(Because I can't think of a better title)
So I turned in that story and the teacher loved it. However, he suggested I change the ending since it reminded him of I, Robot. The movie.
Beh.
How am I supposed to kill a depressed robot now?
Jumping out the window with the words 'Cogito Ergo Sum' written on his computer screen was perfect.
NOW HOW DOES HE DIE?!
Stupid... uh... people involved with that movie.
We also did a peer review thingy where we swapped stories and... well, reviewed them.
This one girl's story wasn't that bad. In fact, it was very well written and clear. But that's not the point. It's the other person's story that I want to talk about.
It was a story of him going back in time to save JFK from being shot. Not well written to be honest. Very simplistic view of time travel, too.
But I like to think about time paradoxes in my spare time so I may be a little ahead of people my own age.
Not to say his time travel adventure is impossible, but I doubt he realizes that in order for it to work, he has to take alternate universes into account.
Also, his car was a flying time machine. I don't know much anything about cars so I don't know if the one he mentioned in his story was a nice car or not, but since he made himself the hero of the story and an American hero, I wouldn't doubt it.
He even referenced Back to the Future when describing his time traveling car.
It kinda made me sad.
I wanted to say something else here but I forgot. Oh well.
6 Comments
Recommended Comments