Those are cool. Everything's great, but the wings on Hahli Mahri (that is her in the 2nd one, right?) are a bit too bat-like, IMO.

-Nuju Metru

Pretty good! The head/face of the second one is very good and resembles Hahli Mahri quite well.

And like Nuju Metru said, here wings are a bit bat-like on the second one, but I don't mind them much.

Also, if you are not sure if the 3rd drawing is okay or not, you could PM a staff and ask for his/her approval. ;P

Is the 3rd one on DA?

Cause we didn't see anything wrong with the ones you've posted there

~The Makuta collectively known as Ynot~

Very good! I personally like the first one; realistic cloth-thing.

Nice work! You're human stuff (and the anatomy) is improving a lot, I like the style in this too.

Though I would suggest not to make breasts that large-- though you at least are taking the right approach to draw them. Cause of the clothes and stuff, they don't really 'hang' down; but rather shading better defines them. (Lol, funky subject-- PM me if you want to talk about this more. xD)

Why? Is it a little bloody?

That first one looks like an elf. :-)

Whats wrong with the third?

Why? Is it a little bloody?

Nope, it ain't bloody at all, but... it has a story, and I dunno... it could be a little... freaky.

Thanks to all of you for critism, comments and... merry soon-to-come Christmas to you all.