Failed Poetry
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I was suggested the idea of making more elemental poems, so I decided to give it a shot with making "The Tale of Ice". Didn't work out so well as you can tell from the title. These are all fragments of the poem. Specifically, they were different ways to start it. Here's what I got.
Let me tell you a fun, wonderful tale
of sights to behold beyond this white veil,
Mirror, mirror, oh help me find my way.
Please find me some warmth, and a place to stay.
Crystal clear,
like that of a mirror.
Mirror, mirror, oh please tell me the tale;
of bright white blankets that cover the land.
Tell me of the sights beyond this white veil,
Oh please, won't you help me to understand.
Tell me of ice, the coolness of it all,
The stoic blizzard that never will stall.
"Mirror, mirror, oh please help me to see
beyond this white veil, the places I'll be.
Warn me of the danger, of what's to come,
find me some shelter before I am numb."
"Little one, do not fret, as I am always here.
Snow is not your enemy; yours is simply fear."
"Its fear of what's to come which causes me to yield,
Please, mirror, oh mirror, protect me with your shield."
I came up with one idea of making a poem based around the Mask of Life's challenge for Matoro in the dark cave, of helping a friend through the dark. Besides this idea and the elements, I've got nothing.
Any of you got any good ideas for a poem surrounding BIONICLE?
~Soran
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