For the little of you that have been following my Bionicle epic I have some news about it.

I am going to totally get rid of every thing that has been done. Granted there isn't much but I feel like this needs to be done. I wouldn't say what I have done is bad. i have some very good ideas but it is going to take time to put them on paper. I want to actually take pride in my work, rather than just throwing something together for the sake of the story getting out there. The basis of the plot will be very similar but I have taken into account a lot of things the amazing people that have taken the time to read and comment have said. I feel as if the first few paragraphs were nice and poetic but then it just trailed off. Bare in mind I am writing this as if you guys have never heard of Bionicle before so don't be mad if I go over stuff you already know. If I ever do release it to other forums then i want it to be accessible.

To be honest, when I read my work back, all i get is "This is okay, but you can do so much better." and I dont think you should ever feel like that about your own work. I'm no professional, so don't expect this next one to be perfect. However, do expect it to be at the top of my current ability. If you do comment on it don't be afraid to say "This part is really bad becuase... I think you could make this better by..."

It really does help. i cant learn any other way.

Thanks for reading this.

I will also write a fair chunk of the story before I release it so you can really get the gist of the plot. I hope you stay tuned. Please put in the comments what you think about this Idea.

Thanks so much the people that commented on my previous chapters. Of any one could still comment on them, that would be great, so i know good things to do for nest time.

-Sam-