly, he held his head in pain. Then, his arms dropped as he stood up. His smile turned into a frown as his gaze was sinister. "Philleus, isn't it? Let me ask you one thing. If you're a Fe-Matoran, how come you fell so easy during that dodgeball session?" asked Gresh. "The truth is that I'm wondering about that myself as well," replied Philleus. "Fe-Matorans weren't supposed to be like that, instead, you swam like a Ga-Matoran, leap like a Le-Matoran, able to carve like a Po-Matoran, know so much like a Ko-Matoran, navigate your way like an Onu-Matoran and resist fire like a Ta-Matoran. You're abnormal to be a Fe-Matoran, Philleus. Possessing traits from the 6 Main Elements, that sounds like in the Phropercy ..." Before Gresh could finish, the Arena was surrounded by gust of wind. Rexum and Gresh were quickly blown away but Philleus was steady at his feet. Suddenly, he was greeted by a being. "Come with me, Philleus, if you want to know who you really are." said the being. "Who are you? That build...You are a Toa, aren't you?" asked Philleus. "You could say that. Toa Kryst at your service. Let's just say that I'm not from around here." To Be Continued...
  7. Thanks, I sorta got the idea after watching Tron:Uprising. Why wouldn't I named the city after Matoro? After all, he saved the universe. Then, a crazy Turaga have to use his name for his lust of power. Trying to create the main villain as hatable as I could.
  8. Already finished watching the entire 25 episodes. One of the best anime I ever watched along with Fullmetal Alchemist. The villain in the second season is just...extremely hatable. Wish I could kill him again if he tries anything...inappropriate again.
  9. Hello, everyone. KrystCyclone here with my very first epic story, or will it? Story page:The story page is up:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=9845 Premise: It's been 100,000 years since Spherus Magna was reformed. However, there was a great war where all the BIONICLE engaged against each other. The war had been held for centuries. This forced the Toa to abandon their codes and ethics and kill their enemies against their will. At the end, the war ended at the cost of the Toa's existence as the name was considered as a myth. However, in the city of Matoro under the tyrannical rule of Turaga Krasto, a young Matoran by the name of Pilleus will soon found his life to be changed forever as he rekindle the name of the Toa... How do you think of the story? Chapter 1 is on the way. "Toa Kryst at your service. Let's just say I'm not from around here."
  10. Chapter 1: The continuation of the Prologue When we last see our heroes, Sonius, the Toa Elipson of Stone and Sonic, is missing. The leader, Toa Kryst, went to his room and was shocked. "Hey, aren't this chapter supposed to be posted two days ago?" asked Kryst. Yes, you see, Kryst Cyclone has a lot of work to do besides this comedy. "Ask him to come here, that (beep). What's more important than us? I want a poodle with him" ??? "Erm...puddle, puggle, party, partly, parley...YES, a parley!" But Kryst Cyclone is not your enemy. You suggested a conference? "Whatever. Now with that gone, time to continue the story." Fine, maybe it's time I order that Narrator-Character-Fourth-Wall-Barrier from eBay. Anyway, when Kryst got into Sonius' room, it is a total mess. The whole room is also full of empty...erm... to avoid influences to the little ones, let's say it's "prune juice" cans. "How many times I told that stone-head not to throw-litter?" I don't know, none? "Shut up, Narrator." *sad face* "Hmm...where could he be?" "erm...Kryst? I have an idea." said Rexum, Toa of Fire and Machanics. "I mean, he could be anywhere in this island or the world, OR THE UNIVERSE." "Kryst, I have an idea." "Will someone give me an idea?" Rexum turned his hand into a giant hammer and whacked Kryst in the head. Suffered from a "boo-boo" that grow from his Kanohi even if that's impossible, Kryst seemed to calm down. "Kryst, just calm the shock up. I have an idea." said Rexum. Rexum takes his friend to a secret survaillance room which is not much of a secret since there's a big neon sign written "Secret Surcaillance Room" outside of the room. Inside, there's hundreds of televisions, recording all activities throughout the entire island. "I just have to show you last night's recordings and Sonius will be found in no time. Now let me find...uh-oh..." "erm... WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY UH-OH?" asked Kryst furiously super calmly. "I forgot to switch on the recording function since I finish constructing this room" replied Rexum, pointing at a big,red button labelled "Record". Rexum then writes a stick note so he would not forget and paste it near the button with approximately 1000 more notes he put in the past. "Rexum, can you build-construct me a giant hammer?" asked Kryst Rexum constructed another giant hammer out of his hand only for Kryst to take it and smack Rexum in the head. Rexum's head is so heavily injured that it will be censored by putting a sign written "don't look" on his face. "Anyone has another idea?" asked Kryst. "I could use my mask powers to track Sonius down," said Mahojo, Toa of Psionics and Mana. Activating her Kanohi Mahou, the Great Mask of Magic, the team is teleported to an unknown island. "This...this is Voya Nui! I thought it's sinked" said Fatrum, Toa of Water and Lightning. "Perhaps it does not in our universe," said Chilem, Toa of Ice and Shadow. "Hmm...interesting. Our client is also in Voya Nui." said Kryst. "Gimme a while, I'm still pretty exhausted from using my mask, But this island is bigger than the one in the mainstream universe. How are we going to find him?" said Mahojo. " I suggest we head to the nearest city as a start," suggested Floraus, Toa of Earth and Plantlife. Reaching the nearest city, Ze Resistance Fortress, the city is crowded with Toa and Matorans alike. "Great, how are we supposed to look-find Sonius here?" asked Kryst "Ermm...ermmm...JASON! JASON!" yelled Rexum. "This is BIONICLE, not Heavy Rain," "Look, a clubhouse," said Fatrum. On their left is a Resistance base which is attacked by the Pirakas but that is not important right now. However, on the right is a clubhouse where parties held everyday. Whoever is guarding the clubhouse is none other than Krekka. " Hey Rexum, remember the time when Krekka sweared to kill you?" asked Kryst. "Huh?" Kryst pushed Rexum in front of Krekka. "Duhh, oy, I remember you! I said that I will kill you!" said the Dark Hunter as he fired a Kanoka Disk. Dodging the disk comicaly epicly (Krekka: D'oh,I missed) , Rexum replied," Erm...never though you actually remember." *Flashback* "Hey Krekka, if I asked you to kill me, will you kill me?" "duhhh, yes, cause you are Toa and me Dark Hunter." "Then when we meet again, will you kill me?" "Duhh,yeah." "OK" As Rexum was leaving."Heh, he'll never remember." *end flashback* "What if I'm lying?" asked Rexum. "Duhh, me will still kill you," replied Krekka. "What if I tell you the truth?" "Duhh, fine. No lies." "I'm actually tricked you back then since you're dumb and dumber. Then I would try to trick you again so you could join me in conquering the Dark Hunter base and defeat Neil "The Shadowed One" O'Riley. After that, he may kill you for attempting mutany. If he does not kill you, I'll give you to Mutran for research." "Duhh, ME SAID NO LIES!!!" "what if I'm telling the truth?" "Duhh, then you won't tell me." "It happened before by Floraus" *Flashback* Floraus: KAAABOOOOMMMMM!!! Part of Xia is blown into smitereens. *End flashback* "Duhh, what if you tell lie again?" "You told me to tell you the truth." Kryst and the rest of his team used the opportunity to sneak into the clubhouse. Inside the clubhouse is Sonius, drunk from drinking too much "prune juice". "Ohh *hic* hi guys *hic*." "How do you get here which also where our client is?" asked Kryst. "Ermm..*hic* I have another *hic* hangover from last night's party *hic* I used my Suletu *hic* and read your mind *hic*." "That's...that's...genius! You are always one step ahead as always," said Kryst as he gives Sonius a brofist. "Excuse me, who are you? You are not one of...THEM,are you?" asked a Ta-Matorans with Twin Repellers. "Erm..no" "Are you our saviour? Are you...a Toa?" "Yes I'm a Toa, but the mercenary type. And does that sound familiar?" said Kryst as he thinked of the Matoran's words while looking at the boxart of "BIONICLE Heroes" while also watch the intro movie of the game. "Nah, not familiar, but why do you asked?" " Because something's up in Voya Nui." "What is it?" "It's an island which is dubbed as The Island of Doom and where the Mask of Life is found but that is not important right now. We need your assistance, Toa!" "Alright, then the Toa Elipson is at your service, Balta. Just hope you don't mind the cost." End of Chapter 1. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Words: 1090 Shoobadoobi Touch-to-Henshin!!
  11. After almost a year of absence, I'm back writing comedies. If you were wondering what happened to me, let's just say that the Malaysian equivalent of high school education is messed up. The first chapter will be a little short, introducing the characters. With no furthur delay, here it is: Merc with a KanohiCharacters:Toa Kryst: The leader of the group of mercenaries. A Toa of Air and Crystal (Airtal). A happy-go-lucky leader with an awkward sense about the BIONICLE Universe. He also seemed to oblivious to anything that could scare the living heartlight of any BIONICLE. Wields a Double Crystal Blades which can also convert into the Cyclone Joker Gun. He wears the Kanohi Kibou, The Great Mask of Hope, which allows him to enter someone's Heart Maze. (memories) Toa Rexum: Kryst's best friend. A Toa of Fire and Mechanics (Firechine). An inventor with a massive imagination and love building contraptions for fun. He could go "Fanboy Mode" whenever he sees a new machine. Although he could create any machinery out of his hands, his primary Toa Tools are a Magma Flame Sword and a Flame Launcher. He wears the Kanohi Commcine, The Great Mask of Machines, which allows him to "comunicate" with machines. Toa Fatrum: The one of the two females in the group. A Toa of Water and Lightning(Aquaning). The tough one among the two females but could not resist cute Rahis. Sensitive about her weight. Her Toa Tools are a Aqua Rapier which could convert into the AquaShock Whip and a WhataShocker Harpoon. She wears the Kanohi Arcave, The Great Mask of Data, which allows her to access any databank. Toa Chilem: A calm and observant scholar. A Toa of Ice and Shadow(Frosdow). One of the few "Twilight" Toa who could live well with his Shadow Side and secretly an assassin but has a soft side for Fatrum ("he has a crush?"). Seemed to be acrobatic although he is not a Toa of Air. He wields a pair of Hidden Blades other than a pair of GunnerBlades. He wears the Kanohi Tracum, The Great Mask of Tracking, which allows him to track his target. Toa Sonius: An easy-going party animal. A Toa of Stone and Sonic(Stonic). Loves to throw parties whenever he is left "in charge" of the Headquaters. Tries to get the ladies but failed at the end. He wields a Wall Breaker Axe and a Sound Blaster. He wears the Kanohi Suletu, the Great Mask of Telepathy, which allows him to project thoughts and read minds. PS. he's the only main character who does not wear an original Kanohi. Toa Fioraus: A nature-lover and a good friend of Chilem. A Toa of Earth and Plantlife(Tuant). Spends his free time in the garden tending to his plants or meditating. Sometimes he will have a craving to blow stuff up. He wields a Green Cutter (a sword) and a Drill Blaster. He wears the Kanohi Fastisme, The Great Mask of Fusion, allowing him to fuse two or more Rahis only if it agrees. and Toa Mahojo: A compasionate and caring rookie of the team and the other female Toa other than Fatrum. A Toa of Psionics and Mana(Psina). She developed a crush on Kryst but is too shy to say it. Despite being a Toa of Psionics, she could lift up objects heavier than the heaviest object a Pakari-wearer could lift. She wields a Mana Bow which could convert into a pair of Silver Blades or a Silver "Chakrum" (Throwing Ring). She wears the Kanohi Mahou, The Great Mask of Magic, which allows her to conjure magic spells but have to be recharged for 10 minutes after usage. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Prologue: Why do I start a comedy with random stuffs? It's a beautiful day in Centria-Nui. With the sun-shining brightly and no sign of rain clouds or a "Twihard" stempede, it seems that the Cuckaroo is ready to sing it's wake-up song. "Cucka-doodle-doooo..." Ahhh....hearing the Cuckaroo calling makes me wanna get up and going. Besides a guy who is going to college and a BZP member, I'm also a story-writer, artist..... We get it you show-off, now continue with the comedy. Fine,fine, jealous readers. As I was saying, the song of the Cuckaroo woke up everyone in Centria-Nui, telling every Toa, Turaga, Matoran..... "SHUT UP I WANT TO GOTO SLEEP!!!" With the sound of a gunshot, the unlucky Cuckaroo became roasted and shutted up, not wanting to turned from Raw to Medium-rare. Inside the Toa Elipson's base, we see Toa Rexum dropping his prototype Flame Launcher to the ground seconds before the prototype exploded, blowing half of his room into ashes but that won't stop him from his beauty nap warrior's sleep. Suddenly, the rookie, Toa Mahojo, came in. "Wakey wakey Rexum, I have eggs and bakey," said the Toa of Psina. "Five more minutes mom and I'll walk the Kardas out," said an asleep Rexum. Mischeviously, Mahojo dropped the eggs and bacons onto Rexum's face, hoping to wake him up...,Wait a minute, do BIONICLEs even have a mouth to eat and what does the eggs and baons came from? "Don't ask me or sleppyhead here. Ask Kryst." The leader of the mercenary Toa team, Toa Kryst came in. "You asked?" Blushing immediately, Mahojo quickly replied,"NONONONONO I meant Kryst Cyclone, the Kryst Cyclone who lives on Earth." "Oh and are you okay, Mahojo? I know being a rookie is hard but you have to take care of your health. Do you need asistance? Your face is burning red that your Kanohi is on fire.." "NONONONONO, I'm fine I'm fine." "okay then. Just ask the others to be in the Briefing room in 30 minutes." "Yes sir. How about..." "How about what? Oh that sleepyhead, I give you permission to do his wake-up call." "No I meant..." "?" "Never mind" "Ok then. Just do your stuff, Mahojo. And take care of yourself. Your face is redder than before. Your Kanohi is literally on fire." With that, Kryst leaves. He did not heard the loud scream that shook the world which is impossible and Mahojo's attempt to put out the fire on her Kanohi, including the duck-n-roll and the keep-on-stomping-on-the-sleeping-Toa, which failed. In the end, the fire is out in cost of Rexum's room. "Ahhh thanks mom, I always wanted a greasy bath and an ash-covered room," said the still asleep Rexum. With an evil grin (Toa with an evil grin, ugghhh..), Mahojo get into Floraus' garden, borrowing his 4000 tonnes fertilizers using her amazing strengh. She then drop it onto Rexum. Seeing that the Toa of Firechine still asleep, she lifts it up and smashed his head several times before he finally awake. Without realizing the state of his room and his greasy Kanohi, Rexum got up and walked outside, without realizing the high multiple bums which formed on his Kanohi (IMPOSSIBLEEE! WHAT WITCHERY IS THIS? BIONICLE WITH BUMS ON HIS KANOHI?!?!). In the Briefing Room, Kryst started the meeting. "okay my fellow Toa Elipson, our terms are simple: protecting Matorans and accepting any request from a total stranger because we are also mercenaries. Oh and keep true with our Creed...Er, I mean Toa Code: never kill. Plus, if we kill our enemies, this comedy would have be abandoned due to the lack of villains. ok, before we can go through our requests, where is Sonius?" Kryst looked around. He saw a now-asleep-again Rexum, a Kanohi-on-fire-again-due-to-her-constant-blushing Mahojo, Fatrum who is looking at her new Aqua Rapier (trademarked by Rexum, Toa of Fire and Machanic, Firechine), Chilem who is....... chilling out (get it?) and Floraus who is reading The Encycopedia of Plants for Dummies and Toa gardeners. Knocking on Sonius' door, Kryst was wondering of his teammate's parties, expecting him to have a hangover for the 258,687,966,275,872,987.87th time. The door just swung open. When Kryst went in, he was shocked? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- What happened to Sonius? How many times he have a hangover due to his party? What is the Toa Elipson's assignment? Find out next time.Words:688 Shoobadoobi Touch-to-Henshin!!
  12. Seriously, the guy's name is Ferd. Some of the human characters are actually my friends in reality. For example, Ferd is actually my Malay friend Muhammad Firdaus, "Ferd" is sorta his idea, since he knows I'm making a fictional series. Sorry if I confuse you.
  13. Firdaus "Ferd" Armstrong looked up, blood flowing from his wounds. Around him, people and BIONICLE alike are dying as both the human world and the BIONICLE World (more specifically Spherus Magna) are merging together due to the action of The Demon Prince Belial. The Demon Prince planned to merge both worlds together and cause utter chaos. Then, he will absorb the souls of the human race and the light of the BIONICLEs when they are at their weakest state, creating an unimaginable power that surpass even God. Currently, Nicholas N."NJ" Jackson aka Toa Kryst and Toa Lewa Nuva are fighting Belial, hoping to gain an upper hand. Ferd wished to help them but only Kryst and Lewa, who possess the 45th Seal of Solomon, can defeat Belial. Ferd has to make sure that Belial's demonic followers do not reach the stadium where most of the human survivors are hiding. Ferd looked around. At least a quarter of his force are killed or ran away. He looked around again and notice his partner, Toa Aqors, not around the area. Oh yeah, he though, She said she has to escort some survivors to the stadium. Then, at the corner of his eyes, he saw a familiar figure. Ferd stood up and walked towards the figure despite the other Toa, BIONICLE Toa or Earth Toa alike, were fighting against the demons. When he reached where the figure stood, he could not fight back the tears welling in his eyes. There stood Aqors, the same Toa of Water he partnered with, barely alive. Her armor was torn up and her Aqueous Dagger damaged beyond repair. Her heartlight was flashing rapidly, showing that her life is almost up. Suddenly, ambush! Demons got out from the shadows attacking Ferd from every corner. The worse part was Ferd was in human form. When the demons stopped their attacks, Ferd collapsed, greatly injured. As his life was flashing before his very eyes, Ferd only managed to utter a sentence," Sorry, i could not keep my promise," Then, he closed his eyes, this time for eternity. As Ferd felt as if his soul is drifted toward the light, a voice stopped him,"Wake up, Ferd. You still got a duty to perform," The voice is so familiar, it's Aqors' voice. "Remember your promise? You promise me that you will fight to see me smiling again,to protect my smile. Now it's time you protect everyone's smile. A Toa's duty, doesn't matter where he or she came from, is to protect the helpless so they could smile for another day. If you failed to perform your duty, how am I supposed to smile from The Light?" This gave Ferd strength as his soul was sent back to his body. Fighting against the pain in his body, he stood up, ready for battle once again. The demons charged towards Ferd as a shockwave stunned them. The very same shockwave came from the production of the MainFrame Driver on Ferd's abdomen. Taking the Hawk, Peacock and Condor memory Chips, he inserted them into the Driver and pressed the shutter. There were flashes as the Hawk, Peacock and Condor symbols appeared and then merged together into Ferd's chest, forming MainFrame's Central Frame. Then, there stood Toa MainFrame in Phoenix Form. In Phoenix Form, Ferd harnessed the powers from the Hawk, Peacock and Condor Memories. He could plan his next target using the Hawk Visor, fly and project energy feathers using the Peacock Torso and execute high-powered kicks using the Condor Legs. When the demons charged again, Ferd looked around, planning his next move using the Hawk Visor. then, using the Peacock Torso, energy feathers flew around, destroying most of the demons. He destroyed the remaining demons using the sharp edges provided by the Condor Legs. When the tide has changed and a huge explosion is heard, showing the defeat of Belial, Ferd cancelled his transformation, reverting back to human form. He turned back to Aqos' body, hoping to find a way to revive her but there is none. Ferd pressed his hands against her lifeless body,"Requiscat in Pace," he uttered as he turned to face a new world where he could protect the smiles of everyone, BIONICLE or human alike, as Aqos' last wish.
  14. Chapter 2 spoiler:"Aw my god, this taste so bad!!!""I know, even I, a Crystle with no taste buds could fell it.""Who wants more?""This is delecious-good."
  15. BIONICLE X Heroes Episode 1 Arc 1: The Orochi Saga Chapter 1: Fable Island, A Literal Soul Mate And A Prison Monster "Aw, sorry but we have a slight difficulties in Isle de Flames," said Henry through the phone. "Difficulties? I will send backup to your location." replied Nicholas N. "NJ" Jackson. "Err... We got everything under control. OK? OK! Bye! Alright guys, time for limbo." Then, the call is disconnected. NJ tried his best to hold his anger due to the fact that two of his most trusted friends betrayed him over a limbo competition. Suddenly, there was a bright flash of light. NJ, Lewa and Ferd shielded their eyes to protect them against the blinding flash of light. They felt their feet lifted and flew almost for eternity. When the flash of light is gone, NJ opened his eyes and saw Lewa, still shielding his eyes and shrieking like a little girl, but there were no signs of Ferd. NJ patted Lewa's shoulder to make him stop shrieking and look around. When that failed, NJ gave him a hard slap across his mask. This caused Lewa to be his normal self and NJ injured his hand due to Lewa's mask's hard surface. "NJ, we are safe-sound but, where is brother Ferd?" Suddenly, a voice spoke,"I'm right here, airhead." NJ and Lewa looked around but still no sign of Ferd. NJ felt frustrated and walked towards a lake nearby. When he looked at the lake, there was a perfect reflection of him. "I see you, NJ," spoke Ferd's voice. "But I still can't find you," replied NJ. "Weird, since when I wear your Kryst Wraist?" "But I'm wearing the Kryst Wraist. Oh boy, there is one explanation for this.." Birds suddenly flocked out as a scream is heard from afar. It remained like this until NJ and Ferd realized that the scream came from them. NJ flipped his arms comically and hysterically. "WHAT DO YOU MEAN MY SOUL IS STUCK IN YOUR BODY???" asked Ferd. "I have no idea," answered NJ " That means my body is now being at nowhere. Great, MY BODY, MY BEAUTIFUL AND AWESOME BODY, WHERE ARE YOU? HOW ARE THE LADIES GONNA NOTICE MY AWESOMENESS WHEN I AM JUST A SPIRIT!!!!" " Oh goody, visitors!" a female voice is heard. The two-in-one guy and Lewa turned around and saw a beautiful maiden. She had a curvaceous body, black hair and wore a sleveless dress. On her left arm, there is a Chinese character for "wind" marked there. "Ohh, hello hotty hot hotty who lives in Hottyville and won the Hottyville Hottiest Hotty for being the hottiest hotty as you are way hottier than any hotty," said Ferd. As Ferd is currently just a voice, the maiden looked around, scared. "Wh...who said that?" NJ walked towards and introduced himself," Hello, I'm Nicholas N.Jackson, and my little green friend there is Lewa and the voice you heard is Ferd, he's sorta a ghost who is trapped in my body. Creepy, isn't it? It's alright, when Ferd regains his body, I will..." " You don't have to tell me the details, I felt relieved now that that voice belongs to your ally. By the way, I'm Kazehime," replied the maiden. " Kazehime? If I'm not to be mistaken, that translates to Wind Princess," said Lewa. " You're half right, although I don't live up to the princess part. Come on,let me take you on a tour of Fable Island," offered Kazehime. "Fable Island? Never heard of it," said NJ. Kazehime showed a confused look,"Never heard of it? This is the most popular spot in 1900 for being the home of the 8 Serpent Priestesses and where the legendary Susanoo sealed Orochi," replied the Windy "Princess". "1900? That mean we are 200 years in the past." "Whoa, visitors from the future with a bio-mechanical being and a soul trapped in another guy's body? Ermm... hold the tour, I got errands to do. Meet me at the church later," then, she left. "That's great, but what language did the people here used?" said NJ as he looked at the signboard, written in a cryptic language. In the church, Kazehime approached two figures and explained everything related to NJ. "The Crystal Knight? Here? But he's just a myth," said the first figure. The second figure replied,"Then I supposed that Nexus and Drater are just myths too?" "OK, so 2 out of 3 foretold warriors are here but is the boy the third?" "'A boy with crystal-like features at his forehead and chest with a Crystal Bat act as a truimph card. That's what the phropercies said.The boy matched Kazehime's description." Before the first figure could argue further, there was a commotion outside of the church and Kazehime ran out to investigate. Meanwhile, NJ and co., still looking for the church, stared into the lake. "Is it possible that the church is hide-place underwater?" asked Lewa. "No, why?" replied Ferd. "We are totally lost," said NJ. At the church, a man was standing on a stage, overlooking the tourists of Fable Island. "Get off from there, Stone. We don't need a sheriff here," said one of the tourists. "This place is too corrupted and I'm here to fix that problem," replied Stone as his body structure shifted. A second later, there stood a monster with the abdomen like a prison cell. "JUSTICE WILL BE SERVED," yelled the crazed sheriff as he blasted the tourist. Each tourist he blasted will be vaporized and their souls will be trapped in prison cell abdomen."DELICOUS!!" continued Stone. Then, he saw Kazehime, leaning against a wall in fear. "You're next, cupcake." Stone shot her with his laser. Then, something seemed to block the laser from reaching to her. When Kazehime opened her eyes, there flew a Crystal Bat (Skyrax). "AH, BATS! I HATE BATS! GET AWAY FROM ME!!!" yelled Kazehime as she picked up a 2x4 plank and smashed the bat with it. "Oww, you dare to hit Krystbat!" replied the bat. When Stone the monster tried to shoot again, a beam hit him and stunned him. Then from a corner, stood NJ and Lewa. "Princess, are you alright?" asked NJ. "Wow, who's that big and ugly?" said Lewa. "Am I alright? There's a bat and I have batophobia!!" said Kazehime. "Actually, that's my partner. Lewa, take Kazehime to safety. I will handle big and ugly," As Lewa escort Kazehime to safety. NJ summoned Krystbat, who seemed unfazed by Kazehime's assault. Krystbat fixed himself onto the Krystbat Brace on NJ's right wraist. Then, The Kryst Buckle appeared around NJ's abdomen. First, NJ gained a crystal appearance. Later, in a flash, there stood Toa Kryst Cyclone Mode. "You want to kill me? See these orbs in my stomach? They are the souls of the tourists here. If you defeat me, you will kill them," said Stone as he thawed out from being stunned. "You know what I hate the most? People use the word 'justice' to his own agenda. Justice is used to protect and serve the people, not to gain whatever you want. In your case, you are just a crazy guy who used justice as an excuse to control these people, taking away their freedom. That's why I'm gonna defeat you here and now," said NJ. "Crampit, just who the heck are you?" "I'm The One Who Fights For The Freedom of All, remember that!" With that, NJ switched to Heat Mode and summoned the Heat Exerter Scythe. He sliced Stone's metallic abdomen with high temperature. The cell wall on Stone's abdomen melted and orbs of spirits flew out, restored to the relieved (and half-naked) tourists. Switching back to Cyclone Mode, NJ activated a Crystal Charge. A whirlwind blew him to the sky. Then, he gave Stone a flying kick in high velocity and cyclone forming around his legs, executing Cyclone Kick. Stone exploded and ,in human form, collapsed. As Kryst reverted back into NJ, the freed tourists cheered for NJ. "Sorry to break this up, but we are stuck here with no place to go," said Ferd. "It's OK, we have handled that, old friend," a voice boomed. As the source of the voice revealed himself, a girl revealed herself. In front of our heroes are an Malay boy with a Chinese girl.Chapter 1 End.
  16. I see, then, the new list of Kryst's Forms:Cyclone Form- windTamer Form- Monster tamingCrystal KnightCrystal King (Final)Kryst will also have power cards (only works for mostly 5 minutes)Fire- allows Kryst to use fire attacksWater- allows Kryst to use water attacksElectric- allows Kryst to use electric attacksFinale- allows Kryst to perform a finisher. The finisher is used to destroy a monster or defeat a powerful enemy. Once the finisher is performed, Kryst's transformation will be cancelled and the Omni-Kryst Belt will be recharged for an hour.Kryst can only use a power card once in a while as excessive use will cause illness, even death.Weakness: Nitrax/Kryst is extremely afraid of anything which resembles bees
  17. List of forms Nitrax (As Kryst ) use:So far he can control:Cyclone Form (air)Other Forms:(powers same as Toa)Heat Form (fire)Hydro Form (water)Gravity Form (earth)Freeze Form (ice)Assassin Form (stealth)Tamer Form (beast taming)Thunder Form (Electricity)Crystal WarriorJet Form (enhanced speed)Enhanced Forms:Vortex Form (wind, with addition power to create vortex and breathe in any place)Lava Form (fire, with addition power to turn his entire body into lava)Tsunami Form (water, with addition power to liquify his body into any form. Eg. He can liquify his hand into a water drill)Earthquake Form (earth, with addition power to create a piece of earth from thin air)Thor (electricity, with addition power to summon thunder storms and turn his body into pure electricity)Shadow (stealth, with addition power to turn his entire body into shadow)Artic Form (ice, with addition power to lower the temperature of an individual's or an object's body)Crystal King (Final)This list is confirmed
  18. Name: Nitrax/ KrystGender: MaleSpecies: CrystleAppearances: As Nitrax, he is an organic silver entity with green and black linings. As Kryst, he looks like an ordinary Toa. His armour changes appearance based on which power he chooses.Powers: Energy. As Nitrax, he can absorb a small amount of energy. He can create energy blasts. The disadvantage is that using too much of his powers will destroy him. As Kryst, Nitrax can take advantage of the Kryst System, which enable him to transform from an energy being into a Toa-like being.Weapons: As Nitrax, he does not wield a weapon. As Kryst, he wields the Kryst Saber, a sword which changes it's properties based on which form Kryst choose.Implants: The Omni-Kryst Transformation Belt, the final version of the Crystle-made Kryst System. As Cystles tend to destroy themselves for overusing their powers, the Kryst System is created to overcome that problem. The Omni-Kryst Transformation Belt is unique, as it could allow Kryst to change forms. Kryst's forms have to be controlled before it can be used in combat. So far Kryst can control Cyclone Form. If Kryst change into an uncontrolled form for some time, he will collapsed from the power.Personality: Adventurous, always ready for a challenge. During battles, he will always improvise a plan.Alignment: New Metru NuiBio: A lone ranger from the Planet Krystalite, which was destroyed when most of the Crystles are corrupted by the King. Before the planet is destroyed, the King developed the Kryst System to further his quest for galactic domination. The Kryst System was originally designed to corrupt other Crystles and enhance their abilities. Eventually, the Omni-Kryst Transformation Belt is created and forcefully implanted into Nitrax. Instead of corrupting him, Nitrax transforms into Kryst and destroy Krystalite before the King could launch his plans to seal the freedom of millions of species in the galaxy. Nitrax suspected that the King may survived and headed to Spherus Magna to dominate it. When Nitrax first landed in New Metru Nui, the citizens first thought that he is a hacker until Nitrax, as Kryst Heat Form, defeated a few mutant Rahis, which is sent by an unknown party, attacking the city. Nitrax then decided to stay in New Metru Nui and be "The One Who Fights For The Freedom of Millions"
  19. Well, in this epic there are two categories of Toa: the main BIONICLE Universe Toa and the Earth Toa. The main characters will be Nicholas N.Jackson aka Toa Kryst and Toa Lewa Nuva. The origin of the Earth Toa are from an infection from the feedback from Bellial's plan to merge both worlds. Most humans turn into bionic monsters or Bions while some transform into Toa. NJ was supposed to turn into a Bions but Krystbat manage to save him and form a contract with him: with Krystbat controlling the Bions power and NJ use Krystbat to transform into Toa Kryst.
  20. Here is the review topic for my first-ever never-ending epic, BIONICLE X Heroes. This epic is based on my drawings which are mostly BIONICLE-based.
  21. Review Topic :http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4703 BIONICLE X Heroes (Prologue) Before Judegment Day, the human world known as Earth was in danger when some humans started to transform into bionic monsters and attack the other humans. But few transformed into bionic warriors, protecting mankind and destroying the bionic monsters (called Bions) before they can cause further damage. The bionic warriors are hailed as heroes and called Toa, a word which some religious groups call them. At 21st December 2012, it was revealed that the human world was forcefully merging with the BIONICLE World, a world which the humans though exist only in a toy line, which the main mastermind behind all this being The Prince Demon Bellial. Bellial planned to use the Stonehedge on Earth and Kini-Nui on the BIONICLE World to merge both worlds first then absorb all the souls of the humans and the light from the BIONICLEs to gain power to defeat God. Just when everything seemed hopeless, a human named Nicholas N. Jackson/ Toa Kryst teamed up with the legendary Toa Lewa and managed to seal Bellial. Unfortunately, they were too late to stop Earth and the BIONICLE World from merging together and now the now immortal humans and BIONICLEs must live together in peace and harmony. To maintain the peace, guilds are built to ensure the safety of all. This is what BIONICLE X Heroes is all about. 23rd March 2100, it was a bright and sunny day at BioEarth. In a particular guild known to worldwide as StrikerX, Nicholas N. Jackson, or NJ, was looking at the bulletin board, hoping to find a job to kill his boredom when Krystbat joined in. Krystbat was originally a Rahi known as a Skyrax, a bat-like Rahi able to form a contract with anyone. NJ saved Krystbat back at 2010 from being killed by the Earth police. When NJ almost transformed into a Bions, Krystbat made a contract with NJ, with Krystbat controlling the Bions power by turning himself into a Toa Transformation Tool. That’s how Toa Kryst was born. Unknown to all his allies, NJ had a secret well hidden. “Not much request nowadays, NJ,” said the Skyrax. NJ nodded his head while Lewa and Firdaus “Ferd” Armstrong aka Toa MainFrame arrived. “Call-contact Victor, Henry and Matau. Our friend here has find-found a job-duty,” said Lewa. --------
  22. Chapter 3- Did Anyone noticed the mistake at the last chapter?Hewkii (still pink): Yeah, why were we Toa Inika at the last chapter? WAIT A MINUTE, WE WOULD HAVE USED LIGHTNINH AGAINST THOSE ZOMBIES!!OK, how do you get in here?Hewkii: Umm... Internet?Wise guy, aren't ya, Pinky ? Well I'm gonna torture ya until you tell me the answer.Hewkii: :upset:Now back to the Toa Inika Mahri, excluding Hewkii.Kongu: By the way, where is Hewkii?I kidnapped him you fools and I'm gonna torture him, MUAHAHAHAH... Bathroom?Kongu: Works for me.Matoro: Toa Mahri Kongu, can I question you about the procedure of the way you cleared out from your coffee addiction which commonly took about 3 trillion lightyears?Kongu: In English?Hahli: Like, he asked, like how ,like you got out from your, like, coffee addiction?Kongu: Real English, not "Teenage Girls Who Loves Korean Guys and Vampires Which Sparkles" English.Jaller: White man said, how you away from coffee crazy?Kongu: Nuparu?Nuparu: He meant to say was how do you got away from your coffee addiction?Kongu: Ohhh... Why don't you say so, I bought Insta-CoffeeFree from that guy.Merchant from Resident Evil 4(MRE4): Heh heh heh, thank you, stranger.Kongu: Thank you, Nuparu, you are better than the others.Jaller: D'oh!Hahli: Like, boo hoo!Matoro: i have calculated that this statement is 100% insulting.MRE4: Oh, stranger. i have something important for your mission. But I'm selling it in a high price.Matoro: I have aproximately a billion w.MRE4: Not enough cash, stranger.Hahli: Like, shopping vouchers?MRE4: I'm a merchant, not a shopper, stranger.Nuparu: My bank account have about 999,999,999,999,999...A week later..Nuparu:...999,999,999,999.99 w MRE4: Not enough cash, stranger.Jaller: I have 1000 latest Biorarries (Ferraries), 4000 Jallerginis (Lamboginis), and OVER 9000 of whatever Turaga Bean (Mr.Bean) drives.Everyone including myself and the comedy's Nikitos Nui: .....!MRE4: I said not enough cash, you stupid stranger.Jaller: :censored:MRE4: Anything ya wanna say, stranger? (Aims bazooka at Jaller's head)Jaller: http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/confusedw.gif Nothing.Kongu: Sorry but I only have leftover coffee packages with me.MRE4: Ahhh, that's perfect. Consider yourself a deal, stranger.Everyone else: http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/confusedw.gifKongu: Alright, let's see that message.A hologram of Nikitos Nui appeared, in a hot tub, with a butler serving him pizzas.NN: Ummm, hi guys. :sigh:Kongu: Is it me, or your body looks crystal-based?NN: I'm a crystal alien. It's the effect of the bath. Now you all have to pass through this terrifying beast by yourselves, since, ya'all used up my inventions.Kongu: How big is this beast?NN: Bigger than a refrigerator but smaller than a bigger refrigerator.Jaller: Figures.NN: Good luck, agents. This message will self-destruct in 10 seconds.Kongu: NUPARU!!!Nuparu: On it!Nuparu dug the message deep into the Earth, when the message explodes, only smokes pour out from the hole that he dug.Nuparu: i guess the bomb's down to earth.Hahli: So, like ,we have to go now?Kongu: No, we have to wait for Hewkii. Only Mata Nui know how long a Pink Toa will be in a toilet.Mata Nui: I don't know.Meanwhile with me, I'm taking out my chainsaw.What's the answer???Hewkii: HHHHHHEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLPPPPTHE END.HENSHIN!!
  23. Hello, BZP readers, Nikitos Nui here. I'm here to present you all a new epic. The first chapter is coming soon, the rest maybe later as my wi-fi will be down for a while. This epic hopefully will reach more than 100 chapters. The characters you read maybe humans, but their armours are inspired by BIONICLE, Hero Factory and a Japanese show called Kamen Riders.Enjoy!Now typing Chapter 1(Part 1). My current untyped storylines is Chapter 41 - 50, The Orochi Arc,
  24. Well... How to say this? It's sorta like a horror/comedy.like the Turaga/Tahu conversation.
  25. According to the Bionicle Wiki, Hydraxon does not wear a Kanohi. But in a comic, he has some sort of scanner power. So I presume that he wears an either powerless Kanohi or the Kanohi is his face
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