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Aanchir

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Lovely writing here; very poetic. I take it you wrote this? The artwork at the top made me think it was a lyrics entry (reminded me of an album cover), but you only very rarely see prose as lyrics, so I'm going to assume it's creative writing on your part. Is this part of something, or just a stand-alone (whatever-you-call-it, not a soliloquy, but the same type of thing only in someone's head)? It's practically got enough content to hold its own as a first-person short story.

Velox

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If you haven't posted it on the forums, do so, and add it to your library. ^^

 

You never fail to amaze me, Lady K.

 

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Lady Kopaka

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Lovely writing here; very poetic. I take it you wrote this? The artwork at the top made me think it was a lyrics entry (reminded me of an album cover), but you only very rarely see prose as lyrics, so I'm going to assume it's creative writing on your part. Is this part of something, or just a stand-alone (whatever-you-call-it, not a soliloquy, but the same type of thing only in someone's head)? It's practically got enough content to hold its own as a first-person short story.

I wrote it. Whenever I post something I did in my blog, I add that art on the top of it all. And also, I think this is considered second person.

 

If you haven't posted it on the forums, do so, and add it to your library. ^^

I should? It's related to Glitch in the System sort of (but it can be taken as original too), but I wasn't sure if it was considered Bionicle themed enough, and I'm not much of a fan of posting anything in COT.

Velox

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Eh, I'd say it's fine. I mean, "Solus" isn't very BIONICLE-y, but I based it off of something BIONICLE, so I posted it in SSs.

 

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Lady Kopaka

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Changed my mind. Decided to edit and link to the topic, rather than close the entry. Darn you Velox and confusing my poor, blonde self.

Velox

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XD

 

But it's so fun to confuse people!

 

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Lady Kopaka

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It should be illegal to confuse people like me. You honestly do not realize the danger; my brain could asplode or something.

Velox

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It should be illegal to confuse people like me. You honestly do not realize the danger; my brain could asplode or something.

 

But... but...

 

Then we wouldn't have the awesomeness of Lady K. Just an empty Lady K's head. D:

 

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Aanchir

Posted

Lovely writing here; very poetic. I take it you wrote this? The artwork at the top made me think it was a lyrics entry (reminded me of an album cover), but you only very rarely see prose as lyrics, so I'm going to assume it's creative writing on your part. Is this part of something, or just a stand-alone (whatever-you-call-it, not a soliloquy, but the same type of thing only in someone's head)? It's practically got enough content to hold its own as a first-person short story.

I wrote it. Whenever I post something I did in my blog, I add that art on the top of it all. And also, I think this is considered second person.

Darnit... there's a reason I hate how you can't see the entry or previous comments when you make a blog comment.

 

Yeah, you're right, second person. Which is possibly even more impressive, because you almost never see second person used exclusively for anything so meaningful (at least not of this length).

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