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[Ganto]

Review:http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=6677In the time before time...

The Great Spirit descended from the heavens, holding the Matoran with him and bringing them to this paradise.Then, a young Matoran known as Takua summoned the six Toa to their island home.Yet they were only six...CHAPTER ONE... THE DREAM.

The Toa Have Been Summoned...Summoned...Summoned......I woke with a shout from my dream. I have already heard the good- great news! I thought. but I had suspicions about it. I pondered this dream until..."C'mon Loganto! You going to join-race kewa flying or what?" A matoran named Bolok said."Be right there!" I said.I went to see my kewa, foluk, to find out his condition. It wasn't good. Sick. I went to tell Boluk. Yet before I could, Matau stopped me." you seem head-jumbled, young one. What's wrong." He said."I had a dream. It was about the toa-heroes." I said."What kind of Dream?""I feel as if I was summoned, turaga. To be a toa..."Matau gasped, as if he had seen a large beast behind me. "come to my hut, we can talk-speak there."

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Oct 21 2012 - 03:57 PM.

[Ganto]

Chapter Two... THE TRUTH

"Loganto... Have you ever felt like the wind-blow was in your favor? Or the plants Drew away-gone from your feet?"I thought for a moment. then I said "Yes, turaga. It has been wierd-strange like that before.""Then it is as I thought.... Here," he said, handing me an object wrapped in crumpled foil."You Are destened to be... A toa of two elements..." He said with sadness I do not understand to this day. What is he talking about?Then it dawned to me. I unwrapped the foil and I found... The toa stone! but why?As if reading my mind, The turaga said, "Because you were chosen by mata nui himself."That shocked me so much I froze, feeling as though I were beneath the waves of a Ko-Wahi lake."follow where the stone leads you. you can take-borrow kongu's kewa." Matau said in a deep voice.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Sep 06 2012 - 06:17 AM.

[Ganto]

Chapter Three... The Flight

"Kongu? Matau said I could quick-borrow your kewa, Can I?" I said to kongu.He was petting the kahu of the task force. He tossed me his flute. "Third song-chip. He'll quick-come to you.""Thanks." I replied. I walked to the launch pad and pressed in the chip. The keys lit. Two. Three. Four. One. Two. Three.The flute played in detail of the notes when I pressed the keys. Then I heard wings flapping. Kongu's Kewa landedwith no dificulties. I told the bird to fly and he soared above mata nui. Then something terrable happened. Just then the Rama hive unleashed millions of Nui rama. I tried to order the bird back to Le-koro, but it would not. I could not help them.

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I started to eat a protobar, an energy charged bar of protodermis, when I saw my destination. The toa stone flashed rappidly. The bird swooped down like a leaf. safely to the ground, I saw a pile of large fallen logs near me. I wint to sit on one to finish my protobar. then, the log vanished, causing me to fall and drop my protobar. then I realized: This is an illusion! I walked through a couple more logs when I tripped. Finding out that not all were fake. I grabbed a stick and felt my way thrue the logs to find a cave.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Sep 06 2012 - 06:20 AM.

[Ganto]

CHAPTER FOUR... THE CAVE.

The cave was damp from the humidity of Le-Koro, and was poorly lit by glowing cave plants. On the top of the cave, there was an inscription, That must mean something importaint... As I thought about the inscription of fear, I decided to walk and think at the same time.As I walked onward, something touched my foot. I thought it was nothing. But then I felt it again. and again! I freaked out and started to run as fast as I could.But I tripped on a rock, or... if it was a rock. I grabbed my lightstone and pleaded to mata nui when I saw what I did. Fikou bugs. everywhere.My worst fear."Mata Nui save me." I said in fear. The fikou bugs came closer and closer until my hand hit something, a button! A door opened to my right.Scared half to death, I rolled through the door. It shut with a slam. causing a fikou bug to get crushed in the shell. still nipping at me.My heartlight was flashing I was so scared. Then I looked up. and I saw the tunnel walls were glowing red hot. I must be close to Mt. Mangai. I thought.I ran down the path.

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I drew near to the end of the path when I saw lava streams. Then I saw something magnificent. A toa suva. Covered by an energy shield of sorts.I walked through it with ease. I was looking around when I saw something I wasn't expecting. five other matoran. They must be more of the chosen few."Vine-swinger, glad you could join us." a Ta-Matoran said. "We knew we were missing something!" a Po-matoran said.I looked at my toa stone to find that there was a crack in it and one side was turning a dark blue.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Sep 06 2012 - 06:21 AM.

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Chapter five...... The Elements.

"Others! look at your toa stones!" A Ga-Matoran said."Woa! Mine's Half Orange!" The Ta-matoran said."Mine has a grey to it now." said a Ko-Matoran.We all whispered around the room until a sudden stop. All of our toa stones glowed with a blinding light, They split in two, with might they smashed into the suva with great power. Then something came out in a blinding light from the suva! Then It zapped everyone in the area! I felt a sensation in my heartlight when six masks burst out of the suva and were fused with ours. Our bodies were filled with unimagenable power. Then I passed out.

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I awoke with a start. was it a dream? I thought. I looked at my hand. No. It wasn't. I got up to see how I worked. then I realized I was on Le-wahi again. I can save my friends! I ran through the jungle faster and faster. Then I saw something in the distance. A canister! Yet it was empty, I had to cheak it out. It had the word LEWA on it, and then I found out what it was. A toa canister. It was covered in seaweed. I saw footsteps going twards le-wahi. Lewa has come to save mata nui! We're saved! I ran to Le-koro to find that poor kongu was fending off Nui rama with a Ta-matoran throwing discs. Rama after Rama fell to the ground. One fell near me. It shook it's head and tried to lift off again, yet it couldn't. One wing was broken, I decided to help it, but for safety I made small reins for it out of vines. I put it on him and he started slashing at me, then I repaired his wing, and he lifted off, but I weighed him down. Then I had a crazy Idea. I sat on the rahi's back and it lifted off with ease. Look at me riding a nui rama! I'm insain! I flew off to the right and tward Ta-koro. Maby I can find the fire toa there.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Sep 06 2012 - 06:25 AM.

[Ganto]

Chapter six... Biomechinization

As I hovered over the lava falls, I saw a White and orange being, tapping at a dead Kofo-Jaga. I decided to investigate. As I got closer to the being, I realized it was a brother! I flew over and saw that his mask had also been fused with another. I believe it to be the mask of miru, as kongu's is, and a Matatu as Turaga Nuju, well... I think. I tied the Rama's hands to a rock, keeping him out of harm. "Brother! I bid you a great welcome to Ta-Wahi! Even though not my home anymore, I find the air... homely. Let us go up the volcanoe to find me a good place for a new hut!" He said with happyness. Which, for a former Ta-matoran, was oddly out of character. "Okay.... wait... what is your name?" I asked. "Garshkai, yours?" he answered. "uhhhhh.... Loganto." I replied. "Woa, where did you get that?" He asked as he pointed to my Rama. "My Nui Rama? long story-telling, no time." I said. "Why vineswinger? you already are waisting time, talking...."Then I saw it. A huge purple scar across his eye. Both of his eyes,a dark, dark, green. I have seen this before, a fikou once bit my mask and I was loopy for weeks. I started to walk backwards tward the rama, but Garshkai grabbed my arm and his hand got superhot. causing extreeme pain. I smacked his mask loose and untied my rama and I was about to takeoff off, but his eyes twiched red several times, each twich he said a small part of a sentance. "h.... e...lp......!" He wispered. Then I ran tward the sea, for the only cure for the poison was Protosalt, a substance in the water that repairs faster than anything. He kept chasing me to my destination, and when I got to the shore, I saw another canister! But first, the problem at hand. I ran as fast as I could toward that water. when I stopped, he passed me, and I tripped him into the salty shore water.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Sep 11 2012 - 04:11 PM.

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Chapter seven...Future seeing

He got up and smacked me in the face. "that's for dunking me! not cool!" he said with displeasure. then he stomped on my foot. "Ouch!" I said. "what was that for!?" I growled. "nothing, there was a hotu bug on your foot." I looked down and sure enough, there was a squashed hotu bug on my foot."that is very unsanitary, you know." said a female voice. I turned to see her. she was another toa. her colors were yellow and a dark blue. her mask was what looked like a picari and a rau."I am Agraua, who are you?" she asked."I am Loganto, and he is Garshkai." I replied."we should find the other toa.""Agreed." I replied to Garshkai."But wait, My people are in danger!" I shouted. "We must help them!"

"No need, the other toa are here, they will help them." Agraua replied.

"How do you know this?" I asked.

"I have the mask of future seeing."

 

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Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Feb 21 2013 - 10:19 PM.

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