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Coming Soon, "haywired"


Ka-Chan

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2037. With the world's countries at peace and universal prosperity bringing great wealth to all sides, nations of great power like the United States have been able to boldly shatter old technological barriers. But their greatest breakthrough of all has been hidden from the eyes of mainstream society.

 

Cerebatech, the goverment's secret source of advanced weapon technologies, have finally accomplished what they have long promised their client: an adroid capable of free thought and action. A machine with limitless potential for any purpose, practically being a human being in itself- the perfect weapon of war in the eyes of the USA's military.

 

But what happens when this aware robot, lacking emotion but still wielding a sense of judgement, goes rogue and flees it's own masters? What happens when it developes a grudge against mankind, convinced that humans are monsterous brutes playing with fire? The many branches of the goverment pursue the machine, bent on dragging it back for revision. A cat and mouse chase.

 

But that all changes when the machine meets a 17 year old girl by the name of Angela.

 

And so a tale unfolds about man and machine. A tale of fate. A tale of what the heart and soul really is. Above all, it is a story about the bond between a young girl and an engineered killing machine, determined to be something more then just a weapon.

 

But with the military, secret goverment branches, and it's own combat programming starting to work against it, can this robot ever hope to last long enough to find it's place in the world?

 

I've had this story under my wing for a lonnnnggg time now, people. Recently unearthing it, I'm eager to begin writing it. I only hope it will appeal to all of you.

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Sounds like AI and Irobot combined.

 

Sounds equally promising though. Are you really eager though? Because if you are, you'll end up writing it like I did with my book. I'm now eager to write the sequal.

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Sounds like AI and Irobot combined.

 

Sounds equally promising though. Are you really eager though? Because if you are, you'll end up writing it like I did with my book. I'm now eager to write the sequal.

 

Well Bobo, it's certainly not going to be a full length book, either. Nothing publishing-worthy. I think. I'll just need to see where it goes ^^;

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Why do this sounds like Appleseed: Ex Machina? And why you calls Xar Bobo?

 

Nyah- Appleseed is an action flick while this is more of something along the lines of Iron Giant. But it is my own, don't get me wrong.

 

And I called Xar "Bobo" because that's my nickname for him in reality XP

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