Yeah, I'll definitely check it out and try to write a review up. Just one thing, though: If you put spaces in between each "paragraph" [basically every time you hit "enter," hit "enter" again] or add indents [-------[/ color] (without spaces)], it makes it easier on the eyes to read. For me, at least.

Good to see you writing again, JG. ^^

Yeah, I'll definitely check it out and try to write a review up. Just one thing, though: If you put spaces in between each "paragraph" [basically every time you hit "enter," hit "enter" again] or add indents [-------[/ color] (without spaces)], it makes it easier on the eyes to read. For me, at least.

 

Good to see you writing again, JG. ^^

 

Yeah, I used to double space every story I wrote; this was the first I didn't... Haha. But, I fixed it for ya'; hope it helps. And thanks a lot in advance!!

-JG

Just finished reading it. I think it was great. I really liked it. I especially liked the ending. Very well done.