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Taka Nuvia

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Why?

What made you

act this way?

What made you grow

so cold?

 

So hard, so mean.

I've never seen

you that way.

oh why, just why?

 

Was it something I said

or did not say?

Something I forgot,

something I did not?

 

I wake up

in the middle of the night

wondering if

my decisions were right.

 

What made you so hard,

so cold.

If I'd been told before,

would I have been to late,

would there be more?

 

~~~~~

 

Yes, I am worried. I know, it's not my best poem. I apologise, I am sorry.

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Wow, I <3 that. It may not be the best poetic form, but I can vividly remember thinking things like that without words, and having no words to go with it.

 

I love that kind of writing.

 

Memoria.

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