I'm not sure what you can do, the colors you chose are hard.

The torso does need green though.

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I know, and I COULD add Mata green, but that would kinda break the colour scheme.

Torso: Make it more streamlined. Make the base one color and the body the other.

Legs: Scrap them. (sorry about what you said without revamping them, but they're pretty bad), The way they attach looks horrid. Now devise a bulkier but still streamlined leg. Keep the color balance. Do what I sadi to do with the torso.

Hope this helps!

That's great, but what does steamlined mean?!

Streamlined means that it will cut through fluid better. Like a cube, isn't streamlined. A cone is.

Great that I know what that means.

NOT!

Feel free ot call me stupid, but I do not get anything of it. I actually used system and the Mata feet to make the body just a little more smooth.

And for the legs, I can see no other kind of leg fitting him.

Actually smooth is also being streamlined.

Ill do what I can.

First of all, I would make the torso less wide, meaning you need to ditch the tires. Next, work on the color layering. Which ever parts you have more of in red or green, use for the body, then layer on top of that with the other color. That system part is too blocky on the top of the chest, the ones under it work because they are in the right position, do you have any ones with more of a rounded shape? The wrist articulation looks very limited, fix. The head and upper arms look alright. The legs work but they are too wide at the hips.

Wow, I typed up quite a bit there.

That's alright CzaR. Besides, the mroe you write, the more helpful it is.

And Pulsar, I don't see where it isn't smooth. Might be the point where the Mata foot and the (++) piece meets...

Anyway, I have revamped him a little now. Before the posts of you.

I have given him more black and green, so I tried to belance the colours a little more, though I guess I should give the arms some more black now.

If I removed that system part on the chest, the chest would be too flat.

I can't help the hips without blocking the movement.

That's alright CzaR. Besides, the mroe you write, the more helpful it is.

And Pulsar, I don't see where it isn't smooth. Might be the point where the Mata foot and the (++) piece meets...

 

Anyway, I have revamped him a little now. Before the posts of you.

 

I have given him more black and green, so I tried to belance the colours a little more, though I guess I should give the arms some more black now.

If I removed that system part on the chest, the chest would be too flat.

I can't help the hips without blocking the movement.

 

-Saoerann

Much better, but the legs still need bulking.

I know what you mean with the legs. The don't really match the arms.

Maybe I should use Vahki there...

I know what you mean with the legs. The don't really match the arms.

Maybe I should use Vahki there...

 

-Saoerann

Good idea.