Sybre Posted November 29, 2011 Share Posted November 29, 2011 (edited) Okay, here it is! Tell me what you think of my epic here! Tell me what you like and dislike of it. I'm listening! Edited November 29, 2011 by Sybre Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JiMing Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 So wait, were you the legendary hero who founded Delva-Nui?And I think your epic is good, but perhaps you could work on better formatting. Just a suggestion. Quote Haven't seen one of these in a long time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted December 25, 2011 Author Share Posted December 25, 2011 So wait, were you the legendary hero who founded Delva-Nui?And I think your epic is good, but perhaps you could work on better formatting. Just a suggestion.Eh, mostly. But I made up Delva-Nui long before I came up with Sybre. I even drew a map or two of it. I even remember what it looks like! And formatting? Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JiMing Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 What I meant is that maybe instead of just one large paragraph, you could split up the chapter into different paragraphs to match the tone of each scene. Quote Haven't seen one of these in a long time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted January 1, 2012 Author Share Posted January 1, 2012 What I meant is that maybe instead of just one large paragraph, you could split up the chapter into different paragraphs to match the tone of each scene.Oh. I get it. Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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