Katoris

A green fellow staring like a weirdo

Why are you hitting yourself?

A dawg with a scarf.

An arm holding a sword... and a bug? moth?

It's just really hard to see.

Axxon. What else to say?

Kagome!!!

I have managed to get out of going into hiatus!

A new character shall be coming to the series this week!

Prepare yourself, for he's coming...!

It should be easier to see if you look down at it, at an angle.

Someone smirking at me.

I wish I could breathe underwater.

Don't play with fire.

Apparently someone doesn't like gloves.

Sprites, Sprites, and coffee.

That's tea!  >

It appears he might be as insane as me.

Argh. Three different colored letters. What else is there to say?

Glad to see you are back to work! Keep it up!

 

Uh thank you, I thought you went on break or something?

 

 

 

 I thought so too.   Fortunately no.

Glad to see you are back to work! Keep it up!

Why is the ninja chinese?! Ignore my whining, I liked it.

I going to try keep going no matter what. I still have characters to introduce, and I came up with an awesome, and amazing story arc.

Even if you do start seeing less of me, I'm going to find some way to continue my work! I'm brimming with confidence!

A guy with a hammerhead shark head. I dunno.

Depending on what happens, I may be gone for a long time again. 

I had such big plans too. Oh, well. At least you guys can wish me happiness for this.

Not really a comic, and a terrible time for me to possibly end the season.

Wish me luck that I can keep going on with it, guys. I will try to keep you updated on what happens.

Good bye. Hopefully not a long one.

~Katoris

Thanks, Loganto!

The comic I had planned to make is being canceled temporarily, due to a very special occasion!

You shall find out Sunday!

~Katoris

Thanks!

Special Announcement!

New character coming next comic! And sorry, TBK, not you. 

New Comic! Been Forever!

Return from "Vacation"

Though I don't know if anyone will notice me. 

~Katoris

My elder brother was your chosen first random viewer.

 

Well, I really don't know what to do next, so I'm just going to request critiques.

 

Thanks.

 

Well I'll be honest, I didn't read all your comics at first, but now I did. 

 

So withe visuals, I think you know what you're doing. You're really good with gimp or photoshop or whatever you use. So I don't think you need feedback on that. 

 

 

Story wise however I think needs work.

 

So to begin, if your series is being taken this seriously, you should definitely hold to your standard to make good fun story arcs. However, I'm not sure if the overall tone of your series so far is fun and exciting.

 

Kortis's (or you in this case) always seems like he's peeved with everybody. When it comes to comics and comedy, anything could be funny if done right. However, it feels that since you've surrounded the series around Kortis being peeved with everyone around him, it's more annoying and discouraging to me as the reader. So I think you need a happy character, or at least, you should bring another one that will change Kortis for the better. Cause the flow of the comics is that Kortis is bored, everyone annoys him, and he can never get to his tea that he's inexplicably attached to. 

 

Also as a side note that everyone can grow on I think.

When it comes to comics with the "PGSs vs the Author" genre, what the heck does that entail? Does this mean, the author produces comics elsewhere off screen but is never recorded and the PGSs are there to...be interviewed? Interviewed for what?

 

I don't think your comics are stupid. We're all comic makers, therefore we're all gonna take it seriously. And the comic section is to provide enjoyable strips to read on a daily/weekly bases. And I believe your comics have potential! But don't take all of what I've said as an excuse to not continue. My next implore for you is that you except what I've incited, take what you want, and then change what you think should change. I can't rewrite your comics for you, but I do believe it does need some more work in the story aspect. I won't go into the specific details, but I think I've already generalized in the above statements. 

 

How's that critique?

 

This is very helpful to me. I really appreciate it. I'll review it thoroughly later, and work on it. 

Well, I really don't know what to do next, so I'm just going to request critiques.

Thanks.