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A Preview Of Sorts


ToM Dracone

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Turaga Vakama walked forward, clutching the Mask of Light. The only sounds were the sigh of the sea and the clunk of his staff. He could feel the eyes of the Toa Nuva, other Turaga, and two Matoran following him.

 

In the center of the wide balcony where they stood was the symbol of Mata Nui, etched into the stone within two concentric circles. It was just as he remembered. The wind of a thousand years had done nothing to it, even though the railing had crumbled further and the rest of the stone had lost its previous sheen.

 

He beckoned to the silent group.

 

“Jala, Hahli, come here.”

 

 

~ ToM

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Been writing again ToM? Looking good, I always liked how you captured the atmosphere of your stories. Lots of detailed descriptions of your character surroundings.

 

Ill be looking for more.

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Sounds good, ToM. Though wouldn't Jala's name have changed to Jaller by that point?

 

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Not to mention the Hali to Hahli change...

 

edit: Anyway, nice preview. Very descriptive, and I realise that the quote marks are pointing inwards.

 

Did you type it in Microsoft word before you posted it?.

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