Master Inika Posted May 15, 2023 Share Posted May 15, 2023 Welcome to the review topic for Devil Before the Devil, my new epic featuring Berix on a quest to interview Makuta Miserix. The inspiration for this story was a discussion on the BZPower Discord server. All comments and criticism are welcome. I hope you enjoy it. 1 Quote "You are an absolute in these uncertain times. Your past is forgotten, and your future is an empty book. You must find your own destiny, my brave adventurer." -- Turaga Nokama Click here to visit my library! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TERIDAX941 Posted May 31, 2023 Share Posted May 31, 2023 I'm definitely enjoying this plotline! It's rather exciting following this unlikely duo through the destroyed MU. How many more chapters are there left out of curiosity? Quote Formerly Iron_Man5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Inika Posted May 31, 2023 Author Share Posted May 31, 2023 2 hours ago, TERIDAX941 said: I'm definitely enjoying this plotline! It's rather exciting following this unlikely duo through the destroyed MU. How many more chapters are there left out of curiosity? Only one more, unfortunately. But after I take a brief break, I have plans for a sequel series. Quote "You are an absolute in these uncertain times. Your past is forgotten, and your future is an empty book. You must find your own destiny, my brave adventurer." -- Turaga Nokama Click here to visit my library! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
confused piraka Posted May 31, 2023 Share Posted May 31, 2023 (edited) I like the idea that you can go back into the broken mu! also poor Miserix why does he have to stay there? Edited May 31, 2023 by confused piraka Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted June 10, 2023 Share Posted June 10, 2023 Finally got around to reading this. Right off the bat, I love the idea of Berix taking on a more important role than the two-dimensional thief role he had in a lot of previous media. Seeing him take up chronicling is a neat way of demonstrating how the cultures of the MU and Bara Magna could cross over and influence each other. Telling the story from what's effectively an outsider perspective adds some impartiality to the story as well, and makes Miserix feel more sympathetic. Speaking of which, this is a fantastic portrayal of Miserix. There's this sense of world-weariness and despair to him that carries through in everything he says and does. It's a massive improvement over his relatively meagre role in the original story. I'm looking forward to seeing what follow-ups you might have planned. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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