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Toa Kopaka TJByrum

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http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7122Please read, review, and critique my story!It is about a team of Toa who have no idea who, where, or what they are. Once they get situated, they will go on a quest to seek the answers they need.Characters - MAY CONTAIN SPOILERSKutoro - A Toa of Ice, who wears the Kanohi Ataku, the Great Mask of Perception. Kutoro can control, manipulate, and even create ice and snow. His Kanohi Ataku is a Great Mask of Perception, allowing him to dodge projectiles and attacks as well as coordinate his movements with extreme precision.Unknown Toa of Stone - Temporary character. He was a Toa of Stone, and he wore a Kanohi that allowed him to blend in with the environment. Unfortunately, the Toa of Stone was shredded to pieces by a snowstorm called on by Kutoro.

"Not luck. It's what you do that makes you a hero."

-Toa Kopaka Nuva

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