Hey everyone, some of you may have seen my story, Scars of War, and for those of you that haven't, it's right there waiting! Anyway, I'd like to eat feedback from you, to hear how I could improve, what could be changed, and so on. One of the things I would specifically like to hear is how you think I did on the characters, if they were accurate or not, but anyway, I look forward to hearing your feedback!