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Never the End: Review


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Wow! The tone is perfect so far, and I was shocked in a good way by Tumadax's outrageously gory methods of killing. Just one little thing, describing Tuma's posture as "inhuman" seemed a little out-of-setting.

( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of Time

What if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins

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