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Zarayna's Review Exchange

Posted by Zarayna , in Stories Nov 26 2012 · 315 views

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Hello everyone. All writers, myself included, enjoy reviews. So now, I'm proposing an offer to anyone who cares: You give me a short story, epic chapter/short epic (for now) to review, or if you do not have that and still wish to participate, I will attempt to review other artwork you should list, be it drawing or MOCing. In exchange, you review one of the stories I list below. I can't promise that my reviews will be SSCC length, but I will make them a minimum of 100 words; in return I request that you leave a decent review for me.






My Stories

The below stories are listed in order of how badly I want them reviewed. Please note, these are only suggestions to the prospective reader: Although, for instance, one of the stories I want reviews for the most is Safe and Sound, should you desire to read and review We Wanted Those Infidels Dead! instead, I will not have a problem.


Safe and Sound
Posted: Aug 25 2012, 06:24.
Jaurius, son of the highly controversial senator Gementa, sets out to escort his sister home, in his heart hoping that he will only have to do that...
Song: Safe and Sound by Taylor Swift.


The Refugee
Posted: Nov 18 2012, 09:07 PM.
A boy flees from the enemy, but the enemy relents not in their inadvertent encircling of him.


Shredded Radiance
Posted: Oct 24 2012, 09:39 PM.
Templar fic: A traveler walks though the evening woods, his emblem and life alike in tatters.


Destiny's Scourge
Posted: Sep 05 2012, 03:48 PM.
In the capitol of the republic of Dinaru, Makuta is reminded startingly that he has not escape the grasp of Destiny.


We Wanted Those Infidels Dead!
Posted: Oct 21 2012, 09:22 PM.
Templar fic: A group of brigands settles down after a day of plundering, not realizing that a group of warriors have been observing their every move.


And should you wish me to review a longer work (an epic) I will gladly accept in return for reviews of this short epic of mine:

Survive
Review Topic
Posted: Jun 16th, 1:33 PM.
As the Toa/Dark Hunter war begins, a toa is called from a remote island to the legendary city of Metru Nui.



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I am tempted to take this offer, but might have to put it off until after the school year is over. Hope you get some takers; this is how I got to know some other authors back in the day, by reading and reviewing each other's work!

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:kaukau: I wrote a review on The Refugee. I'm sorry to conclude that for the most part the entire thing was the basic pitch you provided here, but just expanded with a lot of description. Don't worry, I had positive things to say, but seeing it so simply worded here...yeah, I just had to point that out.

(Also, it was longer than your story.)

Meanwhile, I have given Shredded Radiance a review, and I will get to Destiny's Scourge, because Chro's comment was pretty short.

In return, here are the two pieces I would like reviewed:

The Son Becomes the Father
A Tombstone Story

EDIT: I have now also reviewed Destiny's Scourge.

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Turning

Did you see them going off to fight?
Children of the barricade that didn't last the night.
They were schoolboys, never held a gun,
Fighting for a new world that would rise up like the sun.
Where's that new world now the fighting's done?

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If there was a slap for every reference you didn't get, Zar, you would be like a walking bruise.
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