Awesome to know you're still working on it!

Good to see some more of that story. This is the last part you sent me for beta-reading, wasn´t it?

You´ve changed the role of Saira, haven´t you? I remember her appearance being different, more weak/old-ish, and therefore more immortally powerful. To be honest, I preferred her like that, although this isn´t bad, either.

Also - forgive me for not posting this in the review topic - only two things. One, being grammar purely, probably don´t even count. When Morrillier said 'What is 'us'?', I think it should be more appropriate using the phrase 'What are 'We'?', since 'We' was the word Taka used.

The other is that it was too short. I could have the whole text on my screen at the same time. So length, Taka, length. Put on some more of the deep, emotionally descriptions you´re proving yourself so talented at. =)

-MOSM-

I love it, I like the entire saga

It's "nice" to see that Saira hasn't changed her mind about Taka Nuvia after so many years.

Taka Nuvia succumbed to the dark side!