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#1 Offline tent163phantoka

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Posted Oct 16 2011 - 05:05 PM

THE LEGEND OF OMORYNOT
PROLOGUE
Imagine, if you will, a world made entirely of what would appear to be pencil and ink, along with all its inhabitants. Now imagine Toa-like beings that can change their shape in a small, hurricane-like swirl. The reason I request this is because this story takes place in a world just like that with those exact inhabitants, among other species. This story is about one member of the aforementioned Toa-like species n particular and his journey to change the world and save it from the rule of a tyrannical king, and how this journey changed much more than just that for the rest of time. The being’s name was…Omorynot.
I know it's short, but It's a prologue. please post what you think in the review topic.
http://www.bzpower.c...p?showtopic=862-review topic

Edited by tent163phantoka, Oct 16 2011 - 05:09 PM.





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