Good chapter, Seran! I hate cliffhangers, though- what are those things? Why is the city deserted? Why were you outside the city? Why am I asking all these questions?

Oh well, who cares. Great epic!

Without cliffhangers, it wouldn't really be very exciting. -Seran

Yay, finally !

*goes to read*

EDIT: *takes banner* I had to, after reading the chapter!

Loved it, plenty of dialouge and little featurets in a way, stunning and brilliant. You MUST keep this up!

Though your character (yourself) is very mysterious. All those who raise their hand say that Seran is creeping us out! :Everybody raises their hand: lol

There is a very big mystery here, that you could probably solve right now. All I'll suggest is that you check everything in my Brickshelf - there are some huge clues there.

-Seran

OMG!!!!The two black figures are Magna 1 and Magna 2!!!!One of them may be Magna GX,but you write it so cool and you said there was a hint in your brickshelf!!!!and your only MOC that has a pair(else than Velika and Balta)is Magna 1 and Magna 2!!!!oh boy this is so cool,I cant hardly wait!!!!

Ah, but I didn't say look for a pair of MOCs. You might be right - but then again, you might not. -S