cjr205 Posted October 18, 2016 Share Posted October 18, 2016 https://www.flickr.com/photos/100637370@N03/shares/y17g5w A toa of light that I just couldn't get to look right. Any suggestions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrickPharaoh Posted October 18, 2016 Share Posted October 18, 2016 It's actually got a lot going for it. I like where the chest was going. My suggestions are to make the shoulders quite a lot bigger and to give it thicker arms and legs. Quote "Welcome to Valhalla, Warrior." Recent MOC's: The Headless Horseman (BBC71 Finalist) LDD CCBS Chess The Shadowed One (BBC69) Nydoretha (Netherealm Empress) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted October 18, 2016 Share Posted October 18, 2016 I agree with Marei. Give it thicker limbs and broader shoulders. Aside from that, add more white, the gold seems a bit overpowering. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cjr205 Posted October 18, 2016 Author Share Posted October 18, 2016 I agree with Marei. Give it thicker limbs and broader shoulders. Aside from that, add more white, the gold seems a bit overpowering. It's actually got a lot going for it. I like where the chest was going. My suggestions are to make the shoulders quite a lot bigger and to give it thicker arms and legs. Thanks. I'll work on that and post it when I finish. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Invisible Handman Posted October 18, 2016 Share Posted October 18, 2016 I think it's more to do with the torso, you could make the bit below the orange circle a bit shorter. Quote {Brickshelf Page - BZPRPG Profile - HFRPG Profile - Project Protodermis Profile} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark_Stranger Posted October 20, 2016 Share Posted October 20, 2016 Offhand, I'd say the torso needs to be a little shorter (right now it looks a bit long compared to the legs), and the shoulders could stand to be positioned a bit higher (the arms seem kind of low on the torso as is). Otherwise, I'd call this solid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToaTImeLord Posted October 22, 2016 Share Posted October 22, 2016 Bulkier arms and legs or a more slender chest and body that would fix the proposition issue. Quote Hey I got a Flickr because I like making LEGO stuff. https://www.flickr.com/people/toatimelord/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
banana92 Posted October 22, 2016 Share Posted October 22, 2016 I would personally rid the orange disk on the chest, just my touch, and the obligingly red and blue pins might be better in other colors, though I know that can be limiting, I think he looks really cool though, I have to agree with the above comments, maybe do white shells with gold accent pieces/add ons, and last thing, I would subtract the silver/gun metal, but that's just me, all in all he looks very solid and I look forward to seeing it reach it's full potential! Quote I'm digging I'm digging I'm digging I'm digging I'm digging I'm digging I'm digging I'm digging I'm digging I'm digging I'm digging Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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