Mentha

Okay, the first comic seemed okay. But, why are there two shades of red when Vulcan is speaking? Also, not to be rude, but you misspelled 'Legends'.

the two red was a mistake. huh.... maybe I should use spellchecks

I would if I had 3-shade. I only have 6-shade.

if you want you could send me the six shade sheet and I'll make a three shade one

I can't form an opinion from this comic yet, other than the fact that you need to make the text easier to read (Choose colors wisely, it's ok to have a different shade of the same color for one character if it's the only way to make it readable) and spell things better.

 

Grammar is important and will make way more people pay attention and respect you, along with your work, by extension.

 

But I'll be checking back to this so I can see if I really like it or not.

thanks for the advice. I hope you do like it

welcome to my new comics The Ledgendary Ledgends of Ledgendaryness

your average BZP comic with more crazy than.... @0£"! I lost the script...

oh well..

Comics

1.the guy in the window looks shady

2.The Basement box

I'll accept PGS' and GS' if you PM me with Chimoru 3-shade sprite sheet and a description in this profile form thing

E.g.

Name: Potato

Powers: Wields the mighty power of Spudzy Galore

*Backround: he grew up ina small field blah blah blah

Likes: dirt

Dislikes: The sight of mashed potatoes

Personality:has much anger towards carrots

Favourite colour:

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I think she spared one to use as a body

seems like the assumption that the makuta survived was right

Who knew Makron was so modest?

I'm seeing more and more similarities between New. Gav and Teridax

what did Gavla bring the soldiers for if he was just going kill the guards then teleport them away?

 

He brought the soldiers to shoot/disable the guards of the Makuta if you notice in the comic. Then he teleports them away since he doesn't need them anymore at that moment.

 

~Soran

thank you for explaining

what did Gavla bring the soldiers for if he was just going kill the guards then teleport them away?