Ignacis Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 Post your reviews here! Feel free to ask questions and give any feedback you feel necessary!link to the story---> http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=773&hl=&fromsearch=1 Happy reading!-Iggy Quote -Iggy, Toa of Fire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Creep Of The Deep Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 I'm reading Chapter 4 right now, you've made a fine job on this epic lad.Good writing, great story, overall you did a great job.The only weakness I find here is that the paragraph aren't properly spaced, leaving some chunks together and can be a bit annoying to read.Otherwise I have no complaints here. Quote Do not trust corrupted memories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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