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Ok, I have a question before I get too into Part 3. Do you prefer more of the parts being actual story, like The Rift, Powerless, Dead Walking (and the rest of Orwik's death), etc., or like Fragments, Shkorl, etc. that don't talk about the story, just side stories? I just need to know before I plan out too many chapters, I can say now that the first two chapters of Part 3 are actual story and the third is side story, but I need this advice now so I can figure out the chapters and where they'll go.
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Look to the left, the content block is up leading to my sandbox on the BS01 which is in progress, but almost done with Lightstone information.
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For Part 3: Mask I have these titles down so far for the final part of Lightstone: 1. An Old Friend 2. A New Enemy (Note: the friend isn't the enemy) 3. The Ghost Device (this chapter doesn't go along with the whole Mask saga, but it does give incite on Klofn and the Rhyphians, like how they got to the desert island) 4. 5. 6. Nova Pt. 1 7. Nova Pt. 2 8. Nova Pt. 3 (not reffering to a Nova Blast) And that's all I have of the maximum of 20 chapters.
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From the video site I've been inspired to write like three new Doctor Who epics, though I should finish the one I started to post (if the board didn't mess with me more would be posted), they are: Memories: The Master after death ends up in Alternate Earth and begins to go after Rose after knowing of her importance to the Doctor. --: Possibly a second part to Memories with another Cyberman/Dalek War, like maybe when the Master regenerated into Saxon and was in the TARDIS for a moment in real universe time he was in Alternate Earth and Rose mistakes him as the Doctor regenerated again. ---: though they wouldn't be continued, they would possibly be one epic though. Return: Martha and the Doctor fall through a hole in the time vortex with the TARDIS and end up in Alternate Earth.
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Yes, it has now returned for Part 2: The Rift! It is now up and expect alongside Chapter 12: Sleeper tommorow a Matoro Lightstone MOC! I hope Part 2 will get as great reviews as the other Part.
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I haven't worked much recently, but quick update on a few things I'll add. 1. Mutated Gavla (moreso than set form) 2. A bit of change from the book, instead of all five Makuta heading down at once the three canister ones will and then Mutran will betray Icarax and they'll fight. 3. One of the 8 Makuta will die. 4. Ignika will use some powers not used in story, like the fact that its body is seaweed and other powers natural to the mask. And that's it for now I guess.
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Just a quick update. List of chapters: "What have I missed?" Sleeper Krause Investigation Matter of Life Dead Walking Fractures Pt.1&2 The Rift Pt.1&2 When I started today I had just gotten about four sentences of Investigation done, and during the two and a half to three hour car ride today I got to about two paragraphs into Dead Walking. And Sunday is another ride back, so I should get to Fractures, possibly the beggining of Part 2.
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Chapter 11: “What Have I missed?” “Introk, where is it?” Orwik asked. Introk, sitting across from him in a small craft made like what was made in Le-Metru, “Not much farther.” He replied. Rhylm sat next to him and Torshia sat next to Orwik in the small ship which blended in nicely to the Metru-Nui streets, it looked like a Matoran rushing somewhere. “I need something more specific.” Orwik told Introk as he rounded the corner just missing a Ta-Matoran named Aft. “Be careful!” Rhylm snapped at him. “Well you drive!” Orwik yelled back at her. “Ok, stop arguing now!” Introk yelled at them. Torshia sighed, “If Matoro were here…” “Well he’s not which means I’m leader again.” Introk told her. “It’s odd.” Rhylm said. “What?” Torshia asked. “He’s been in that coma for a month now after the fight with Excessum, and even moving our base to below Metru-Nui into an unoccupied area, we didn’t see any signs of Matoro stirring. I fear he may not awaken…” Rhylm replied. “We’ll give him another month and then take him to the Order.” Introk told them as the ship came to a stop in front of a Ta-Metru factory. “We’re here.” Orwik told them. “How do you know?” Introk asked. Orwik pointed out the window, “Enemies vehicle.” He pointed at a similar craft but the roof was open. “How do you know it was his?” Introk asked. “How many ships like this piloted by a being taller than a Matoran who have a head like a blowfish?” Orwik asked. “You raise a good point. Let’s move!” Introk told them, reached his hand down to his handgun and ran out with the others trailing behind. They ran in, turned the corner and saw their target, it was a body the size of theirs, armored with blue and purple, and its head was round and spiked, like a blowfish. It had a Matoran in its grip and a blade up to the Matoran’s head as Introk aimed at him directly and the other three circled around and took aim from the protection of walls. The being spoke in a watery voice, “Ah, Lightstone, you’re here.” He looked at Introk directly, “Ah, the warrior, former leader, now second in command. I know you haven’t been greatly active lately, mainly only with the incidents here with the Rahkshi, Muaka, Kane-Ra, and not much else. So, you’re no better than a teacher to the rookies of the team, a teacher promoted beyond his rank. Tell me, do you think you can shoot before I kill this Matoran?” Introk shook for a moment, he knew it was true, he hadn’t been terribly active recently, the last month had just been setting up base under Metru-Nui, and before that after Matoro became leader all he had really done was fight and die against Proditor and Excessum, do little against an orange Rahkshi, helped stop a Muaka, and that was about it except his brief fight with Shkorl. He shook a bit longer and lost his aim. “Now!” The being yelled and the Matoran whimpered as he knew he was going to die. A shot rang out and the being fell to the ground dead with a hole in its head and Introk looked at his gun, all six shots, the only shots he had since their ammo supplies were destroyed in the fight with Excessum, were still there. Everyone turned around and saw a white armored being standing there, a bit familiar, a bit different. They saw an old fashioned looking weapon being held in that beings hand, smoking. “So, what have I missed?” Matoro asked. And a Lightstone Matoro MOC will be up for this chapter when I begin posting.
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Should I post a preview of Part 2 Chapter 1?
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Yes, today I posted the final chapter of Lightstone, the first part anyway. Expect new chapters in a week or two for the beggining of Part 2 which picks up shortly after the finale of 1.
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Well I don't know if anyone noticed this last update the other day, but I now have the other chapters decided upon. The new list: Part 2: The Rift 1: "What have I missed?" 2: Sleeper 3: Krause 4: Investigation 5: Matter of Life 6: Death Walking 7: Fractures Pt.1 8: Fractures Pt.2 9: The Rift Pt.1 10: The Rift Pt.2 I'll let you ask two questions that I will answer based on Part 2.
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Part 2: The Rift 1: "What have I missed?" 2: 3: 4: Investigation 5: Matter of Life 6: Death Walking 7: Fractures Pt.1 8: Fractures Pt.2 9: The Rift Pt.1 10: The Rift Pt.2 I have just figured out chapters 7 and 8 of Part 2, Fractures, Pt.1 and 2. I'm sure it will need two chapters to cover, but it may only require one, but the chapter(s), Fractures, will reveal how Introk, Orwik, Torshia and Rhylm were drafted into the Order, placed onto the same squad under Introk, and then when Matoro arrived and he was placed in charge, and possibly more on Matoro's revival. That's it.
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I have decided on an epic ending to my 08 epic, read at your risk for a large spoiler... » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «Since there are multiple Order agents in Metru-Nui most of the final battle is held there. The Matoran and Turaga are sent away to Mata Nui above for protection, and the Makuta, Rahkshi, etc. all fight the Order agents positioned there, the Mahri, Hagah, and everyone still there (maybe even Kardas) and a few reinforcements since the ports, etc. are closed off by the Makuta. The Makuta are trying to take Metru Nui to control it and take some control of Mata-Nui’s condition.
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It's here.
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Some chapter names for Part 3: Mask Nova Pt.1 Nova Pt.2 Nova Pt.3 A New Enemy An Old Friend There's five chapter names for you right there, not sure which order, first chapter will probably be An Old Friend, two A New Enemy, and Nova will possibly be around eight.
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Well, this has a lot of information, but I decided to use this entry to speak about more of it. 01: unclaimed as of yet 02/03: Neo Blademan or Teebert, I have yet to hear back from Blade if he wants 02. 04/05: Kopaka 06: Laughin' Man 07: Unclaimed, though I may end up doing it 08: Me Quotes: From Teebert From Kopaka From Laughin' From me
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Well, the reason I'm calling writers here, good Bionicle writers that is, is because I have a great, epic idea for the epics forum. I'll soon be starting an epic called Legacies of the Final Battle, an 08 epic in my own way, so I got to thinking, that would be great to rewrite every year. Something I'd call Project: Legends of BIONICLE So, if you're interested, let me know for writing a year of the story in an epic, adding whatever you want (side stories, etc.). Here's a list of the years: 01: Quest for the Masks 02: Bohrok Swarms 03: Bohrok Kal/Mask of Light 04: Legends of Metru Nui 05: Web of Shadows 06: Island of Doom 07: Creeps of the Deep 08: The Final Battle (mine) Also, anyone think this is a good quote? I came up with it for the 08 epic I'm doing: “Toa, you are truly an eternal anachronism. You fight for justice, but what truly is justice? Is it only in your eyes, or in every eye, good and evil?” --Antroz Any thoughts on that quote? That is all.
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Yes, he's dead, unfortunatly. The reason I put this under the epics category is because in my Legacies of the Final Battle I had big plans for him, but want to keep the story true to the actual story, so I can't have him in the final battle. Though he will be in the first part, the Phantoka part as an agent, recruiting, etc., he won't have as big a part as I would have liked him to have...
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Well, more so of just a big update and list of chapters: Part 1: The Awakening: 0: Lightstone 1: It Begins 2: Nightmares 3: Search 4: Answers 5: Combat 6: Return 7: Shkorl 8: Powerless: Pt.1 9: Powerless: Pt.2 10: Powerless: Pt.3 Part 2: The Rift 1: "What have I missed?" 2: 3: 4: Investigation 5: Matter of Life 6: Death Walking 7: 8: 9: The Rift Pt.1 10: The Rift Pt.2 And part 3, the final part as I know, it will contain over ten chapters, and I was inspired by another series/source, I won't tell what, I will after I begin posting these chapters, but: Part 3: Mask Part 3 will contain probably around twenty chapters, most likely finish the Lightstone story, and be pretty good to do, though I'm taking some of the idea from elsewhere. These chapters should wrap up everything, Matoro's revival, the final battles of Lightstone, and the final enemies they face. I might give a hint at where I got the idea from, so ask for a clue, one clue per person.
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Another update: Current chapter: Chapter 7: Shkorl Details on the chapter: *Shkorl refers to a being, not a Rahi *The chapter will be set in present day, not an alternate universe or anything, you may think something like that from the beggining of the chapter *It will have some information on Matoro's revival Misc. Information: *After the events of the Powerless chapters Matoro's way of actions will be far different than previously *A new storyline for Part 2 (see below) Parts: *Part 1 is called "The Awakening" *Part 2 is called "The Rift" Part 2: The Rift 1: "What have I missed?" 2: 3: 4: Investigation 5: Matter of Life 6: Death Walking 7: 8: 9: The Rift Pt.1 10: The Rift Pt.2 The ones with no name have yet to be decided on, but feel free to ask questions.
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Updates on most of my epics, my newest four: Rebirth of Chaos: I'll work on at least one chapter tonight, try to post it (probably work on it while watching House MD) and do the same tommorow. It'll probably be short, maybe thirteen chapters, I've sort of lost interest in this one quickly. Legacies of the Final Battle: My 08 epic, a sort of sequal to Lost War, I have yet to start it, but I have planned for parts. I do have some air combat stuff ready, no swamp stuff yet, I'll start posting the swamp story in summer when we know more of the story and the sky part this part of the year. There will be more stuff with the Order from the Lost War epic, Order members, some Dark Hunters most likely, fighting the Makuta on other islands (Vultraz is a Ta/Shadow, so they have to be moving out and infecting most likely), teams of Order members fighting on Daxia (Botar, Umbra and Krakua will be one team), negotiations with the DH and Order, and more which I don't want to go into detail on. This will be fun. Into the Shadows: I'll post some story on it: Only six or so Toa remain alive, Taka is a Turaga with his "Council of Six", six Av Matoran who serve with him. The Toa are as of yet: Hahli, Kopaka, Krakua, Pohatu, and that's all for now. The Makuta have slaughtered the rest and are reigning darkness over the lands. This epic is planned for possibly three parts, the Toa must find a way to the Makuta's new base island, and how? Underground. They need a weapon strong enough to defeat the Makuta, and what they find is in multiple pieces... And my most anticipated epic: Lightstone: Almost done, I'm about half way done with Part 1. It took me half an hour, tired, last night to write one chapter, so that should be easy while I'm awake and ready, assuming I don't just go on the internet and look at forum's I'm on... I have the chapter names set for Part 1: 5: Combat 6: Return 7: Shkorl 8-10: Powerless Pt.1-3 I should probably start posting in a few days, maybe even tommorow or today... That's it for now, ask any questions on any epics and I'll most likely answer, even if it's something like "Who dies in Lightstone?", though I may not answer that...
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Yes, ask me questions on Lightstone and watch me not answer. But seriously, I'll answer two questions per member.
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Well, anytime I have news I'll post a new entry, but: Current chapter: I'm currently working on Chapter 4: Answers. Chapter names: Part 1: The Awakening: 0: Lightstone 1: It Begins 2: Nightmares 3: Search 4: Answers Note: 5, 6, and 7 aren't confirmed as the true names yet. 5: Combat 6: Return 7: Shkorl 8: Powerless: Pt.1 9: Powerless: Pt.2 10: Powerless: Pt.3 Parts: What I used to refer to as "Seasons" will now be "Parts", Part 1 will consist of the ten chapters listed above, Part 2 will probably also have ten chapters. So far for 2 I have: Part 2: (no title yet) 1: "What have I missed?" Tech: Yes, more technology, I would have listed in my last entry, but I just came up with the names: Cordak Defender Mk.1 Cordak Defender Mk.2 *Note: Cordak is being used instead of "Desolation", it has no relation to the six barreled explosive weapons. Misc. Information: *At least one character death in Part 1, a main character, not an enemy that only may appear once, like a one chapter enemy, like the Humanoid Kane-Ra. *At least one more death in Part 2 of a main character, like above. *More importance placed on characters I wouldn't usually use (ie. Matoran), for good and evil purposes. *The final three chapters of Part 1 are going to be great, they may make you question me, for what I'm doing in those chapters, they may not, I hope they will. *Perhaps a cameo appearance in Legacies of the Final Battle, my 08 epic which I'll post after Lightstone. *Matoro's origins will be revealed...eventually...possibly...no idea yet...even how he came back... MoC: I will most likely try to make MoCs of them at some point, I'll update when/if I do. That should be everything
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Well, first off, what Lighstone is for those who don't know. Lighstone is a short story I did, a tribute to Matoro essentially, a Torchwood spin off in the Bionicle universe. Story: It takes place about five hours after Matoro dies using the Ignika. He falls into a room, alive, his weapons still in hand. He is told his revival purpose isn't known, even to the Order, his new hosts. He is given a team and they must help the Matoran and stop threats to them, arm them against future threats, and keep out of the knowledge of Toa, and others like them. Members: Name: Position: Specialty: Mask: Tools: Other Powers Matoro: Leader: N.A.: Tryna: Twin Cutter and Cordak Blaster: Ice elemental powers Introk: Second in command: "tying up loose ends": sleek Sanok: daggers: N.A. unless I did specify something, not sure Rhylm: Third in command: getting close to people, good leader: sleek Matatu, lacks scope: katana on back (like Sasuke in Naruto Shippuden): Water elemental powers Orwik: Fourth in command: autopsies: Akaku: four foot retractable wrist blade: Earth elemental powers Torshia: Fifth in command: tech. and information: Unknown: wrist claws: Plasma powers, unconfirmed if elemental or not Species: Matoro: Toa of ice Introk: A different species, about Toa size, a bit larger Rhylm: Toa of water Orwik: Toa of earth Torshia: A different species, a member of Pridak's species possibly, about Toa size and appearance Length of Order employment: Matoro: hours Introk: thousands of years Rhlym: I believe 350 years as stated in chapter 3, I'd have to double check, to lazy to do so now Orwik: about 500 years Torshia: about as long as Introk Technology up to chapter 3 (no information given, just name): Phaser Earpiece Ship (no specific name) Revival Gauntlet Chapter Names as of yet: Chapter "0": Lightstone (chapter 0 is the short story) Chapter 1: It Begins Chapter 2: Nightmares Chapter 3: Search Chapter 4: Answers Future Chapter names: Powerless Pt.1 Powerless Pt.2 Powerless Pt.3 Seasons: I will divide it into "seasons", as first ends I will take a break from it and begin posting maybe two weeks later with "season" 2. Currently working on: Chapter 4: Answers That should be it.
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I figured I'd give a preview of my new epic: Lightstone, part of the first chapter and some other information: Chapter 1: It Begins Above the Toa, outside their knowledge, tracking down native and alien threats and protecting the Matoran. With a secret existence and skilled members they arm the Matoran against threats of the future. Now’s when everything changes and Lightstone will be there. “I’m just saying, maybe you should have let me handle it.” Introk complained to Matoro in his British voice. “Yeah, but if I had let you take that Rahkshi then too much damage would have resulted, our presence would have been known.” Matoro replied. Orwik walked behind him, carrying the frozen orange colored Rahkshi in his mighty grip. “Where should I put it?” Orwik asked, his voice deep as is the case with all who come from the Earth villages. Torshia walked in front of him and examined the Rahkshi, “Over there,” She started and pointed towards a rounded fence that went around a ledge that went down about seven feet. There were stairs on each side going down to it and a table on the center for Orwik’s autopsies and for Torshia’s jobs. “You want an autopsy?” Orwik asked as he carried it down the stairs. “No, I want to salvage the armor and put the Kraata into a stasis tube.” Torshia replied as she headed down. Introk looked at Matoro and Rhylm, “Well I guess I’ll go.” He said and turned to leave to go to his chamber off to the side. Matoro cursed under his breath for what Introk had just done. He had only been part of this group for about an hour and he was sure Introk knew how he felt about Rhylm and enjoyed seeing the Toa of Ice suffer. “I’ll go as well.” The words broke Matoro out of his focus and heard that the sweet voice was from Rhylm and she turned to leave. Matoro had nothing to say, nothing he could think of and let her go. He walked over to where Torshia and Orwik were already working on the defeated Rahkshi and saw he had no help to provide them. “Why am I here? These four know what they’re doing, I don’t, I don’t even know how I am here.” Matoro murmured to himself and turned to go to his chamber on the far side of the room which was the whole base. He entered his own small chamber; all it was was a hole in the wall with a bump coming up he had to step over. The room itself was a small bed on the left side as he entered and the rest was anything he wanted, like a table against the far wall. He sat and laid down in his bed and stared at the rock ceiling. “Why am I here? Why couldn’t the Order have just left me alone?” He wondered aloud and heard a knock on the rocks outside his door. He looked and saw Introk standing there looking down on him. “What’s wrong Matoro?” He asked. “You four all know what you’re doing; you’re all part of the Order. I’m not; I’m only a novice Toa and shouldn’t lead you four. If I would even be part of this I should be the lowest member of the group.” Matoro replied. Introk began to laugh lowly, “Matoro, you’re skill is great, you wore the Ignika, you sacrificed your life for the universe, you deserve to lead us if we would even by worthy to be led by you.” “Thanks Introk, but I don’t see it that way.” Matoro finished with a sigh and heard an alarm going off. “What is it?” He asked Introk as he gripped the doorway in his right hand. He had abandoned his blaster before going to Metru-Nui and hadn’t even glanced at is since. “Alarm, another attack somewhere.” Introk replied and the two ran across the base to the large mirror which also acted as a screen to view where they had to go. “What is it?” Rhylm asked Matoro. Again he didn’t even know she was there. She’s good at that. Matoro thought, “I don’t know, I don’t know how to read this thing.” Matoro replied. “It looks like we’re off to the island known as Stelt.” Introk said. “But for what?” Torshia asked in her somewhat exotic voice. “I have no idea how to say this, but, Humanoid Kane-Ra.” Introk replied. “‘Humanoid Kane-Ra’? What’s that?” Matoro asked. “No idea.” Introk replied as he began to run to the exit with Orwik, Torshia and Rhylm following behind him. “Coming?” Orwik asked Matoro. “Uh, yeah.” Matoro replied and ran off only making sure his Twin Cutter was attached to his wrist so he could use it later. About half or less of chapter 1, more information: old characters returning more emotional conflict, mainly between Matoro and Rhylm going deeper into character emotions "seasons", it might be broken into what you could call seasons, first season events returning for the second in a way chapter 2 will delve somewhat into Matoro and his state of mind, etc. the chapter will be called Nightmares And that's all for now, but I will continue to update sometimes for this epic.
