Aldian Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 I really hope I don't get anyone's hopes up, by making anyone think it's Greg all of a sudden posting the fourth chapter. This is not a prank topic, it's just my take on it, of what could possibly take place. I've had a few ideas for a while, and considering Greg has been busy, I thought maybe everyone could enjoy this.A few side notes are that I'm not sure how long I'll continue this; it's more really of an experiment. Again, I hope I don't get anyone angry or anything. And secondly, If I do continue, I posted it in epic forums, so I can make another chapter. Without further ado, I guess, here is my take on what possibly can happen next. There might be storyline problems, incomplete sentences, what have you. It also may be kind of short, But, I've been really busy with work, I just wanted to finish and post it. I hope everyone enjoys it.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Zaria and Chiara laid low, under the brush. Zaria looked over at Chiara, who was deep in thought, no doubt trying to come up with a plan."Should we have separated?", Zaria asked. Chiara looked up at him, before she nodded."It would have been much easier to hunt us all down if we were grouped." She replied. Zaria let out a frustrated sigh."Right now our powers are handicapped. If anything, it would be easier to hunt us this way." Zaria said, “We need to reconvene and end this foolish game.""Calm yourself." Chiara emphasized while she whispered, to which Zaria let out another sigh, as he shook his head. Noise abruptly interrupted the silence a couple of yards away, as a Vorox emerged from the brush, his weapon gripped firmly in his hands."Plan?" Zaria whispered to Chiara."Yeah, stay quiet." Chiara sarcastically replied."No problem." Zaria replied, "You make the noise." he finished, before he turned and disappeared into the brush. An annoyed look grew on Chiara's face, clearly that's not what she had in mind.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Gelu and Orde quietly watched the river bank for any sign of movement.“How long do you think we’ve been up here?” Orde asked, as impatience sunk into his voice. Gelu shrugged.“Possibly, a few hours.” Gelu replied. “But, we’ll wait longer, if need be – we must not rush this.” Gelu said, as he tried to calm him. Orde let out a sigh, as he suddenly went quiet. He turned his head down the bank, as something caught his eye.“What is it?” Gelu asked. Orde pointed off into the distance, where he seen smoke rising.“A camp?” Orde asked, as he turned back toward Gelu, who was pondering.“Possibly.” Gelu replied“If that’s the case, it might be our best bet to regroup with the others.” Orde said. Gelu looked around.“And if it isn’t?”, He asked. Orde adjusted on the branch.“As I said, it’ a bet.” He replied. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Chiara watched the vorox sniff the air—his guard high. She looked at his armor; hoping to find any weak points. She shook her head as she let out a quiet sigh. Her head held down for a moment as her eyes grazed over a rock.In truth, Chiara didn’t like to resort to such cheap ways, but with her powers somehow disabled, and her being on a strange planet, she might have to learn to adapt. She held the rock firmly in her hand, as if beckoning the rock to make a decisive blow.Chiara looked up as she gathered her nerve. Her eyes abruptly stopped on a pouch that was strapped to his side. Chiara quickly nodded as she strained herself to remain silent, while she slowly crept closer.All of a sudden, the Vorox buckled as if something had grabbed ahold of his legs. He struggled, as his weapon nearly slipped from his grip. Grunts from him met the air, as he started swinging his weapon toward the ground.Chiara’s cringed – her desperation growing, as the Vorox’s attacks made contact with his unknown adversary. Chiara tried desperately to get closer, without notice – her hand going numb from the rock gripped within it.The Vorox seemed to loosen his grip and his stance, as if he victory within his grasp. His hands tightening around his weapon, as he brought it up in the sky – preparing to make the final blow. Chiara eyes widened, she couldn’t hesitate. She quickly stood up and charged toward him, as her anger rose. The Vorox turned toward her, surprised at her sudden appearance. He raised his weapon toward her, but hesitation caught him, as he quickly looked back at his feet, his adversary appearing to return.That was all that was needed for the rock in Chiara’s hand to make contact with the Vorox’s head. His weapon slipped from his grip, as he fell with a thud. Chiara quickly dropped to her knees, searching through the brush, hoping to find a still conscious Zaria. A confused look grew on her face, as she found nothing but plants.Her breathing slowed, but her confusion grew. She turned toward the still Vorox, slowly prodding at his pouch. She slipped her hand inside, before she slowly removed her hand and produced a disk. Her eyes widened, as she stared at it.But thoughts couldn’t accompany her now, as she caught something out of the corner of her eye. She slowly stood up, and eyes made contact with a figure, armored in green. She looked down, as she felt something tugging at her legs. She took one more glance at the disc in her hands; the yellow, bright, symbol of life glaring back at her.The tugging at her leg persisted, as she took a stance. Ready for battle, as she slowly felt her power returning to her… Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hahli Husky Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 Will you be posting anymore chapters, or is this all? If this is the only chapter, it would belong in Short Stories, where one-post stories go. Please let me know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldian Posted March 28, 2012 Author Share Posted March 28, 2012 Will you be posting anymore chapters, or is this all? If this is the only chapter, it would belong in Short Stories, where one-post stories go. Please let me know.I was keeping it as an epic to add more chapters, eventually. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSkeletonMan939 Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 Then you should make a review topic for your epic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldian Posted March 28, 2012 Author Share Posted March 28, 2012 Ah, then I will do that, Skeletonman. Thank you for the idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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