Give us an example on what could of happened better than the battles. And I don't see any boring spots where Paonlini has run out of ideas.

And sorry you got spoiled, but hey, you should be careful when looking in the back of the book. I usualy don't, cause they often have spoilers at the end. An example would be like "What happens now that ___ knows about ___? Will he ever defeat ___? Find out in book __!". It ain't Paolini's fault you did that.

Also, if Paonlini doesn't give us enough battles, then the series would be very boring.

Btw, an actual review is describing what you like and dislike about the book, and why, in a civilized manner. What you are doing is bashing and flaming the author and his books.

Thanks for your advice Vaka, I have decided to re-do it---TTTE

Give us an example on what could of happened better than the battles. And I don't see any boring spots where Paonlini has run out of ideas.

 

And sorry you got spoiled, but hey, you should be careful when looking in the back of the book. I usualy don't, cause they often have spoilers at the end. An example would be like "What happens now that ___ knows about ___? Will he ever defeat ___? Find out in book __!". It ain't Paolini's fault you did that.

 

Also, if Paonlini doesn't give us enough battles, then the series would be very boring.

 

Btw, an actual review is describing what you like and dislike about the book, and why, in a civilized manner. What you are doing is bashing and flaming the author and his books.

I know, I know, I'll edit it, but it was late, I was frustrated over, umm, something.

I'll edit it later.