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It's actually got a lot going for it. I like where the chest was going. My suggestions are to make the shoulders quite a lot bigger and to give it thicker arms and legs. 

 

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I agree with Marei. Give it thicker limbs and broader shoulders. Aside from that, add more white, the gold seems a bit overpowering.

 

 

It's actually got a lot going for it. I like where the chest was going. My suggestions are to make the shoulders quite a lot bigger and to give it thicker arms and legs. 

 

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Thanks. I'll work on that and post it when I finish.

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I would personally rid the orange disk on the chest, just my touch, and the obligingly red and blue pins might be better in other colors, though I know that can be limiting, I think he looks really cool though, I have to agree with the above comments, maybe do white shells with gold accent pieces/add ons, and last thing, I would subtract the silver/gun metal, but that's just me, all in all he looks very solid and I look forward to seeing it reach it's full potential!

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