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Great design and shape, especially considering all the special parts you worked in there! My one suggestion is to be less monochromatic with your color schemes - when everything is red like that, it's harder to discern all the details, and the creation looks less composed. I think a secondary armor color could have done wonders here. But overall, great work and nice mecha!

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I do very much like the idea of this MOC. The first time I saw it in the thumbnail, I wasn't even sure it was lego :P I like the idea of having little talons on the feet to keep its foot. I think that's a nice way of actually thinking behind the bricks, and I really like that :biggrin: The use of those HF pieces on the thighs, kind of disrupts the smoothness of the MOC, but it's just minor IMO. I just have one question, if this thing generates whirlwinds, why is an atlantean piloting it? :P

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Personally, I don't dislike the monochromatic colour scheme. I really like the overall concept and look of the MOC. The smooth and fluent shaping around the cockpit is brilliant. I find the way you used those sticker quite appealing, too. However, I agree with Daiker about the HF pieces disrupting the smoothness of the MOC and I am not very fond of those feet either. If you intend to overwork this MOC, I recommend you to build feet using more System pices, especially round-shaped ones. Nevertheless, a very nice MOC! :)~Gata. ;)

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i prefer chainguns instead of propellers :\ nontheless, a great moc, better than my failed attempts

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Great design and shape, especially considering all the special parts you worked in there! My one suggestion is to be less monochromatic with your color schemes - when everything is red like that, it's harder to discern all the details, and the creation looks less composed. I think a secondary armor color could have done wonders here. But overall, great work and nice mecha!

I liked the monochromatic color. But more color could have made it more appealing I guess. This was also my first real mecha using system (except those I builded 3 years ago using the Exo-Force body build)

I do very much like the idea of this MOC. The first time I saw it in the thumbnail, I wasn't even sure it was lego :P I like the idea of having little talons on the feet to keep its foot. I think that's a nice way of actually thinking behind the bricks, and I really like that :biggrin: The use of those HF pieces on the thighs, kind of disrupts the smoothness of the MOC, but it's just minor IMO. I just have one question, if this thing generates whirlwinds, why is an atlantean piloting it? :P

I'm glad you like that idea behind it. And why he pilots it? Because my first idea was it to be an underwater mecha that creates whirlpools but I changed the concept to whirlwind :P

Personally, I don't dislike the monochromatic colour scheme. I really like the overall concept and look of the MOC. The smooth and fluent shaping around the cockpit is brilliant. I find the way you used those sticker quite appealing, too. However, I agree with Daiker about the HF pieces disrupting the smoothness of the MOC and I am not very fond of those feet either. If you intend to overwork this MOC, I recommend you to build feet using more System pices, especially round-shaped ones. Nevertheless, a very nice MOC! :) ~Gata. ;)

The stickers you are refering too are not placed for this MOC. They were already on the pieces because it were pieces from an Exo-Force Mecha and I didn't want to remove them ^_^ I don't think I'm gonna remake this MOC but I will remember it for my next Mecha ;-)

i prefer chainguns instead of propellers :\ nontheless, a great moc, better than my failed attempts

To many mecha's have chainguns and that kind of stuff. I didn't want to use that what most mecha's have, now it at least has a interesting concept ^_^

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