Sad-Machine

He's cool the only suggestion I could make would be to change the mask to a black or red one.Other than that hes a really cool moc i love how you did the veil and the weapons.

My self Moc

AI_1422

AI_1422

*1422 was a slave that used to work for the warlords in his home country of Nori.

Slave_1422 suffered an accident at work and was near death.The warlords decided to

test their new technology on him  this technology would load in an artificial intelligence

into an organic body.The warlords tested Slave_1422 with this technology.

The technology failed at its original purpose instead it fused the AI with slave_1422's

mind.It retained the consciousness of Slave_1422 and some of his memories.though

his voice now sounded robotic and he lacked emotions.

He was dumped on the outskirts of the facility he was working in and began wandering

He was no longer Slave_1422 he was AI_1422.

*His name is pronounced one four twenty two

AI_1422 has Digistruct technology built into his arm

meaning he can spawn weapons from his arm for a period of time.

Album-http://imgur.com/a/kqvnW

Toa:Nuparu,He was my first toa and still my favorite toa.

Barraki:Pridak He was my first bionicle so i would chose him just out of nostalgia.

Titan:Hydraxon

Black and white misprinted Ruru......

I don't have a lot of rare stuff.

I think the orange-white one has a very cool color scheme, and his custom body is interesting, The round parts on the side poke out kind of far, and make him look robotic - it looks good, but it may not be what you're going for. I also like his weapon, although it seems a little small. It might look better with an additional white piece at the top, but I'm not sure what exactly.

 

The green-black one is nice, just lacking a little color. I also do not understand what his weapon is supposed to be; as far as I can tell it is just a stick. I like his proportions - the thin shoulders make him look a little slender, which makes sense for a green Toa.

 

The brown-grey one is a little off. There aren't quite enough brown pieces for brown to be the primary color, and you used brown armor and feet which is typically where the primary color will be. His hands are also an odd color, and the silver armor clashes a little. Colors aside, he's pretty cool! I actually like how small he looks compared to the other two, and I like his custom body, particularly the gears.

 

The blue-gold one is cool, and besides a few oddities, the colors work nicely. I especially like the tubes in the torso.

 

Overall it's a fine group of MoCs, with some interesting custom torsos and color choices.

Yeah the green guy is green/metru blue its hard to tell cause of the lighting.Yeah his weapon is pretty much a stick it was based of one of those kendo sticks.Anyways thanks for the feedback its appreciated.

Hey i seen your submission on reddit eariler,This guys an awesome MOC,the zaktan blades make an awesome tiki mask sort of face thing.Anyways graet Moc

I like him,though one improvement that you could make would be to replace the swords with the red on them with something else it kinda breaks up his colour scheme but im just being nitpicky,Anyways he's brillant Moc.

So basically I'm looking for honest/harsh feedback.I want to improve as a MOCist and the best way to do that is to find out what I'm doing wrong but also find out what I'm doing right.

Heres 3 of the mocs-http://imgur.com/a/2X1l7

The 4th one's here-http://i.imgur.com/IwUN8yi.jpg

They have different links cause I took one of the pictures today and couldn't add it to the folder.

*I can get higher quailty/clearer pictures tommorow if you need them.

Title-Malus

Link-http://imgur.com/rjTGqFP

I personally have mixed feelings about it,I dislike the fact we will have limited masks for mocing.But I appreciate that Lego is trying to start complety fresh with this,I just hope they release mask packs to give MOCers more variety with masks.

They can give you alot  of varity for parts in diffrent colours but i dont really want to be spending money of the exact same set just recolored.

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Toa Metru head. I wish I had more of them, as well as unbroken Inika torsos... *sniffle*...

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Inika Nuparus drill gun thingy.

Whats your favorite head piece.Mine is probally the classic mata head.

Hmm is this tread anything musical related.I brought a fender squire mustang a while back in may/july brought it to school for music class and when I take it out of the bag there's 2 cracks in the body like someone stood on it.Anyways that may be off topic because most of the posts here are about cds/vinyls ect.The last cd I brought was Led Zeppelins' Mothership great album its basically the best of led zeppelin if you want to get into zeppelin get this album you wont regret it.

Hmmm I'm not a cheese person tough I don't mind it when its with something else.Though I do enjoy grilled cheese sandwiches quite alot.I don't like the strong cheese but I think the lighter stuff can be okay.

Man over at reddit they had a Moc contest and the theme was plants this would of fit in just fine.

This is awesome,Im getting a ketongu vibe off of him,a toa who spent years in isolation meditating.

Great Builds,though one thing im not a fan of is the random zamour lancher on reidak's waist.Just some critisim.Apart from that good job.

XD haha love it

Edit: Please leave more constructive feedback next time!

-Wind-

I used to sit like L from death note in school.So yeaah:P

Take the power back by Rage against the machine.I love that bassline.

Bionicle is made for kids you would probally not be interested in bionicle if you where not a kid.

Not saying its not for teenagers/adults its enjoyed by all.

The new Onua looks great for parts he has some great translucent purple and I love his mask.I believe we will also see a toa hordika torso which its great to see some old parts with the new sets.Though as a set onua looks way to bulky ill probably just get him to have all 6 though I do see myself buying another one for parts.