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FFFC5: The Legend

FFFC5 A Canister Ashore Story? Poem I guess?

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#1 Offline Janus

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Posted Mar 26 2013 - 03:23 PM

A canister washed ashore

Bringing heroes to the fore

Now darkness must they endure

For now and forevermore

 

Creatures bound, encased in stone

Seek the heroes flesh and bone

Heroes no longer alone

Unseat the queens from their throne

 

Powerless, the heroes fall

United they conquer all

The sons heed their father’s call

Light shines, making shadows small

 

In the past memories lie

Once unknown now rise high

Yet darkness draws ever nigh

City lost, take to the sky.

 

Fallen now to savage lust

Their dreams have now become dust

Yet, overcome broken trust

They vanquish all the unjust

 

Journey now to places far

Receiving gifts from a star

Deep within the islands scar

Lurks a power from afar

 

Now plunge into depths below

To a world that warlords know

To the world’s heart must they go

And a life must they bestow

 

Seek the mask, where it lies

For answers take to the skies

Victory comes with surprise

God fallen, let darkness rise

 


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#2 Offline fishers64

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Posted Apr 05 2013 - 02:29 AM

Well, it's a shame this one hasn't gotten more attention, and not just because of the author's name. It's a simple poem that captures eight years of Bionicle well. Excellent work. 

 

But I do have some nitpicks :P :  

 

[color=rgb(40,40,40);font-family:helvetica, arial, sans-serif;font-size:14px;]Now darkness must they endure[/color]

For now and forevermore

 

You do realize the Toa did win in the end, right? I guess this is just to 2008, so it's somewhat justified. :shrugs:

 

Seek the heroes flesh and bone

 

I realize that this has something to do with the Bohrok, but I can't tell what. It's a little confusing, so perhaps better words could have been chosen.


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