Makuta Luroka Posted November 6, 2014 Share Posted November 6, 2014 It was rather interesting. That quote was pretty hilarious, and the fight scene was very exciting for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ehksidian Posted November 6, 2014 Share Posted November 6, 2014 Having both the Pyro and the Cryo in the same scene is cool. That pun though.And it looks like my theory on who White 13 actually is...is probably right now.yes. Quote Steam name: Ehksidian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 14, 2014 Author Share Posted November 14, 2014 Chapter 6 - White Thirteen's identity is revealed... but is it truly who it seems to be? 2 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taka Nuvia Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 (edited) More White Thirteen, and a lynching soon? Great. =DToo bad Silence is dead already, I liked the concept of a killer you never hear coming... kinda. ~~ Having both the Pyro and the Cryo in the same scene is cool. That pun though.[...] Pun was not intentional. Though I thought to keep it in, despite not finding a combination of heat- and cold-implying adjectives. (because 'blazing cool' or anything similar sounded awful XD) Edited November 14, 2014 by Fairy Paladin Quote My art collection topic - updated! (21/09/2021) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 17, 2014 Author Share Posted November 17, 2014 More White Thirteen, and a lynching soon? Great. =DToo bad Silence is dead already, I liked the concept of a killer you never hear coming... kinda. ~~ Silence & Agni are the first two canon characters to show up in this series and both die almost immediately... my track record isn't great.Anyway, CHAPTER 7 - Sumiki returns! 2 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted November 17, 2014 Share Posted November 17, 2014 WHOOAA A chapter on a day other than wednesday! That was rather unpredictable. That chapter was gripping Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 18, 2014 Author Share Posted November 18, 2014 WHOOAA A chapter on a day other than wednesday! That was rather unpredictable. That chapter was grippingI hope Chapter 8 is also to your fancy, then. I'm thinking all post a chapter every two days until the epic is complete; I want to get a move on with the final entry in the series. --- CHAPTER 8 - Voltex, TBK, Pulse, Taka Nuvia, and RG venture forth on their most dangerous mission yet. 2 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trijhak Posted November 18, 2014 Share Posted November 18, 2014 Agreed with Luroka, it's getting really gripping now. Two, three dead and one injured. Ouch. Scenario Alpha, whatever that may be, sounds intriguing. Quote On Bota Magna, everything is about to fall apart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 18, 2014 Author Share Posted November 18, 2014 Agreed with Luroka, it's getting really gripping now. Two, three dead and one injured. Ouch. Scenario Alpha, whatever that may be, sounds intriguing. Scenario Alpha was the conference. =P Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted November 18, 2014 Share Posted November 18, 2014 Definitely did not disappoint. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 18, 2014 Author Share Posted November 18, 2014 NOTE: CHAPTER 8 HAS BEEN EDITED WITH THE REMAINING CHUNK. Unless you see the bolded "to be continued" at the bottom, the entire chapter has not gone through. I've started a tracker ticket about this issue, so hopefully I'll figure out what's going on soon. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahkshi Guurahk Posted November 18, 2014 Share Posted November 18, 2014 Yay I got to die by the pyro and be confusing. Quote -Rahkshi GuurahkGENERATION 3: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.If I actually tried putting all the stuff I like on here, the sig would burst. (This banner is created by http://www.bzpower.com/board/user/59020-onaku/ ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 19, 2014 Author Share Posted November 19, 2014 Yay I got to die by the pyro and be confusing. Indeed you do.--- Chapter 9 - Ehks experiments with the Reanimator, and Voltex arranges a meeting with Xaeraz. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 22, 2014 Author Share Posted November 22, 2014 CHAPTER 10 - Project Mayhem joins forces with an unlikely ally, and the Matoran prepare for battle. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 22, 2014 Share Posted November 22, 2014 Xaeraz, you don't treat Agent 64 like a girl and get away with it. I think I may have one more target before this is over. I like this chapter. Reasons obvious, although the "I'm the new mayor of BZ-Koro" line took some cake too, and Shockwave's performance was suitably mysterious as well. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taka Nuvia Posted November 22, 2014 Share Posted November 22, 2014 You have been featured on the front page again - congratulations! =D As for the chapter, great one as always. Also, the shared lightstone-necklaces are cute in a way. As cute as "this is the only thing that keeps me/us from going completely insane" can be, anyway. Quote My art collection topic - updated! (21/09/2021) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 22, 2014 Author Share Posted November 22, 2014 Xaeraz, you don't treat Agent 64 like a girl and get away with it. I think I may have one more target before this is over. I like this chapter. Reasons obvious, although the "I'm the new mayor of BZ-Koro" line took some cake too, and Shockwave's performance was suitably mysterious as well. Shockwave is the latest hint of the next big reveal... You have been featured on the front page again - congratulations! =D As for the chapter, great one as always. Also, the shared lightstone-necklaces are cute in a way. As cute as "this is the only thing that keeps me/us from going completely insane" can be, anyway. Oh sweet! As for the necklaces, I won't deny: both Xaeraz and Voltex are now in a rather precarious pickle. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Windrider- Posted November 22, 2014 Share Posted November 22, 2014 Congrats on the feature! It's not letting me add the "Featured" tag to the story topic, for some reason, so have one for the review topic for now... 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 22, 2014 Author Share Posted November 22, 2014 Congrats on the feature! It's not letting me add the "Featured" tag to the story topic, for some reason, so have one for the review topic for now... Yeah... the story topic is like, a nesting ground for glitches. I've even had to create a tracker ticket for it. 3 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xaeraz Posted November 22, 2014 Share Posted November 22, 2014 I love our friendship necklaces, Voltex. Such a shame I'll have to reclaim yours by the end of this fiasco =) Congrats on the feature, too! 3 Quote All are not the same But three shall be as one Freedom in the flame The end has just begun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted November 22, 2014 Share Posted November 22, 2014 The friendship necklaces were definitely the best part. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 24, 2014 Author Share Posted November 24, 2014 I love our friendship necklaces, Voltex. Such a shame I'll have to reclaim yours by the end of this fiasco =) Congrats on the feature, too! Thanks! Unfortunately, I don't think that will be possible. The friendship necklaces were definitely the best part. Well obviously --- CHAPTER 11 - The survivors of the conference, Project Mayhem, and their allies battle the forces of White Ten!! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted November 24, 2014 Share Posted November 24, 2014 Wow. That was an eventful one. Spoilers in white text. As predicted, Fishers is Cryo. Totally called that, though I'm honestly disappointed. The more bad### action-Matoran we get, the better, and I'm not really happy to see that two of them are actually the same character. Not a terribly huge problem, just a slight annoyance for me. I hope Ehks' Reanimator sees some use, because so many of the major (or even slightly important) players are down. Ehks, Xaeraz, Automaton, Tyler, probably a few more I've forgotten about... I guess this means Voltex takes over Project Mayhem in addition to the BZKP, which is a good thing for the Resistance I guess. My theories about the affliction shared by Xaeraz and Voltex hasn't really been supported or denied by the events of this chapter, but I think it's pretty clear what is - was? - going on with them. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 24, 2014 Author Share Posted November 24, 2014 Wow. That was an eventful one.Spoilers in white text. (spoilers removed just to avoid, you know, yeah) Could you remind me of your theory regarding the affliction? It's not exactly huge spoilers for me to reveal exactly what it was if you're incorrect, but if you are correct, it will save me having to explain. As for the identity of the Cryo... sorry you feel that way. =P Don't worry, though - we'll see more Matoran like that in the sequel. And as for major characters that are dead... the epilogue will explain how they shall be showing up again. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted November 24, 2014 Share Posted November 24, 2014 (edited) Oh, I know how they'll be showing up. Something tells me you haven't checked Skype, because I've been having a one-sided conversation about the Red Star... Voltex received this from Luroka, as we saw in Book 1; Xaeraz was experimented on and given the same shadow-infection-whatever while in captivity of the WC. It's some sort of antidermis-related thing which basically instills intense rage and bloodlust, which subsides when you, uh, rip people apart. Or if you wear a magic lightstone thingy. I'd also guess that the affliction worsens significantly over time because Xaeraz has far more difficulty controlling himself than Voltex does. It's not really a complex theory at all, basically compiled from things we've seen Xaeraz and Voltex do. I'm probably forgetting some of it, I'll have to go back and reread to flesh the theory out. Edited November 24, 2014 by Chro Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 24, 2014 Author Share Posted November 24, 2014 Oh, I know how they'll be showing up. Something tells me you haven't checked Skype, because I've been having a one-sided conversation about the Red Star... Voltex received this from Luroka, as we saw in Book 1; Xaeraz was experimented on and given the same shadow-infection-whatever while in captivity of the WC. It's some sort of antidermis-related thing which basically instills intense rage and bloodlust, which subsides when you, uh, rip people apart. Or if you wear a magic lightstone thingy. I'd also guess that the affliction worsens significantly over time because Xaeraz has far more difficulty controlling himself than Voltex does. It's not really a complex theory at all, basically compiled from things we've seen Xaeraz and Voltex do. I'm probably forgetting some of it, I'll have to go back and reread to flesh the theory out. Yeah, I'm never on Skype. Steam is the better way to contact me. As for the affliction, you're mostly right; it's basically shadow energies that have been specifically engineered to drive the victim mad, instilling the rage and bloodlust. However, it subsides merely at the sight of blood. The lightstones are infused with light energies, which combat the shadow energies and allow the victim to operate normally. However, the lightstones are sort of like a really addictive drug; if you're cut off from it all of a sudden, you're going to have serious withdrawal (in this case, the victim's mind is basically instantly torn to shreds). You're also correct in that it worsens with time; while Voltex has barely been affected for a week at this point, Xaeraz has been dealing with it for years. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 25, 2014 Author Share Posted November 25, 2014 And of course, last but not least... the EPILOGUE Burnmad leads the army to BZ-Koro, Voltex meets some old friends (and enemies), Agent 64 meets with Control, and as for our final character... they trek down a dark road indeed. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ehksidian Posted November 25, 2014 Share Posted November 25, 2014 Oh boyI cannot wait until Book 3 now. This is going to be fun. Quote Steam name: Ehksidian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Portalfig Posted November 25, 2014 Share Posted November 25, 2014 hooo boy howdy. Pretty excited, yo. (also, unless I missed something, I didn't die. That is nice.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted November 25, 2014 Share Posted November 25, 2014 Another amazing story! Book 3 is gonna be a killer! Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 26, 2014 Share Posted November 26, 2014 Oh gee. Called the Cryo thing too. Ehks is White Thirteen? Way to keep things interesting. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahkshi Guurahk Posted November 28, 2014 Share Posted November 28, 2014 That plot twist (Can that be called a plot twist?) though.Can't wait until Book 3! =D Quote -Rahkshi GuurahkGENERATION 3: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.If I actually tried putting all the stuff I like on here, the sig would burst. (This banner is created by http://www.bzpower.com/board/user/59020-onaku/ ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 29, 2014 Author Share Posted November 29, 2014 Oh boyI cannot wait until Book 3 now. This is going to be fun. You have no idea how much I was laughing when I was asking you about which scene I should end it off on, knowing that you had no clue which character I was talking about. hooo boy howdy. Pretty excited, yo. (also, unless I missed something, I didn't die. That is nice.) Nope, you're still alive! For now, at any rate. Since the next one is the final installment, we have truly reached the "anybody can die" scenario. Another amazing story! Book 3 is gonna be a killer! Literally killer. So many deaths. Oh gee. Called the Cryo thing too. Ehks is White Thirteen? Way to keep things interesting. Many people seem disappointed that your character was the Cryo. I guess it's because there are less bad*** characters, but at the same time I think that's a good thing? Too many powerful characters and things get a little too ridiculous. That plot twist (Can that be called a plot twist?) though.Can't wait until Book 3! =D I'm unsure of whether it would be a plot twist, although since one of our major protagonists has just gone bad, I think it maybe can be considered that, yes. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ehksidian Posted November 29, 2014 Share Posted November 29, 2014 Oh gee. Called the Cryo thing too. Ehks is White Thirteen? Way to keep things interesting. Is it bad that I figured out the spoiler thing right when the first White Thirteen thing happened...Nahh. Though I do have to say Jim did an excellent job using all of the alternate names I have stored up, just to keep things interesting.Book 3 is going to be great, I can see it. All the better with White Thirteen now being a bad guy "again". 1 Quote Steam name: Ehksidian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 29, 2014 Share Posted November 29, 2014 This whole thing is ripe for a "He's dead, Jim" joke. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 Red Star?Nailed it. Oh gee. Called the Cryo thing too. Ehks is White Thirteen? Way to keep things interesting. Is it bad that I figured out the spoiler thing right when the first White Thirteen thing happened...Nahh. Though I do have to say Jim did an excellent job using all of the alternate names I have stored up, just to keep things interesting.Book 3 is going to be great, I can see it. All the better with White Thirteen now being a bad guy "again". I did too. Thought it was made pretty clear. >.> Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 12, 2014 Author Share Posted December 12, 2014 Extermination (AKA Book 3) has been released! 1 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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