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GAY AS HECK

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(Because I can't think of a better title)

 

So I turned in that story and the teacher loved it. However, he suggested I change the ending since it reminded him of I, Robot. The movie.

 

Beh.

 

How am I supposed to kill a depressed robot now?

Jumping out the window with the words 'Cogito Ergo Sum' written on his computer screen was perfect.

NOW HOW DOES HE DIE?!

 

Stupid... uh... people involved with that movie.

 

We also did a peer review thingy where we swapped stories and... well, reviewed them.

This one girl's story wasn't that bad. In fact, it was very well written and clear. But that's not the point. It's the other person's story that I want to talk about.

 

It was a story of him going back in time to save JFK from being shot. Not well written to be honest. Very simplistic view of time travel, too.

But I like to think about time paradoxes in my spare time so I may be a little ahead of people my own age.

Not to say his time travel adventure is impossible, but I doubt he realizes that in order for it to work, he has to take alternate universes into account.

 

Also, his car was a flying time machine. I don't know much anything about cars so I don't know if the one he mentioned in his story was a nice car or not, but since he made himself the hero of the story and an American hero, I wouldn't doubt it.

He even referenced Back to the Future when describing his time traveling car.

 

It kinda made me sad.

 

 

 

 

I wanted to say something else here but I forgot. Oh well.

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In a tragic and sad state of affairs, it turns out there are tons of ways to kill oneself in an attention-getting manner. I'm sure you can find something.

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What if it breaks down one day while on the job, and gets made fun of by other people. Until some kind person who is a wealthy businessman shows up and takes pity on it. So he buys the robot from the previous owner, fixes him and makes him his honored servant/butler.

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He uploads a virus into himself, and descends into robot madness.

It needs to be very noticeable and, what DV said, attention-grabbing. After all, he's trying to make the point that he is, despite what everyone else believes, alive, and what better way to show that than to willingly take it all away.

 

What if it breaks down one day while on the job, and gets made fun of by other people. Until some kind person who is a wealthy businessman shows up and takes pity on it. So he buys the robot from the previous owner, fixes him and makes him his honored servant/butler.

Not bad, but it wouldn't work under the circumstances of the story.

You see, the robot works for the largest and most wealthiest corporation in the world, Promethean Dynamics. In fact, most of the workers for the company are robots. They're merely seen as nothing more than mindless automatons. Just tools. To make fun of one would be like making fun of a toaster because it only toasts one side of the bread. :P

It wouldn't be hard writing in a sympathetic person, but one richer than this massive multinational corporation? =/

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He uploads a virus into himself, and descends into robot madness.
It needs to be very noticeable and, what DV said, attention-grabbing. After all, he's trying to make the point that he is, despite what everyone else believes, alive, and what better way to show that than to willingly take it all away.
What if it breaks down one day while on the job, and gets made fun of by other people. Until some kind person who is a wealthy businessman shows up and takes pity on it. So he buys the robot from the previous owner, fixes him and makes him his honored servant/butler.
Not bad, but it wouldn't work under the circumstances of the story.You see, the robot works for the largest and most wealthiest corporation in the world, Promethean Dynamics. In fact, most of the workers for the company are robots. They're merely seen as nothing more than mindless automatons. Just tools. To make fun of one would be like making fun of a toaster because it only toasts one side of the bread. :PIt wouldn't be hard writing in a sympathetic person, but one richer than this massive multinational corporation? =/

 

Oh, ok. Now I understand. I wasn't familiar at all with Promethean Dynamics .

I come across different kinds sci-fi, somewhere in there is where the "make fun" part comes from.

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He uploads a virus into himself, and descends into robot madness.
It needs to be very noticeable and, what DV said, attention-grabbing. After all, he's trying to make the point that he is, despite what everyone else believes, alive, and what better way to show that than to willingly take it all away.
What if it breaks down one day while on the job, and gets made fun of by other people. Until some kind person who is a wealthy businessman shows up and takes pity on it. So he buys the robot from the previous owner, fixes him and makes him his honored servant/butler.
Not bad, but it wouldn't work under the circumstances of the story.You see, the robot works for the largest and most wealthiest corporation in the world, Promethean Dynamics. In fact, most of the workers for the company are robots. They're merely seen as nothing more than mindless automatons. Just tools. To make fun of one would be like making fun of a toaster because it only toasts one side of the bread. :PIt wouldn't be hard writing in a sympathetic person, but one richer than this massive multinational corporation? =/
Oh, ok. Now I understand. I wasn't familiar at all with Promethean Dynamics .I come across different kinds sci-fi, somewhere in there is where the "make fun" part comes from.

 

Well I didn't give you enough information to start with anyways. :P

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