SkyLandOceAnna Posted December 24, 2012 Share Posted December 24, 2012 From the mountains highTo the ocean’s floorOr higher in the atmosphereLives creatures we all adoreSome slime or slitherSome walk or crawlSome swing or hangFrom branches in forests so tallStill they all live togetherEven though some are dangerousAnd some are less than cuteBut can be carnivorousSome are near extinctionThey are endangeredThey just want a chance to live onThey just need to be heard. Quote Wordsmith <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ballom Nom Nom Posted December 24, 2012 Share Posted December 24, 2012 Welcome to BZPower! You've certainly done a first post in style, and I really like this poem. The meter is established quite well, and it flows nicely even though some parts don't rhyme perfectly. But that's okay, because it sets up a nice beat.More importantly, I'm glad that you chose this topic for your poem. If there's one responsibility that we all share as human beings, it is that we must cherish and protect the wild creatures that share Earth with us. Obviously it is critical to protect those creatures that are endangered, but why should we stop with only those? No matter how loathsome or perplexing they may be, all animals have their own place in nature. You've really captured that idea, that they all have stories to tell, and that people simply need to listen.With any luck, this topic should get plenty of love now that the new forum has been added. Keep up the good work! ~B~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkyLandOceAnna Posted December 24, 2012 Author Share Posted December 24, 2012 @ Ballum: Thank you for your comment. I appreciate the recognition for this short poem. I don't know why I thought of it; it was just something I thought up in a few minutes. Thank you for taking the time to read and respond! Quote Wordsmith <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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