Mehul Posted January 5, 2014 Share Posted January 5, 2014 A sketch: Quote Link to my comic To anyone contacting me, I'm of to Uni soon so I might take time to respond. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astris Janus Posted January 5, 2014 Share Posted January 5, 2014 My Mata Nui, this is good! I'm loving the style; very organic and mechanical (exactly as it should be ), looking like it could be real while maintaining the look of pieces within the set I'm also rather impressed by the way you chose to render his name; nice and simple, very stylish though.Only criticisms would be that it'd be nice to see some more detail on the sword, the "A" in "Tahu" seems to be missing its crossbar (though that could've been intentional) and the fact that the end of "Mata" doesn't end flush with the end of "Tahu" (forgive me for nitpicking, I was in a design course and I kinda pick up on that stuff )Overall, pretty fantastic Keep it up Astris Janus Quote Right, new forum, new signature. Or, at least, a reboot.Dual Sides; An Expanded Multiverse EpicBionicle Anime: Toa Mata"If at first you don't succeed, redefine success."- Anonymous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grandmaster Lehvorak Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 This sketch has potential! I really like the concept a lot! The details are coming along really well, are you planning on inking this? Also the type-face (The title that says Tahu) could be a little bigger. Overall, nice stuff you got here! -Lehvorak Quote << LEHVORAK ZONE >> Web Design - Graphic Design - Illustration Find out more on: _ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 The thighs are my favorite part. It's very tricky to make all those components mesh and flow together, but you've pulled it off. Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitoshura Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 I like the details you put, looks nice. The thighs just don't seem to fit in with the rest of the body, like it looks un-mechanical/Bionicle piece-ish with the rest. Quote profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wazdakka Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 I adore the fusion of flesh and machine, but I think his shoulders need to be bulked out more. Quote Steam Name: Toa Hahli Mahri. Xbox Live Gamertag: Makuta. Minecraft Username: ThePoohster.Wants: 2003 Jaller (from Jaller and Gukko), Exo-Toa, Turaga Nuju, Turaga Vakama, Shadow Kraata, Axonn, Brutaka, Vezon & Fenrakk, Nocturn, ORANGE FIKOU.I got rid of my picture, are you happy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 A sketch, you say? No, this is a full-on piece of art! Like Wazdakka said, I like the combination of flesh and machine! Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehul Posted January 7, 2014 Author Share Posted January 7, 2014 Thanks for all the feedback guys! Since this was done in a random rush of bionicle nostalgia I cant say with surety that I might be doing the other toas for sure but I might. As for the name well as a design student myself I perfectly understand the nitpick and now that I see it the misalignment is atrocious! Quote Link to my comic To anyone contacting me, I'm of to Uni soon so I might take time to respond. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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