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Posted Feb 29 2012 - 12:01 PM

Posted ImageHERO RECON TEAM ALPHA 8 CHAPTER 1 A HERO IS BORNCLANK!!!!!CLANK!!!The neutral blue and lime green hero was being built, step by step by step.CLANK!!!!!!The sound of the clank seemed to echo through the scientist and engineer specialist's circuits as they were building the fresh new hero.CLANK!!!!!CLANK!!!!!!ZZZZZZTTZZZ!!!!!His legs were complete, and so was his body.CLANK!!!!!!!!ZZZZZZZZZZTZZZZ!!!!!!!His head was on.CLANK!!!!CLANK!!!!!!ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZTZZ!!!!!!ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZTZZ!!!!!!Now the hero's arms were finished.CLANK!!!!!CLANK!!!!!ZZZZZZZTZZZ!!!!!!ZZZZZZZZZZZTZZZZ!!!!!!!His hands were now complete.CLANK!!!!!CLANK!!!!!ZZZZZZTZZZ!!!!!!ZZZZZZTZZZ!!!!!!!!The hero’s top-of-the-line and state-of-the-art leg armor was on.CLANK!!!!!!!!!ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZTZZ!!!!!!!!His chest plate was now on.CLANK!!!!!!!!!!!ZZZZZZZZZZZZTZZZ!!!!!!!!!!His helmet was now on him and his weapon was placed in his hand. Next his transparent lime green hero core was place on him.ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZAAAAAAAAAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!The hero was now charged.To be continued…….Here is the HERO RECON TEAM ALPHA 8 review topic.HERO RECON TEAM ALPHA 8 CHAPTER 2 WELCOME TO THE HERO FACTORYAlpha 8 leader William Mercury Torch watched as the rookie started moving little by little.“So, what is his name?” asked Alexander Slime Torch.“His name is Richard Pierce Breaker .” answered Akiyama Makuro.The rookie got up. He looked around. Then he looked at his weapon.“What does this thing do?” said Richard Pierce Breaker.“DO NOT PULL THE TRIGGER! DO NOT PULL THE……….” Jacob Shock King was suddenly interrupted by the sound of the gun's blast before he could finish his sentence.“Well he pulled it.” said Rick Iron Fist.“Coooooooool!!! You want to know what would go good with this a weapon that would look like a staff but it would have blade on top of it that bends downward a little.” said Richard Pierce Breaker.“You mean a scythe” said Alexander X-ray King“Yes if that is what it is called, anyway, can I have a scythe!?” asked Richard Pierce Breaker.William Mercury Torch looked at the damage Pierce did to the wall then he looked at Pierce and imagined him with a scythe and a large heavy artillery gun and said, “Ah no, I think the heavy artillery gun is enough.”“Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.” said Pierce.“Pierce come with me” said MakuroPierce came with Makuro; he then asked “where are we going?”“To your hero pod” answered, MakuroOnce they were at Pierce's hero pod which Pierce thought took forever the building was so large and had so many people in it he wondered why."Why were so many people in that building and why was the building so large?" Pierce thought to himself.Makuro turned to Pierce and said, “This is your hero pod it is where you will sleep, good luck on all your missions and welcome to the Hero Factory”To be continued……………………………..

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Posted Mar 01 2012 - 07:51 AM

HERO RECON TEAM ALPHA 8 CHAPTER 3 TRAININGPierce looked around. He was told that he was in the virtual training sphere but, he was in a city which did not make any sense.As he looked around he said to himself “This must be the virtual part and I do not think that I want to know what the training part is………..” He began to say but, he was suddenly interrupted by a tall person with a chain attached to his ax.“Hello hero!!!!!!!!” said, the tall person with the chain ax.“This must be the training part.” said, Pierce to himself.“Hello my name Garuntus what is your name?” Garuntus asked.“My name is Richard Pierce Breaker and I am here to take you down!” said, Pierce as he charged at Garuntus.“What a coincidence, I am here to do the exact same thing!” said, Garuntus as he charged at Pierce.Garuntus grabbed the chain part of his ax and swung it at Pierce but, Pierce quickly jumped high in the air and shot at Garuntus who was sent flying in the air because of the impact. As soon as Pierce was on the ground Garuntus charged and swung his forward at Pierce the Garutus swung it backwards then forward and then backwards, Pierce quickly realized that he had an advantage. He realized that when the ax hit the ground it got stuck and it would take Garutus 5 seconds to pull it out. As soon as Pierce realized this he charge at Garutus when his weapon was stuck and shot a powerful blow at his chest, the impact destroyed Garuntus completely.William Mercury Torch ran to Pierce and said, “Good work kid”“Thank you but, it was all in a good days wor………….ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ” Pierce began to say but, he fell asleep before he could say it all.“O great now I am going to have to carry him to his hero pod what is next do I have to have to sing him a lullaby?” said, Mercury .“That would be nice mommy” said, Pierce in his sleep.“Pierce you must have some strange dreams” said, MercuryTo be continued………………………….

Edited by TOA PIRAKA HAKANN 2.0, Mar 06 2012 - 08:19 AM.

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Posted Mar 01 2012 - 10:40 PM

HERO RECON TEAM CHAPTER 4 MISSION KONDARKOMeanwhile, while Pierce was training hero James Ultimate Gunner was sent to fight a dangerous criminally insane villain named Kondarko who was walking through a dark street in Makuhero city.James Ultimate Gunner ran and ran and ran but, not from something, at something. That something was known as Kondarko. Kondarko ran from James Ultimate Gunner as well as dodging deadly blast from Ultimate Gunner. Kondarko stopped and as soon as Ultimate Gunner got close he back flipped and hit him with his sword in midair which sent Ultimate Gunner flying through a wall or two Ultimate Gunner wasn’t sure how many wall he went through but, he did know that he was paralyzed. He could not move, he could not attack and he could not defend the city or even himself. He knew it was the end. His caller was broken even if it did work he was paralyzed anyway so he could not move to get it and call for help.“You heroes are truly pitiful.” Kondarko said.“Shut up!” yelled Ultimate Gunner.“You have not changed at all from the time you have been a rookie to the time you became a second-in-command” said Kondarko“Shu..Sh..SHUT UP!”yelled Ultimate Gunner.“It is useless to keep saying that now prepare to die” yelled KondarkoJust as Kondarko was about to make the final blow someone stopped him.The strange bulky being with wheels looked at the second-in-command James Ultimate Gunner and said “I know you can do better than this, this guy is a wimp.”“You, it can not be, your Crusher Wheels one of the most dangerous villain on are most wanted list and………” He started to say but, he was suddenly interrupted by Crusher Wheels.“Who cares, any way, as I was saying you can do better fighting than this after all I did train you.” Crusher Wheels said in a cold and dark voice.To be continued…


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Posted Mar 02 2012 - 11:37 AM

HERO RECON TEAM ALPHA 8 CHAPTER 5 THE STRANGE VISITORSCrusher Wheels hit Kondarko with his spiked club and turned to Gunner which sent Kondarko flying through ten buildings and knocked him unconscious. Crusher Wheels turned to Gunner, Gunner realized that Crusher Wheels still had his shiny green hero core that he had when he was Gunners team leader.“What is wrong with you do you even remember my name” asked Crusher Wheels.“Yes, and I despise it more and more everyday” answered Gunner.“What is then? Go on and say it!” Crusher Wheels yelled.“ Hero Zackeus Garatin is your name” Gunner answered.“Good to know that you still know my name. You are probably wondering why I am here?” asked Crusher Wheels.“Yes, I am. Go on.” said Gunner“I am here to recruit you for my organization, which is also why I am protecting you” said Crusher Wheels.“Did you really expect me to say “yes”? I know you have probably gone insane over the years but, I never knew you would be this insane!” said Gunner.“Okay, but, just in case you change your mind, I will fix you and protect you any way for a short time.” said Crusher Wheels.It only took Crusher Wheels a few minutes to fix Gunner. Once Gunner was fix he pulled the trigger on his gun that was aiming at Crusher Wheels face. Crusher Wheel was only 2 feet away from Gunner yet he dodged the bullet by moving his head slightly right. All Gunner could do was stare at Crusher Wheels in awe and wonder how he managed to pull it off.“You must be surprised AI was only 2 feet away from your bullet and yet I dodged it, anyway nice seeing you today.” Crusher Wheels said.“Wait come back I am not finished with……” Gunner started to say but was suddenly interrupted by Crusher Wheels.“Teleportationeeus how many times must I tell you do not watch me fight any of my personal fights” Crusher wheels said.“Sorry I could not resist” said Teleportationeeus.“Wait a second your……..” He started to say but, he was interrupted by Teleportationeeus before he could finish.“Hero Zacky Darguntoo” Teleportationeeus siad.“Teleportationeeus open a portal to our HQ” said Crusher Wheels.“Yes, sir” Teleportationeeus siad.Teleportationeeus made a large hole in the air that both Teleportationeeus and Crusher Wheels walked into and in 2 seconds they disappeared. Gunner felt defeated and useless. He walkedover to Kondarko who was still unconscious and hero-cuffed him. Gunner then put the villain on the prototype hero-bike and drove to the Hero Factory. As Gunner drove the coal black darkness seemed to surround him with shame, fear, and anger. Gunner wondered why his former leader had betrayed the Hero Factory. Although it was only a 10 minute drive to the Hero Factory it felt like it was going to take forever because of all the anger and fear he had inside him. When he got to the Hero Factory two green prison guard heroes took Kondarko. Gunner slowly walked through the still crowded Hero Factory which made him feel worse because he hated large crowds. When he got to his chrome hero pod he went inside and fell asleep. He knew he was going to need that sleep because tomorrow he was going to do team training with the new rookie and all of the other Hero Recon Team Alpha 8 members. He felt sorry for the rookie because he knew that if the villains he did encountered recently had a large and powerful organization then the rookie would have to come out of training early and do a mission he might not be prepared for. Gunner decided to put those thoughts aside and go to sleep and that is what he did.To be continued………………………………………………
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Posted Mar 05 2012 - 09:22 PM

HERO RECON TEAM ALPHA 8 CHAPTER 6 MISSION BATEEUSDuring Pierce’s training hero Alexander Slime Torch was sent on a mission to investigate mysterious “large black bat” sightings Makuhero city.Torch looked around the streets and skies of Makuhero city he saw nothing that had to do with a “large black bat” at all.SWOOOSH!!!!CRASH!!!!!“Hello hero” said the bat like villain who had a transparent red hero core and glowing red eyes.“I should have known it was you Bateeus” said Torch“Yes, in fact I made it completely obvious on purpose; to test the Hero Recon Team’s so called “vast intelligence” I guess they must have been lying” Bateeus said.BOOM!!!BOOOOM!!!!Torch dodged the blast. He then saw that Bateeus was gone. Something told torch to look up to the sky and to torch’s dismay Bateeus was flying 80 miles per hour towards him.Torch dodged Bateeus only to find himself trapped by a different villain.The four legged villain who had a transparent orange hero core and a silver sword grabbed Torch and said “Hello Torch it has been years since we have seen each other”“Former heroes Zock Zanator and Mac Nonorranto, I never thought you two would team up, when you were still heroes you never got along with each other so why the partnership” Torch asked.“We have joined an organization that has to do with…..former heroes” answered Bateeus.“That still does not explain why you teamed up” said Torch.“Don’t you get it, we are part of the same organization therefore I have to work with him and other former heroes” said the stranger whose name was Sentarus.“Do you think we lost all sanity when we became villains? If so you dead wrong. We still have sanity left in us. We made an advance organization that cannot even be located by the Hero Recon Team.” said Bateeus.“Why are you here?” Torch asked.“We came here to stop by and say “Hi” to you. As I said before I made it completely obvious on purpose of course testing the Hero Recon Team’s intellect was not the only reason” said Bateeus.Torch struggled to get out of Sentarus’s grip. He kicked Sentarus and loosened his grip then in midair Torch shot at Sentarus but, Sentarus dodged every shot. While he was in midair Bateeus attempted to grab Torch but, missed him. Torch landed on the roof top of a building and shot at Bateeus. Bateeus quickly dodged every. Behind Torch Sentarus jumped on the roof top and charged at Torch. Torch turned around and shot at Sentarus which sent Sentarus flying off the rooftop.ZZZZZTZZZAAP!!!!Torch turned around he saw two villains. One of them had green hero core and wheels as feet and the other had a staff and a yellow hero core. Torch knew who these villains were. They were villains who were former heroes named Zackeus Garatin and Zacky Darguntoo now known as Crusher Wheels and Teleportationeeus.“It is about time you two came here!” yelled Bateeus.“Sorry, we confronted by hero named James Ultimate Gunner and we failed to do any damage to him” said Crusher Wheels.“Who cares about the status of your mission? Come on Sentarus let’s get out of here.” said Bateeus.“Wait, I did not say that you could leave I am not finished with you yet!” yelled TorchBOOOM!!!!BOOOM!!!!!BOOOOM!!!!He successfully shot down Teleportationeeus and the teleportation portal was closed.VROOOOOOOOM!!!!!Crusher Wheels drove towards Torch. Torch shot at Crusher Wheels who was advancing towards Torch.BOOOM!!!!!BAM!!!!ZAP!!!Just as the bullet was about to hit Crusher a portal appeared in front of Crusher Wheels and the bullets went in it. Then a portal appeared behind Torch and the bullet that Torch had shot that went in the portal came out and hit Torch instead. Torch did not have enough time to dodge the bullet. The impact was devastating. It sent Torch flying face first on the hard concrete roof. Teleportationeeus hit Torch with his staff then stomped on him and kicked him.“Did you really think you could defeat or even injure me that easily? You are an insignificant fool! We have much more power than you do and will continue to have much more power than you!” yelled Teleportationeeus.Teleportationeeus use his staff to make a portal in thin air. The villains went inside the glowing portal and disappeared. All Torch could see now was darkness. He felt something that as an experienced hero he never thought he would feel: frightened. When he looked around he saw a book dropped by one of the villains he crawled over to it slowly.He then looked at the book it read “I hope you enjoy this book because, it is the last one you will ever read!! P.S there is a bomb at the back of this book.”Torch looked at the back of the book he saw to his dismay a bomb that would blow up in 1 hour, 59 minutes, and 59 seconds. Torch did not know what to do but, he figured he may as well try to deactivate it.Before he could even start to try to deactivate it someone with a transparent lime green hero core grabbed him by the neck and said “You better not deactivate that bomb Torch or I could end your life much faster right now.”To be continued……………………….

Edited by TOA PIRAKA HAKANN 2.0, Mar 06 2012 - 08:37 AM.

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