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Fall of Rome - Review Topic

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#1 Offline The Forgotten Wonder

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Posted Nov 27 2013 - 07:10 PM

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Here is where feedback for my new epic, Fall of Rome is held. I would be very grateful if you give me criticism for this story since this story is on the brink of the political guidelines here in BZP. My story is not meant to spark politics here so please do not do so, and I am asking a staff member to check how it it is. 

 

So read, and tell me how it is so I can improve my new story.


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#2 Offline Darth Kranie

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Posted Nov 28 2013 - 10:34 AM

It seems really nice. My favourite part was when the rebels tried attacking the UN army. 


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#3 Offline The Forgotten Wonder

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Posted Nov 28 2013 - 08:20 PM

Thanks man. That's my favorite too. Also to anyone who is reading, I'll to update the story every week or two weeks.
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