Excellent job, Lady K. I can see that you really put your heart into your story, and the results were awesome.

-Ax-

Wow, a new short story from Lady K

I'll read it, but review later once I review Koji's since I'm very busy with homework XD

Great story.

It really does amaze me how people can have sufficient talent to write up even short stories such as yours. I can imagine it requires practice, and I'd never be able to do anything even remotely as good as some of what I've seen around here, despite my small penchant for writing. So yes, wonderful job on that. That's the first story of yours I've read, and now that I've read it, I assure you it won't be the last.

At last! But why didn't you keep the name "Pasta?"

lol j/k

Glad to see it's finally up. I'll read it now, and you can expect a review soon.

Hurray!!!

*runs to read it*

Lady Ranna

Very good story, very sad, but very good.

I never read one of your stories before, but after reading this one, I think it's the best story I've ever read on BZP.

Great job!

-Jordboy1