Temple Warlord (?)

[Jobber]

Since I'm slowly starting to get back into MOCing, might as well post my first complex-ish MOC ever. Haven't worked out a backtory for him, though.

 

When I started working on the legs, I tried going with the classic digitigrade-style so it ended up looking like '01 Teridax's legs...Ugh.

As you can clearly see, I ran out of dark gold pieces, so I ended up making the bottom half silver. Which diverged away from the Vex characters that I wanted it to be inspired from. Now there's....nothing more to say, except but to feel free to criticize my MOC (I'll try not to cry too much. )and give building tips pleeeease. 

Pics: http://i.imgur.com/WWnTfzg.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/NWAbjMF.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/YY1LbQO.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/AxLNjCs.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/MtZ3WZm.jpg


   (Ignore the scavenged Tunneler Beast in the background ;P)

Edited January 16, 2015 by Chasm

[The 1st Shadow]

It's interesting, I'll say that. Hard to comment on the flow of it since you don't picture both the upper body and the legs in the same shot. The arms look pretty decent, and the head is intriguing. I'm not sure exactly where is starts and stops, though. It's not bad, that's for sure. Decent piece of work! I actually like how the legs emulate Teridax's.

[Jobber]

It's interesting, I'll say that. Hard to comment on the flow of it since you don't picture both the upper body and the legs in the same shot. The arms look pretty decent, and the head is intriguing. I'm not sure exactly where is starts and stops, though. It's not bad, that's for sure. Decent piece of work! I actually like how the legs emulate Teridax's.

Thanks a bunch! So you're not sure where the head starts and stops?

[The 1st Shadow]

 

It's interesting, I'll say that. Hard to comment on the flow of it since you don't picture both the upper body and the legs in the same shot. The arms look pretty decent, and the head is intriguing. I'm not sure exactly where is starts and stops, though. It's not bad, that's for sure. Decent piece of work! I actually like how the legs emulate Teridax's.

Thanks a bunch! So you're not sure where the head starts and stops?

 

I can see the gold coloration and some of the basic shape, but the camera angles and position of the hands in most of the shots obscure it a little bit.