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Poem On Y27

Arch-Angel

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I made this a couple of days before the BZP Rap. Its messy, given the hour I made was alo Spanish Class. I believe the BZP Rap was better, but this one is deep.

Y27

Oh what a year it has been

Have you seen the pain, hate and sin?

Everything went so fast

But is it all in the past?

 

Why is it that I wear the scars

And people rise above as stars

And choose to beat me down

And when I call for help

I receive not a sound?

 

They don't care what they need

Their drive is terrible greed

I'm a caged bird singing

I need to breathe

Is anyone going to set me free?

 

2007 was a year of pain

And 2008 only looks to be more insane

But I'm going to rise above all the factions

Not have my words always speak

But instead my actions

 

Trust me, in this world now, you have to...

Because their determined to rip you to fractions.

 

Now in the criticism, I hope you know what you mean by having to stretch the rhyme. The poems I write are meant for speaking, not reading. So read it outloud, not in your mind.

 

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Teebert

Gravitan, it's a poem, not a rap song.

Arch-Angel, this is, like you said, a deep poem. I understand the rhyme-stretching, having done so before when I need to write poems for school. But a very nice poem, nonetheless.

By the way, what's the title of the song of the day?

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