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Making My Book
im making a book of 65 pages named: BIONICLE: tales of a hero, will been 6 chapters of history, these are the name of the chapters:
chap 1= Karda nui: operation salvation
chap 2=shadowed hearts
chap 3=falling gods
chap 4=elementary evil
chap 5=lost land
chap 6=hope
for first i posted falling gods, shadowed hearts in BZP in the short story section, when i posted in spanish Karda nui: operation salvation in deviantart.com, i will not say where are the topics, when i finish of make the book i will post it
im finishing the 4th chapter, there is i writte at now:
BIONICLE
Tales of a hero
By Nicolas Marzano
Chapter 4: “elementary darkness”
Had been past 4 years alter the fall of Dekrax in the 10.000 nightmares dimmension.
Finally the peace back to the hearts of much matoran, toa and warrior around the World, horever…in the night a green star That illuminate a beautiful night in Metru-Nui appareaded, of the nothing a being falled of the star, of red eyes, hooded, with a sword in his hand an daggers in his chest armor, walked faster in the Night of Metru-nui.
The being runned to Ga-Metru, jumping the Big and glorious estructures that were filling the whole place, surrounded by big transparent lakes, he stoped his march, He extract binoculars of a rucksack that was taking position, and he put thermal gun-sight towards a great red tower in the middle of Ga-Metru.
“they’re there, at least i founded them, which I relieve” thinked the hooded one, he jumped at a great distance and falled at the doors of the tower, he oponed the doors and in a second was surronded be swords of diferent elements, the hooded one upped his hands to the air.
In only a moment, the hooded stamping stooping to one of the warriors of there, He seize other one throwing(shooting) it against the wall, jump on the chest of one of the warriors, I extract a thin dagger with the one that did 5 movements in the air, and when He touch the soil the warriors fell down lost heart with strong blows in they armors.
Antrozek down the stairs saying “you grown well Akrax, you defeated the elemental androids I putted for protect the tower”, Akrax take his hoods from him and he bend revering Antrozek, and he said " it is a praise master listens to it, its A pity that not there come for visits only ".
“What has happened?” asked Antrozek, “The evil elementary, master, they had back” answered worried Akrax.
Antrozek has sit down amazed to heard that words, he asked “it cannot be…but how you discovered?”, and Akrax answered “listen well master:
I was with Milaki, the Gakalu third sister, i was having a good vacation day, until a dark figure becomed of a tree, i feeled him come behind, it was on the verge of attacking Milaki, I detained it full speed giving him a strong kick, but was not sufficient he gives birth to demain it, he grabbed a sword and was to attack milaki, i runned faster to then and i shuted the fire blast of the sword, i kicked the dark figure and i throwed him to the water, indcredibly faster the dark figure grabbed of a tree of there, i see he not like very much the water, that moment i have a idea, i created a air bubble where i full charged of water, i clashed sword with him and i shooted the water to him.
He beggined to disintegrating little by little saying that his mission fail”.
Antrozek said at the moment “and so.. It that it has to see with what you discovered?”, “i not finished off..listen…when he get disintegrated, a amulet falled to the land, i grabbed then, see the amulet” said Akrax.
Akrax gived the amulet to Antrozek, and Antrozek putted a face of fear and worryness.
“imposible…this is the sign of the 10.000 nightmares dimension, in that place i sealed the evil elementary ones” said him, “if you sealed them, Since they could be liberated?” asked Akrax, and Antrozek raise seriously of his chair and he said to Akrax " it is called all the elementary ones and those that they lodge here, I have to tell them on elementary others ".
1 hour after... " Them and brought together here, to speak to them on a part of my past that i conceals, which it conceals brings over of the elementary malignant ones that i faced" said Antrozek when all the elementary ones sat down in they respective chairs.
“wait a moment, where is Gakalu?...anibody knows where she is?” said the worried Antrozek, the elementary ones said “we dont know sir”, Antrozek ordered to one elemental “Keol, follow me to the Gakalu’s room”, and Keol, the elemental of metal replied “yes sir”.
They together walked toward the Gakalu room, they opened her door and Antrozek looked toward to Hekatak, evil elemental of ice, who was Supporting Gakalu that was unconsents, in his arms, “long time no see Antrozek” said Hekatak with sarcasm.
“YOU!!!!” cried the furious Antrozek, “A beautiful specimen, do not you believe it old friend?” said Hekatak While he was touching with a hand Gakalu's body, “touch the Gakalu’s body again, and i kill you!!!!” said with rage Antrozek.
“calm down boy, she will stay well in our headquarters” replied Hekatak. In a just a second a Light covered Hekatak and Gakalu and dissapareaded of the room, “NO!!!!” Shout Antrozek.
Hours after....”elementals, i will go for a while, i need search Gakalu, i go to the house of an old friend” said Antrozek to the elementary ones before he out of the tower, he walked out Metru-Nui, meanwhile in the palace of Mata nui...”something bad will happen, i know, i feel it in me” said the great spirit to the toa nuva and the turaga when he see Antrozek out of the city.
Antrozek reached faster the Hictior house in the middle of the sea, Hictior opened The hatch of his house, “Hictior, please, don’t make a house into the sea, it’s hard found a house in the middle of nothing you know?” said Antrozek, “yeh i know that yo” replied Hictior.
“and so...why you come in my house?” asked Hictior, “i come here for help” answered Antrozek and he talk again “Gakalu...was....kipdnaked”.
Hours after....”here is it” said Hictior, “you found it?” asked Antrozek, “yeah, let’s go found your girlfriend” replied Hictior, “######'s not my girlfriend, she is how that human i meet said, she is a `wife´” said Antrozek repliying Hictior, they get out of the hictior house to the most near island of them two, They used a device to find energy of an individual to kilometres, Antrozek gave to Hictior a part of the destroyed armor of Bonutak, the leader of the elementary malignant ones, who he defeted milenias before.
Meanwhile in a island of the east where Hictior and Antrozek was.....”yes...yes...this is..perfect...when Antrozek fight our leader..with his our elementary ones..the plan will be succeded, and finally...we can awaken him....we can awaken the king of nightmares....” has said a fiying figure in the sky, “Hey Hictior...what is that in the sky?” asked Antrozek when he see the flying figure, “that’s not important now Antro’, our mission now is found the elementary” replied Hictior.
They They located finally the exact location of elementary malignant, like that that they two decided to return to Metru-Nui to say to elementary others, they was no won Mata-Nui, walked to the cave on Mangaia for reach Metru-Nui, but...when they come to the island, they eyes were reflecting terror on having seen the frightening event, they ran full speed when they found to all the elementary ones of antrozek dead and the destroyed tower, it was a butcher's shop since the bodies stopped of all, Antrozek shuted “NOOOOOO!!!!!!”.
The shuts of Antrozek was hearded in the whole city Giving them the matoran you distress and a sorrow, hours after....”sir Antrozek, we founded survivers” said Nuri, a Ta-matoran of there, he get very sad when he see the face of Antrozek, he replied “thanks Nuri, it’s good heard that, but now, who survived..will see the bodies of the others”, “no sir, Mata Nui decided To assure their bodies in coffins far from the tower” said Nuri, “give him the thanks please, i will see them, i hope they are Healthy” replied Antrozek with a smile of sadness.
Antrozek was in the hospital to visit the others elementary who lived, he asked to Greler, elementary of earth “what happened? Who attacked you?”, “was..elementary..of red sight, they was...the elementary maglinant no?” said Greler, “yes, they was to i wanted to tell you about” replied Antrozek, he raised of his chair and walked out the room, “Antrozek, where you go?” asked Shanea, elementary of iron, “i will destroy them, the last time i sealed the elementary malignant, but i see..stay in that dimension not changed they actitude” answered Antrozek.
“i got his signal, here you will found them, remember, this island is dangerous” said Hictior to Antrozek when they arrived in Takeno-Nui, where the elementary malignant was, “i will..friend, i’ill save Gakalu” replied Antrozek, “okay, remember, be careful” said Hictior before he go out the island with the Broxxor’s ship.
Antrozek ge tinto the jungles of the island for go to the temple of the elementary malignant, the rain begin collapsing the Tranquility on the island, the dark rahi were observing Antrozek warily of not being seen, they prepared to attack, jumped towards Antrozek, And they fell to the land repelled by a invisible air shield, Antrozek was travelling road surface with a perverse aura of hatred, not even the giant rahi were approaching him, a green sheen was expiring, while his eyes shining in red, before he founded the temple, he feeled a energy soul, very powerfull, very much, he jumped to a tree and he look at a hooded being, his energy aura was calmed, was easly, the hooded one was Akrax, “herald, what are you doing here?” asked Antrozek to his herald, “master..well...i been here to help you save Gakalu” answered the herald, “you cannot get involed in this battle, you can out damaged” replied the master of Akrax.
“oh c’mon, let me fight here” requested Akrax to Antrozek, “okay, let’s go then” said Antrozek, the two warriors arrived in the temple of the elementary maligniant, Antrozek looked toward the great chair in the most up part of the temple, in that place was Gakalu fainted, left her was the leader of the elementary malignant, Bonutak, elmentary malignant of earth, and to the right of him was Rytrax, elementary of gravity, “Rytrax?, what are you doing here?, why you are with them after i saved you of they?” asked the worried Antrozek to see a light warrior behind the shadows.
“sorry dude, i found the light in the shadows, that is all” answered Rytrax to Antrozek with a sad face, “this...is...MADNESS!!!” shuted Antrozek when he hearded the Rytrax words, he extracted his Grudak sword of his back, Bonutak feeled the energies that Antrozek was expiring of his body, “perfect, i know what will happen in this battle, but it’s all the plan of my master” he said.
Antrozek running faster upped the stair to the Bonutak’s chair, with only his right hand repealed all the elementary malignant who was in his way, “Akrax!! Take careo f these elementary!!” ordered Antrozek with faith in Akrax, Antrozek attacked Bonutak, the two falla long to the floor, their swords clashed, Bonutak kicked Antrozek toward the columns, Antrozek raise of the flat, Bonutak nailed his sword in the land, a earthquake begin after that, a mountain of earth appareaded next to Antrozek, behind him other earth mountain appareaded, Bonutak aplauded and then both mountains of land were closed squashing Antrozek, and Bonutak thinked "is impossible that like that only it is eleminated".
Antrozek appareaded behind Bonutak, he kicked him to the land mountains, Antrozek runned fastly towards Bonutak, the elementary malignant one defended doing solid land face his to be protected from Antrozek, the malignant enemy it gave a blow to Antrozek strongly, the elementary of air fall to the floor Agonizing for the pain of the blow.
Bonutak walked towards Akrax, he defeated any elementary malignant over the palace, Bonutak attacked him from his back, Akrax was shooted to the chair where Bonutak was sitted, he created a elemental earth giant where Akrax was, the giant punched to Akrax, the young elementary one falled of the chair place a bit fainted, all the malignant elementary looked at him with fury, ecept for Rytrax, who was worried for him, Bonutak walked towards Akrax, he extracted his favourite sword of a bag and nailed the left hand of Akrax.
The scream of Akrax of pain penetrate the barriers of land that were enclosing Antrozek, Bonutak laughted and in this moment a green light illuminate the land, a strong storm begined, and Bonutak said " not ... this power .... the storm .... he still alive!?", of the land barriers Antrozek shout furious “BONUTAAAK!!!!!!”, The very impressed Bonutak feels the energy of Antrozek, he creates barriers of land and it them is thrown to Antrozek, the elementary malignant launch balls of fire, of air, rocks, plasma, barriers of sound, water tsunamis, all the acquaintances elementary power, but Antrozek lifts his hand in the air creating a field of green energy that supports all the elementary power of others and one trhows them again, “nobody will touch....my herald!!!!!!” said Antrozek with fury.
Aantrozek fly faster to the elementary malignant, he covered his arms with Big and hard armors of hardened air, he punched one by one of the elementary, the rock elementary jumping Evading Antrozek, he attracted the columns of stone near where Bonutak was sitting down, he them throw key squashed to the soil to Antrozek, the good elementary one of the air, The elementary one of rock started to launching gigantic rocks towards Antrozek, as also the elementary one of plasma I stick Antrozek's feet in the flat of there, the elementary malignant him were useful and did not stop throwing to Antrozek elementary very painful assaults.
Come in him again after the faint in this moment, and he saw as Antrozek was suffering all the assaults of the elementary malignant ones, a tear of Antrozek birth at the time, well-known Akrax that was for that he could not protect him, “An...tro...zekk” said Akrax with the pain of the sword That was crossing his hand, A rare and powerful energy birth in Akrax in this moment, he appareaded behind of the elementary one of the sound, he gave to her a blow in her neck, after so, to an incredible speed he gave to hima strong kick in her facing the elementary one of fire, the elementary malignant ones they stopped attacking Antrozek when Akrax strikes Bonutak in the stomach making it fly to be shocked against the wall.
“you can’t damage my master....MONSTERS!!!” shuted Akrax to the elementary malignant, the elementary of ice, who was an explorer of ancient and dead islands shout surprised “this cannot be ... not ... it is a matoran Nynrah!!!!”, “WHAT??, IT CANNOT BE” shouted the other elementary, “yes, he is a Nynrah ghost...with body, i feel his energies, are very powerfull for a simple toa” replied the ice elementary.
Bonutak was falling of the up wall, he was saying “perfect...the energy tank to open the portal is almost finished, when the charge get full uploaded...our master will arise...in the dead land...”, Akrax prepared his sword for fight, he jump towards the sky, slapped nothing from there, intone the elementary ones they felt a sound, and in this moment their armors were cut by air barriers, the blood of the elementary malignant ones fall in the soil of the palace, Akrax said to them from the airs “the blows that I gave to them are mortal for the mobility, you wouldn’t die, but to move not can”
when i finish the book i will post it, because i draw very well too, i will post draws ino the book for recreate scenes of the book, it's sure at the epilogue of the book will be a 2009 spoiler showing what are and what for are the glatorians
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I Struck Mahri!
Yesterday I went to Wal-mart to check for the Toa Mahri. I went to the construction toy aisle, and I couldn't believe my eyes: Wal-Mart had the Toa Mahri, the Titans for 07, and the playsets! I bought Hahli Mahri, Matoro Mahri, and Nuparu Mahri. So, if any of you live in or near Onalaska, Wisconsin or La Crosse, Wisconsin, and want to get the Mahri, go to your local Wal-mart and buy some Toa Mahri before they sell out!
(NOTE: I did not mistake the Toa Inika for the Toa Mahri, I know the difference between a Toa Inika canister and a Toa Mahri canister-box-fort-thing, and my Wal-mart replaced the remaining Toa Inika with Toa Mahri, so it was impossible to mix up the Mahri and Inika)
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[ Alright. So, first announcement... my Nintendo Wii, which I used to access BZPower and the internet with about 87.35%, got stolen. This means I won't be on that much for a bit. Most likely about ten weeks or so. But, I still have the library... but that's a story for another time.
Second order of business! I recently posted my first short story on BZP. You could go check it out if you want to. If you saw it on another site, please note that the reason I changed a line was to not get in trouble with BZP's word blacklist.
That is all. You may now return to whatever else you have to do. ]
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Welcome To The Desert Of The Real...
Ah, a new blog. The first thing I'd like to do here is state my opinion of the word blog.
It is a silly word. It sounds less like a diary than it does like... well, this:
Yes, the word 'blog' puts me in mind of loo roll. I have no idea why. That is why I shall stop calling this a blog right away and instead refer to it as a... journal? No, that makes it sound like something much cooler than it really is. And diary implies private. Ah, drat. Okay, you win, it's a blog.
I don't usually lose arguments, you know. Don't get used to it.
Anyway. I suppose that since this is my first entry I ought to tell you a bit about who I am. My name is Jonathan, but you can call me Jon if you like. I'm 17, and rather too far away from being eighteen (and thus able to do one or two things more legally than I currently can) for my liking. I live in England, which is better that living in America in my opinion because you get the same standard of comfort without having to have people paying so much dratted attention to you.
Don't get me wrong, I don't dislike America. My girlfriend is American (American chicks dig the British accent, it's a fact), but let's not go there.
Anyway, I'm Jon and... I'm quite good at a handful of things. It's probably quicker to tell you what I'm appallingly bad at, and that would be:
- Most sports that involve a ball
- Anything that involves making music
- Mental Arithmetic
As far as the internet is concerned, I've been around a few times and I'm a moderator for a thriving Teen Forum (no tiny thing either. We've got a shop
Oh, and over 20,000 members). It's not a bad job to have, despite the complete lack of pay. Since I'm expressly forbidden to advertise rival forums here, I won't post the address. It's enough to let you know that we're out there and I'm helping out 
Been on BZP since... well, since it was BZCommunity and KanohiPower. I remember the KP logo, it was rather natty. I have way too many Bionicle sets, but I don't buy 'em like I used to. Two Piraka, one Inika and two Barraki in the last two years, and that was more than I intended. Oh, and Kardas, but he was a bargain, seriously... three sets for £25? Come on, man, Vezon alone costs that much!
Speaking of bargains, I got myself one the other day. One of the sets I've wanted since my childhood:
Four pounds. Yay me!
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It's kinda like Inspecter Gadget after he gets blown up by Claw and repaired XD.
Feels wierd posting a blog...I got so used not being able to come here.
Anyways I recently got my Toa Hahli before BZP went (lack for a better word) gnjkxhgjkdf,nvjksplat.
And upon building Hahli all the Lime Green joints broke where the ball joint meets the connecter.
Needless to say I'm pretty disapointed with the quality of LEGO right now...this also happened to my Ball joints on Vezon and Fenrakk.
That's kinda why I'm hesitant to buy Lesovikk right now.
But I did buy Hydraxon and I'm loving his blades, face, and his fingers
Those three things let me look past the fact that he is still another humaniod titan.
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Austin TX mission trip with my youth group! a van with no A/C and a cooler in the back with ice so you don't get heat stroke! its a battle against man verses the sun and the elements(sorry Toa). nothing but audio adrenaline playing on the stereo, I can here it now,
fourteen kids in an old church van
fourteen kids in an old church van
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Sixty miles and hour feels way to slow
fourteen kids in an old church van
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fourteen kids in an old church van
the suns in their eyes and the radiators leakin'
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For a time ago we did buy a LOT of lego. On Tradera,a part of ebay.
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go to the Wairhua and Akamai topic to say wich you think is best.
Nothing have happened today.
Sorry for spelling Akamai wrong in the topic. search for "Wairhua and Akami" topic instead. :wakeup2:
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and the ones I haven't added
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