Rahkshi Lalonde Posted April 29, 2015 Posted April 29, 2015 (edited) This is the review topic for my little Bionicle story, i guess. I'm not the best writer, and i make mistakes often, if something looks funny, feel free to point it out. :t the story topic is HERE. This is the story of Tiricus, an agori who just wanted to do his job and live his life, now he finds himself far from home, in an alien location, with little hope of return. What perils and adventures await him on the far side? Story Marks I II III IV logs [#AODEH] Edited June 11, 2015 by Rahkshi Lalonde Quote
Funkydude527 Posted May 7, 2015 Posted May 7, 2015 I'm liking the tone and story so far. Strikes me as a little Hitchiker's Guide, which is a very, very good thing. The stream of consciousness is also fairly easy to follow, something I myself struggle with. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing more of this story going forward. Quote Essie: "Small talk subroutine complete. Were my useless vocalizations inane enough to bring you a sense of comfort?" Profiles: http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/9733-bzprpg-profile-pages/?p=763471
Rahkshi Lalonde Posted May 10, 2015 Author Posted May 10, 2015 (edited) Mark II has been released, it gets a little long, i think, hopefully not too long. :0 I'm liking the tone and story so far. Strikes me as a little Hitchiker's Guide, which is a very, very good thing. The stream of consciousness is also fairly easy to follow, something I myself struggle with. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing more of this story going forward. gosh thanks! an easy to follow story is what i generally try to deliver. c: Edited May 10, 2015 by Rahkshi Lalonde Quote
Akavakaku Posted June 24, 2015 Posted June 24, 2015 A very exciting comedy/drama piece, and I agree with the HHGG comparison. Could the log writer be who I think it is? Hmm, something to look forward to finding out! Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins
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