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Improve This M O C!


ChocolateFrogs

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Well, I hope to bring this guy to my event on Saturday, but I need some advice.

 

This MOC isn't the best, but I like him and want to display him. But he needs work before I'll reveal him to the BBC (if I ever do) so I want your advice on improving him. I already made the green piraka legs hordika, and experimented with a metruan body instead of the claws and vissie feet. But I'm not too happy with him, so I might just scrap him.

 

Any tips?

 

-CF :usa:

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Try to fill in the holes in the shoulders, and perhaps integrate the Inika heads a tad better. I like how versatile the Inika heads can be, and it's showing here, but it could be better, IMO.

 

And I'd scrap that torso. I'm just not feelin' it. Scrap the vissie feet, perhaps, then flesh it out some on the sides to cover up some of the Metruan limbs.

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I think the best thing you do to it is remove all the dark green pieces. It'd look a lot better if you only used white and lime green. Other than that, the only thing that really needs fixing is Ehlek's spike-thingy, since it doesn't look too good there. And it messed up the color scheme.

 

 

Hope that helped,

 

:Venomess:

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I think the best thing you do to it is remove all the dark green pieces. It'd look a lot better if you only used white and lime green. Other than that, the only thing that really needs fixing is Ehlek's spike-thingy, since it doesn't look too good there. And it messed up the color scheme.

 

 

Hope that helped,

 

:Venomess:

I agree with everthing Venomess said but I would like to add a few points of my own.

I think some custome weapons are in order. Also if you keep the dark green I'd change the dark green arm to a white one, and I'd also bulk up the legs a tiny bit. :)

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thanks guys! This is going to help.

 

My main concern is the body, I'm pretty content with the legs and arms (sorry if I didn't make that clear). We'll see where I go from there. I'll probably do some more building of a body.

 

thanx!

 

-CF

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I no like the feet.

 

-Omi

So what would you suggest be used instead?

 

Thanks Uchiha for the pic. I'll see what I can do (besides the masks on the shoulders. 1) I don't have Kongu. 2) That would defeat the purpose of using the skulls like that

But I also had the idea of switching colors around like that--the opposites, I mean.

 

-CF

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I was thinking of Pridak feet too!

 

I doubt I'll bring this guy (except I do need another bad guy to fight a good guy) but this help will still imrpove the MOC. If I can throw a better body together (but just throwing something together is never the best...) maybe I'll bring him.

 

-CF

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Hmm, but you can barely tell it's there! And it ruins the idea of using the piraka arms on the arms.

(thanks, though. Any comments from you are always welcome BtB)

Again, another reason why I should just scrap it.

 

-CF

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