Axilus Prime Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 Title says it all. Post constructive criticism, thoughts, and discussions about the story here. Link Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 I must say Ax, this looks pretty good so far as a story. I like the structure of the it and how little details were included in at the right place to make it interesting. Hope to see more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted March 10, 2014 Author Share Posted March 10, 2014 Thanks, there's much more now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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