a goose Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 VOREXThis is an MOC of a character who will appear in my epic (Shadows) at some point in the next few chapters (or, possibly, make an appearance in BZPRPG).Vorex is a creature of an unknown species, and wears the Great Mask of Fear (doesn't exist in canon; made it up. On a side note, I named the mask the Tahk).He feeds off paradoxes, and other changes in the proper timeline. I have below several links to different images of him.FrontSideBackAvatar PoseDon't mess with meConstructive criticism appreciated. - PtVM Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 The legs don't seem very proportionate to the rest of the body but the head is pretty cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 22, 2012 Author Share Posted January 22, 2012 Thankyou. I considered using the Metru legs, which fit in better, but I decided against it, because I wanted to give him a warped, almost twisted appearance.I like the head a lot (it was the first part I chose), but there've been a few 'jetpack head' jokes in other topics. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eragon3443 Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 He looks cool. Maybe if you put hand pieces on his arms, and a trans piece in his head, probably blue, he would be a bit better. Quote Feel free to friend me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 28, 2012 Author Share Posted January 28, 2012 He looks cool. Maybe if you put hand pieces on his arms, and a trans piece in his head, probably blue, he would be a bit better.The hand pieces look strange on the arms, and I can't help but ask: How the Karz would I get a trans-blue piece into an Av-Toran jetpack? Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 Well, given Brickshelf's gone and jumped off a cliff, the best I can comment is from your profile picture and what I remember from your sig, and that's that I'm surprised by the presence of a jetpack for a head. It works surprisingly well and gives him some inhuman qualities, which I assume he needs.The one thing I would say is you need to use something for hands. Not sure about hand pieces, but definitely something resembling them. What about those Ben 10 claws, they might work. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted February 1, 2012 Author Share Posted February 1, 2012 I thought Brickshelf had taken a long walk off a short plank...I've always wanted to use an Av-Toran jetpack as a head, but this is the first time it's actually worked.I don't juust mean hand pieces, I mean literally any piece that can be used as a hand seems big and out of place. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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