It's probably too far along to say that dual golds, or the gray and black underneath, aren't so lovely. But the rest is quite so. =3

Please make sure you check the height - we don't want a good entry to be DQ'd for being too tall.

It's probably too far along to say that dual golds, or the gray and black underneath, aren't so lovely. But the rest is quite so. =3

 

Please make sure you check the height - we don't want a good entry to be DQ'd for being too tall.

Well, the mixed gold I sorta have to do if I want him to have more than about five gold pieces. The black/gray thing I will try to fix if I can, but I'm not sure that I have those grey bits in black. :/

As for height, he's under a foot.

-Nuju Metru

I don't know, those two Inika armors on the thighs just make him seem fat. :\

White fingers and better lighting kthnxbai.

~B~

*clapclapclap*

Yes, I'm glad I actually have some real competition now.

Unless ToM enters, then we're all screwed.

BTW, my moc is dangerously close to the height limit as well. 11 and a half inches. B)

~U_K~

It's probably just the lighting, but it looks like you have too much gold. If you could take some pictures in a whiter light it would help.

Good job: he looks great!

He looks awesome!

White fingers and better lighting kthnxbai.

 

~B~

Yeah, that. I probably can find some other flaws later, but with being sick, half-asleep, and not really looking all that closely, those two things are what stand out.

Okay, a couple other things I noticed:

Mixed golds look weird. I don't know if it's the lighting, but the end of the staff-thing looks like it's dark gold. I'd switch that to the bright gold [since those chronicler staffs come in both golds], and make everything else bright gold except the head, as you obviously can't. Not sure if that would help, but it seems like it would.

Next would be the lower arms. Slightly too thin, and look out of place with the hole. I'd fill that up with system pieces or something, or else go with something else -- it'd look much better that way.

White fingers and better lighting kthnxbai.

 

~B~

I have no white fingers. And I already said (for the second entry in a row, yeesh) that I wasn't going for pic quality, and that the artificial lighting sucks. I know that. No need to tell me.

White fingers and better lighting kthnxbai.

 

~B~

Yeah, that. I probably can find some other flaws later, but with being sick, half-asleep, and not really looking all that closely, those two things are what stand out.

 

Okay, a couple other things I noticed:

 

Mixed golds look weird. I don't know if it's the lighting, but the end of the staff-thing looks like it's dark gold. I'd switch that to the bright gold [since those chronicler staffs come in both golds], and make everything else bright gold except the head, as you obviously can't. Not sure if that would help, but it seems like it would.

 

Next would be the lower arms. Slightly too thin, and look out of place with the hole. I'd fill that up with system pieces or something, or else go with something else -- it'd look much better that way.

Mixed gold is staying. Live with it. Because I have very little old gold and that's the color my Kraakhan is in. Making everything but the head new gold would look positively terrible.

I'll fill them up with system parts.

-Nuju Metru