Tornado Posted June 11, 2013 Share Posted June 11, 2013 this is merixle people please leave comments and criticizise^click for big image^action poseweapon offmask Quote I'm back from the deadwill be posting new stuff soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Van Hohenheim Posted June 11, 2013 Share Posted June 11, 2013 q: why would you need a close-up of the mask? xD the MOC is okay...nothing really jumps out as outstanding to me Quote Previously known as Aiwendil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdaptingChaos Posted June 11, 2013 Share Posted June 11, 2013 This a pretty simple moc, although it looks like a slightly modified Toa Mahri Hahli. I do like the staff tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted June 11, 2013 Share Posted June 11, 2013 Basic Toa build MoC. Personally, it just looks like a little revamp of Hahli Mahri. To be more constructive, I will have to say the MoC as a whole is lacking. The torso has a tiny bit of protection, which probably should be replaced with better armor. The upper arms and legs are overall lacking in armor altogether. I recommend you bulk up the MoC as the whole thing just looks like Hahli Mahri with minor adjustments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanakalackin Posted June 18, 2013 Share Posted June 18, 2013 Pretty neat concept bro! The armoring looks cool, along with the weapon. It does look simple though (I should know )My suggestion would be taking these steps for future success in MOCing: 1. Find inspiration2. Form an idea3. Create a rough draft4. Build off of that5. Edit it however you wish. (Wow, MOCing is like writing.) Quote I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted June 18, 2013 Share Posted June 18, 2013 1. Find inspiration2. Form an idea3. Create a rough draft4. Build off of that5. Edit it however you wish. (Wow, MOCing is like writing.)To be quite honest, that can be reduced into two or three steps quite easily, although I tend to think of it as a flowing process of sorts, which varies and has no set designed order. But if I was breaking it down into steps:1 - Begin with inspiration or designs (if you're building with complexity) that you want to use.2 - Uh... build the MOC, basically. Yeah. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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