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Short And Simple Is Not A Bad Thing


Necro

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From books as heavy as a desktop becoming more and more common, to "short" stories that take hours to read, I've been noticing a disturbing trend in writing to assume that bigger = better.

 

I'm not saying there isn't a time to be verbose or long-winded, because the fact is that there are times when you should be. But using it most of the time just gets grating, because when it's not special, it's boring and trying. One of the most challenging things I've ever tried doing while writing is limiting myself to as few words as possible while still describing the situation properly - the only real time I can justify getting long-winded and pedantic is for the dialog of a character who fits that.

 

But beyond that, be concise; nothing is wrong with short. 1984 isn't even 350 pages, and it's often considered one of if not the greatest novel of the 20th century. The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy isn't even 200. And neither of those numbers are with particularly large page sized either, I'm pretty sure those are both pocket-sized editions.

 

Frankly, I think it'd be a mark of a better author to be able to weave an entrancing, involving story with 150 pages than with 600. I'm not referring to anyone in particular really, but if you feel this applies to you, then please, take it to heart, because I really do think that with how much knowing every possible word, its definition, and how to use it is stressed in modern english education, has caused a lot of authors, both published and indie, to want to use as much of their robust vocabularies as possible, and concise-yet-engaging writing is becoming a lost art. But beating the reader over the head with your vocabulary is just poor taste, use it here and there for flash, or write in a verbose character and use them as an outlet for it. Just don't use more words than you need to, please.

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Well... unless you're paid by the word. :P

 

But on a serious note, it's interesting that you brought up George Orwell. Animal Farm may only be 112 pages, but it scares me more than any long winded Stephen King novel I've read. I actually find his (King's) short stories preferable to his full novels because they're short and still able to pack a pretty big punch.

 

I'm not against long, descriptive novels if that's what the stories demand, but when I think about my favorite novels... they're all pretty short except for a few.

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There are some stories that need to go on for a while, else they don't work. I do get what you mean to say, though, Necro (probably because you stated it in the very first sentence of the above blog post :P).

 

You know what's funny? I kind of followed the bigger-is-better trend by writing a seven thousand five hundred-word long story for Short Stories Contest 8, but for COT Short Stories Contest 2, I decided to break that trend to prove to myself a good short story could be under one thousand words -- all before I read this entry.

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When you're writing a story to prove a point, or to have a fun casual read then short is better.

 

But the fact of the matter remains that if you're writing a story to write a story and you're fleshing out the entire ongoing history of an entire world and it's three continents it does help to be long winded. Or if you're describing a crime scene etc.

 

Typically the only genre I see where a lot of pages is common place anymore is Fantasy tbth. Cause I mean I just finished A Song of Ice and Fire and just started The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo series and it's significantly shorter (both books coming up to a total of 1000 some pages, while that's the average length of the last three ASoIaF books).

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Really depends on what's going on. Where the "bigger is better" trend gets really annoying is in descriptions of small, insignificant things - purple prose, basically. If you don't actually need to draw someone's attention to something, don't waste two or twenty lungfuls of air telling us about it.

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