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BIONICLE Mafia XVII: Burnmad's Carnival of Death


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It's not so much my business that's causing this scene's delay, it's mostly the utter stupidity of the things with which I'm busy.

 

I'll try and post it tonight, but I make no promises.

 

- :burnmad:

You run your own business?

 

-MT

 

Yes.

He runs a funeral home.

 

naahhhhh, it's obvious man

Just look up

'Burnmad's Carnival of Death'

That's his business.

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The Sixth Installment

 

Snubby and Valendale Die

 

Carnival Day 3

 

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The suspects are brought,

 

Gathered into the main square.

 

The crowd picks out two.

 

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Snubby ascends first.

 

The hangman ties the noose tight.

 

He waits for a shot.

 

---

 

He moves like lightning,

 

Stomps, revealing a weapon,

 

Hidden in his heel.

 

---

 

He kicks hard towards

 

The target he selected

 

It flies like lightning.

 

---

 

Shadowhawk is struck.

 

The knife sinks into his chest.

 

G.O. dies, day 3.

 

---

 

"Nice boots," Snubby hears,

 

As the hangman makes them his.

 

The floor drops away.

 

---

 

Snubby's time is up.

 

A Villager turned Ninja?

 

Hanged on the third day.

 

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"Oi!" Shouts a madman.

 

"I thought Snubby wouldn't die?"

 

"Sorry," Burn replies.

 

---

 

"I'll make up for it."

 

Burn pushes Valendale up.

 

One more noose is tied.

 

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Valendale is hanged

 

Should have used his deadly gift.

 

Another G.O.

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Woah, Chro ended a sentence with a period.

 

 

- :burnmad:

I invite you to check the last several posts from me in this topic, which (though brief) were not made in enough of a rush to warrant the lack of punctuation you accuse me of.

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I target Burnmad in the parlor with the rope.

 

It is only necessary to push the "post" button once. Again, I shall stress that whether or not it shows up for you does not matter; it has shown up to the rest of us, and your connection will catch up later.

 

E: I execute the typos with oregano

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And it's time for the fourth night scene of,

Bionicle Mafia XVII.

Calmly walking along the street was Voltex, unaware of the

Danger he was in. On his trail were two angry roles,

Either of which could pose a threat to him alone.

First was the Guard, Chro and then was another

Game Operator, JAG18, one of his own comrades.

He made the mistake of turning down a dark alley, and

Immediately, the Guard turned to follow.

JAG18, however, was more clever, and looped around to the other end of it, where the

Killer waited for Voltex to run out, when he would became aware of the Guard behind him.

Laughing to himself as he heard footsteps rapidly approaching, he reached out with his

Machete, giving his fellow Game Operator, Voltex, a mortal wound on the fourth night.

Not allowing himself to be shaken by this turn of events, Chro pulled out his gun and

Ordered the murderer to stop. His words had no effect, however, and JAG18

Pushed the body into Chro as he approached, then

Quickly turned to run. He would not get far, however, before slamming

Right into a black-robed man. "Jumbo asked me to give you this oversized

Sock," he said, handing a white stocking to the killer, while simultaneously blocking Chro's shot.

There was something in it, so when he got home later that night, he

Unwisely opened it, only for it to explode, killing the Game Operator JAG18 on night 4. As Chro

Viewed the murderer running away from far up the street, the unknown interloper picked him up

With one hand. Struggle as he might, he could not escape, and when he was found, the

X-ray showed that he had been restrained and forced to breath coal dust. After less than a

Year of having a living employee, the police force was once again nonexistent. I can't think of a word that starts with

Z. Chro had been killed by the notorious ??? on the fourth night.

 

Edit: D'oh! Was about to request filler and accidentally posted this. Oh, well.

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Hmm, interesting. Was certainly not the way I expected this night to go.

 

And Blade blade blade... can we really afford to pick killers at random? We have a black robed man, and while this is merely speculation, I believe that Neo Shadowvezon more closely fits that description than I do. I mean even look at his current avatar, it is what appears to be a person with hood obscuring their face. 

 

However with chro's death I can't very well place my finger on why coal dust as the method of death, nor can i link it to anyone in particular. 

 

As such My vote goes to Neo Shadowvezon, because really the black robed man killed both Chro and Jag, even if for jag he was just delivering the 'jumbo's' whoever that is, package

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