I was looking through the BZP calendar, seeing who shared my Birthday, The 31st of October(As if that isn't scary enough). I looked at some ones profile who was born on EXACTLY the same day as me. I joined BZP on the 28th of June 2012. Their last active day was the 27th of June 2012. Mother of Atahkah!
SO I was walking the dogs earlier today. Becuase I lack vision on my right hand side, my headphones got cause onto a branch and my Ipod went flying into the water. Im so annoyed right now
For the little of you that have been following my Bionicle epic I have some news about it. I am going to totally get rid of every thing that has been done. Granted there isn't much but I feel like this needs to be done. I wouldn't say what I have done is bad. i have some very good ideas but it is going to take time to put them on paper. I want to actually take pride in my work, rather than just throwing something together for the sake of the story getting out there. The basis of the plot will be
Got to sleep in the same high bed that I broke my wrist by falling through yesterday. Granted, I fell trough it because it wasn't complete, and there is a 99.99999999999999999999999999999999% every thing will be fine. Still terrified though.
3 The transformation had left everyone exhausted. They were out in the open in the snowy Ko-Metru forests. They sky was pitch black and the only light in miles was the camp fire the Toa had set up. Vakama used his elemental energy to light it. Every one cheered him on. It was a nice moment for him. “I don’t think its best we go home just yet” Said Nokama. “It’s late and we’re all tired. We’ll head out early tomorrow and tell the Turaga” “What makes you think we should tell Dume” said Vakam
Chapter 3. The news was being talked about all over Onu Metru. However Matoran Whenua who was check listing Floor 232 in the archives was totally oblivious to it. “Tarakava? Check. Bog leech? Check. Energy Hou…” Whenua looked over at the cage when the Energy Hound was meant to be. Nothing was there. There seemed to be no forced entry though. Whenua walked cautiously over too it, whilst being careful not to make a sound. At a closer inspection, he realised that the door had been left open. He wa
I recently started a new epic called Colony. As some of you may know, my main epic before the was We are Metru, which is turning out okay. The thing is with WaM, is that there is a lot of story to be told, and 6 main characters stories to follow as well. For a rookie writer like me, that is way to much atm. I also put a lot of work into it, so when a review quite rightly criticizes it, it hurts a lot more that is should. The WaM will always be my baby, which is why I want it to be "perfect". I r
I actually just wanted to thank the whole of BZP. I joined here only a few weeks ago now, but honestly it has been great. I hope to stay here for many years to come and to shed a single year as it is one day shut down. I have been a Bionicle fan since I was just a little kid. I remember getting it into my head when I was about 7 that BZP was racist becuase it sounded so similar to BNP hahaha. You are a really great community, who is just all out friendly.and a pleasure to be around. I am really
I am just about to put the first three chapters onto my blog. I made a few tweaks to my sample from chapter 1 as well. I think I got every typo as grammar mistake. Hope you enjoy. Please read and respond if you have the time. Removed. -Do not bypass the filter. -Kohaku
Endless sands. No ocean is heard. No clouds above. Rocks climb high, soaring into the endless blue. Then you came. Your cloak as black as night. This was once your home. Does it scar you to look at it. I’ll take your hand if you take mine. And we walk out from sand to flame.
As you can see in some of the earlier posts on my blog, I have been working on an epic. You can also see that the revamped chapter 3 hasnt been posted yet. The sole reason for this is becuase I have been lazy. I seemed to have lost the passion for it for a few weeks but I can assure you, things seem to be back at full productivity. However, you probably wont see chapter 3 for a while because I am probably going to try to get well into the book before I post it again. Well any way. That was jus
2 They walked down the long dark spiral staircase. Matau wondered if it would ever end; it was impossible to see to the bottom. He didn’t really know if that was because it was so dark or if it was because it was so deep. He wondered why Toa Lhikan had summoned them to this place. There was nothing special about him. He looked at Nokama but her eyes didn’t meet his. He dropped his head in sadness. From what he had seen of her, he really liked her. Sure, there had been other Ga-Matoran that
2 They walked down the long dark spiral stair case. Matau wondered if it would ever end. It was impossible to see to the bottom. He didn’t really know if that was because it was so dark or if it was because it was so deep. He wondered why Toa Lhikan had summoned them to this place. There was nothing special about him. He looked at Nokama but her eyes didn’t meet his. He dropped his head in sadness. From what he had seen of her, he really liked her. Sure, there had been other Ga-Matoran tha
Okay, so I will admit, its been a while since I have had one, but this one was horrible. For the past week or so, my dreams have been really vivid. They have been really weird, but this tops it all. I say what I can remember. I was in my old house. For some reason my crush was downstairs arguing with my sister(For some reason they had be friends in this dream, even though they have never met) I cant remember to much, but I remember I heard shouting(They were now in the upstairs bathroom(No
1 Silence. There was nothing. Nothing but silence. Not even the birds made a sound as they flew by. Vakama watched as Toa Lhikan’s lifeless body hit the floor. He watched as the trembling little Po-Matoran withdrew his knife from its back of the Toa’s head. The crowd didn’t cheer. The music didn’t play. There was nothing. Noting but silence. Turaga Dume stood at the balcony of the coliseum. Around him, he saw the thousands of Matoran in their seats, shocked at what they had just witne
So after a review for the first chapter I am nearly done re-vamping it. I think there are some significant improvements. I will copy pasta these into the old ones. Thanks for reading
I re-vamped my first two chapters. I have changed them really quite drastically and have added a lot. As always I'm sorry for spelling and grammar mistakes. For some reasons there are some that I never spot first times around. Its stupid. Ill end up missing out entire words. I think I am getting better a spotting them now though. One word I used in there "Demon" is put in there in a non-religion basis. I;m really not sure if it would fit. I think the word Demon has moved on from Satan's minions
